Today's episode:
"but I still love you, hun and nothing can change that fact, and still I hate you too…." he said. "she looked at him, through teary eyes. "why, cant you leave me alone, they say if you love someone you don't want to hurt them, if u really loved me you wouldn't hurt me." "oh shut up tanya, none of that emotional drama works on me." "your so mean, I hate you," she screamed at him. "oh don't worry, you will love me soon." he said and walked away. Tanya slid down the walls, as tears came down her eyes, oh how she wished this never happened.
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"tanya, is this the time to come home, you dumbo its 1 in the morning, you know how worried I was, you cant do that to me and gauri." Tanya looked at her and said, "im sorry kripa im sorry gauri….its just that he is back, and he wants revenge, but all I did was break up with him, I didn't know he was in love with me.." kripa looked at her in shock, "tanya tell me what happened, and that too exact…understood!" tanya tells her everything, kripa stares in shock, and finally says, "I wont let him near you at all, I promise, he wont touch you at all. "I promise that too," gauri said.
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He walked to his balcony, and stared at the stars, he looked around and thought, when will I be able to say I love you to aaliya. I love you aaliya, and that too a lot, your one smile makes me crazy, your tears rips my heart apart, I live only for you, but how do I tell you that I love you so much, that my life is just for you, how?" "I can help you with that prithivi!" Prithivi turned around shocked because someone heard him, but then smiled, "kiran, tum yahaan…ahhh I missed you so much, he picked her up and spun her around, gosh I love you so much for coming back." "She smiled at him, and laughed…"but I thought you loved aaliya," and hit his head playfully. Prithivi looked at her and blushed, "aww my cousin blushes I didn't know that…anyways here is how I will help you say I love you to Aaliya bhabhi" Prithivi looked at her happy and then blushed at the word bhabhi.
(Kiran is a new character and is played by KiRan…E>G<3, she is such a cute friend that I decided on adding her to my ff)
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Angad walked through the corridors looking for Tanya hoping to apologize, he couldn't believe he trusted anjali over his girlfriend. He looked here and there until he finally saw her, she was wearing a blue pajami suit today, she looked like an angel from heaven he thought. He went towards her to talk, but she walked away before he could get to her. He sighed and walked away.
later on that day, angad finally catches up with tanya in the canteen. he goes up to her and says, "tanya, tanya please listen to me i didnt mean all those rude stuff i said...im sorry but i was under a misconception that you cheated me." Tanya turned around and looked at him, she didnt care what he said now, he should have trusted her most importantly come up to her and asked but no. She finally says, "you know what angad, it doesnt matter, we are through, there is no point of you asking for forgiveness..." anger rose to the tip of her nose, as she recalled the past, and finally walked away. everyone in the canteen watched, surprised to the fact that no one had talked to angad like that, but did she have the right to since none of them ever listened to the truth?
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"prithivi, you ready, come one lets get to school and start out plan..." "kiran, thank you so much lekin ...actually do you think this will work," said prithivi. "im sure it will work, im positive, now come on..." Prithivi walked through the long hallways with kiran and there arms locked together. Aaliya walked up to prithivi to say something but the moment she noticed the arms locked, she burned with jealousy, looked at prithivi and said, "um never mind....i will talk to you later when SHE isnt around." and walked away. Kiran looked at prithivi and winked, her plan was beginning to work, soon enough prithivi and aaliya would be one.
Josh tagged along a very unhappy angad, he looked at him and said, "dude cheer up, im sure she will forgive us as time goes by, come on now we didnt trust her it hurt her a lot and especially when u didnt trust her, give her some time, eh?" angad looked at prithivi, and said, "thanx man i needed that, anyways im tired, lets go home, i dont wanna be here." "sure."
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"now you know what to do, right, all you have to do is go and make another misunderstanding between tanya and her friends. it is the only way to get her alone and then begin with my revenge." "of course ..., as you say, i will do it." "oh and anjali, ....actually never mind, just do this soon, okay i need to get over with it and that too fast." "of course darling." the man turned around you see him dressed in all black, and black shades. He takes his shades off, you see his eyes, his lips and then you see his entire face...
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eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
sorry for not posting the part my stupid little sister wouldnt get off the laptop, so i will post first thing in the morning and it will be super duper long, i promise
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
thanx hun and guys i will be continuing today
Sabrina @sabrinaa.
+ 4
16 years ago
ok will deffi. check it out.. and good luck in it!
and hope you feel better sweety!
and i wish to see more parts in this fanfic!!
really great parts!
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
hello my fellow readers, thank you so much for enjoying PYAAR KYA HULCHUL HAI, and well i wanted to let you know that i am helping write another ff, so if u enjoy my writing, please check out jab dil churaye koi, which is being written about ak, and the authors are Anam ali (my di), memze (shaz) and mimi_rani (me) we hope you will enjoy this ff Mimi_Rani39314.6880324074
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
NOTE
thanx everyone for bearing with me, and my depression, i feel a bit better today, i might continue today or tomorrow it depends if i feel a bit more better, thanx again to all my readers
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
thanx kiran, i really needed that...dont worry i will update soon, you take care
Jennifer Mall @kIrAn...E>GA<3
16 years ago
awww, we understand completely...i dont kno her but im sure she knows she had our sympathies. ill be praying for her and her family to pull through the loss....
i still hope u update dis soon! btw, i hope u get unDEPRESSED soon....
GA ❤️
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
Note -
guys i am not updating today, someone here at I-F who i see as my older sister has lost her brother due to an heart attack, i am too depressed to write today, i hope you all understand, and if you know her plz help her through this emotional time at sp, her username is ramas, and everyone knows her as raksha di, plz pay your respects if you know her...and help her through this emotional period
xoxsubhaxox @xoxsubhaxox
16 years ago
omg!! ...gosh!! wayy too much suspense!!! im dying here!!!...plzzzzz cont sooon!!
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
Promo - "...., i love you!" he yelled as she walked across the gym in anger. She stopped dead in her tracks turned around, tears ran down her eyes, her anger melted in a flash of seconds. she ran into his arms crying "i love you,....i love you too! lekin what the heck was that all about for ignoring me for four months, you idiot!" "im sorry hun, but it was the only way to make you so i love you and it was all because of her." "i hate you," she said hitting him playfully on his arms and chest finally saying "i love you, i love you, you promise you wont ever leave me?" "i promise, i love you too!" and kissed her forehead lightly WHAT HAPPENED, WHO SAID YES, IS THAT MISHTI, KRIPA, TANYA, AALIYA, KIRAN, WHO IS THE GUY ZAIB, ANGAD, PRITHIVI, JOSH...WHO OR THE BAD GUY? DID HE FINALLY MAKE TANYA SAY I LOVE YOU? FIND OUT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER Mimi_Rani39313.5162731481