Chapter 11: LAST PART:
Angad rushed into the mansion looking for kripa frantically here and there. When suddenly he heard someone clapping from upstairs, he turned around with fury clearly written on his face, his hands turned into fists as he saw who was trying to harm his kripa. "prithivi, what the **** you ****** ******, where the hell is my kripa, she is my wife and you cant do anything about you ****** *****! Kripaaaaaaaaaaaaa! where are you, main aa gaya hoon pareshaan maat ho, tumhara angad aa gaya hai!" prithivi looked at angad with the same fury, "shut up angad, kripa sirf meri hai, toh kya hua agar osihe ki shaadi tumse ho chuke hai kya farak padtha hai, lekin aaj tumhe maare ke main kripa se shaadi karoonga aur tumhare bache ko maar daaloonga!" Angad ran up the stairs with so much anger that he grabbed prithivi and knocked him in the face. prithivi reacted by hitting him back, and grabbed a knife cutting angad's arm. prithivi grabbed the knife again and rushed himself in stabbing angad when angad caught the knife from the blade, blood ran down his hand as he kicked prithivi in the face. After ten minutes of continuous fighting nishant ran through the doors with kripa, he told her to get into the jeep and stay there away from prithivi. nishant ran back in and stopped angad from killing prithivi. he broke them two apart when suddenly prithivi popped a gun out and shot......AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Kripa ran back into the house as soon as she heard the gun shot, fear and panic took over her as she thought something had happened to her angad. her eyes closed in fear, and she opened them to find her angad in front of her covered in blood, in a ripped t-shirt and blood coming down his cheek. "angadd!" kripa hugged him crying her heart out as angad did the same. kripa let go of angad and said, "angad yeh sab, aur prithivi kahaa hai aur woh goli ki awaaz kahaa se aaye....?" angad put his finger on her lip and turned her around to find prithivi dead, and nishant standing next to him smiling. apparently when prithivi was about to shoot angad, nishant popped his gun out and shot him in the head before prithivi even pressed the trigger.
5 YEARS LATER:
"Angad, suhaan aur anu kahaa hai, yeh dhono bhi naa bilkul tum peh gaye hai, lekin dekh te meri thara....!" angad laughed, "true jaan, lekin yeh bache hum dhono ke hai, aur woh dekho so gaye hai bed peh ab chalo hum bhi thoraa sa kehlte hai!" he winked at her as she blushed furiously and hit him in the stomach walking off. She walked into the bedroom and was stepping into the washroom when Angad grabbed her arm and spun her around. He began kissing her down the side of her neck as she groaned with passion. angad looked at kripa with love and long in his eyes, he kissed her so passionately that kripa began replying by letting their tongues meet. angad carried her to the bed and made love to her. Slowly slowly the screen becames dark and rises to the moon reflecting their love for each other when.......! "knock knock knock knock, mama daddy hum aap dono ke saat sonha chaate hai!" angad groaned while kripa laughed and told him to let go. "actually kripa yeh bache bilkul tum peh gaye hai har baar kabab mein haddi baan jaate hai yeh bache bilkul tumhare hai!" kripa looked at him and hit him with the pillow, got up and opened the door letting the kids in. Kripa layed them to sleep and smiled at them when suddenly kripa felt dizzy and had the urge to throw up! kripa quickly got up and ran into the bathroom throwing up while angad stood shocked, and finally grinned. kripa came back and blushed when angad said to suhaan and anu, "guess what kids, tum dhono kiliye mama aur maine ek surprise rakha hai aur woh aapko 9 mahine baad mil le gha, lekin main advance mein bataa dehta hoon, baat yeh hai ke tum dhono bhai aur behen baane ne waale ho, ek chota suhaan ya anu aane waala hai" suhaan and anu looked at each other, then at angad and finally kripa and screamed, "yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, mama mujhe ek behen chaiyye," anu said, when suhaan said, "lekin mujhe ek chota bhai chaiyye!" angad smiled and said, "koi baat nahin kids daddy hai naa...woh sambhal legha!" kripa's mouth fell as the kids began laughing, she went towards angad and hit him with a few more pillow until he said, "ek aur yeah LIFE HO TO AISI....MAIN TUM AUR HUMARA PARIWAAR!"
THE END, ANGAD AND KRIPA LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH THEIR KIDS SUHAAN, ANU, ANJALI AND ROHAN! IN THE END KRIPA ENDED UP HAVING FOUR KIDS...LIKE ANGAD SAID WOH HAI NAA....
HOPE YOU LIKED THIS SHORT FF and thank you for all the comments you all gave me...it supported me a lot
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268143 @268143
+ 3
14 years ago
very emotional story .... poor Kripa gettin punished 4 thns dat r in no way her fault but it was gr8 how Angad was thr 4 her ......... n loved da endin wif AK n thr kids
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
thanx dear glad you liked it
Vinny @Vinny143
16 years ago
HEY LUV THE FF IT WAS SO FUNNY ANGAD IS HILARIOUS!! FOR A SHORT STORY THIS WAS ACTULLY PRETTY GOOD
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
thanx dear for loving it...im glad you enjoyed it
monika @monikaseth
+ 2
16 years ago
just read all awesome dear great thx
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
thanx dear im glad you liked it
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
wow didi kya dialogue maara apne....lol i totally agree and it made sense...and yes another ff coming soon called anjaan raasta with shaurya, anjali, kavya and ak love you didi
Neha @miss_neha
+ 3
16 years ago
Really cute ff, i esp luved da ending, it was soooooooo sweet!
Amnu @Eternized_Blues
+ 4
16 years ago
here i m princess very nice ending...prithvi deserved that...may his soul never rest in peace in hell...me looking forward to another ff...aur haan angad hai to jahan hai warna humme toh tanhai ne maar hi daala tha...i hope that make some sense princess...i tried to be poetic...i really suck at thatAsever Amneet amneet8939377.9899884259
eternal @eternal
+ 2
16 years ago
aww thank you so much dear im glad you liked the ending and what happened to prithivi....thanx again and im ending pmh this friday...am writing jab dil churaye koi and tanhai will be starting another ff called anjaana raasta with shaurya, anjali, angad, kripa and kavya soon