PART I
IN MUMBAI
Its a bright sunny morning we see a big huge mansion called garewal mansion we see a lady praying in front of good .she completed her pooja and turned we see a handsome man is standing infront of her(anurag) after taking the aarti anurag asks prerna about their son prerna replies you know your son better yah yah some thing about the person .anu please wake up your son why don't you wake up your son because he is not listening to me prerna you are the one to spoil him prerna shocked me then prerna speaks me not you they argue for some time so they went up the stairs to wake the person
We enter a room someone is sleeping peacefully in their bed.anu and prerna enter the room to wake him up prerna goes near the person then we see the person face it is none other than our own rishi ,rishi wake up prerna tries to wake him up but he say soonenada mamma then prerna says you are late for your college then rishi says koi baat nahi hai mom all this was watched by anurag he smiles and then go to prerna where she stands
anurag prerna k pass jata hai then kehta hai you don't know how wake up your son prerna anurag ki taraf dekhti hai aur kehtai hai tum kyoun nahi utati apney beta ko aur anurag rishi ko jagana jata hai magar rishi nahii utadatha hai aur prerna anurag say kehati hai kyoun nahi uta pai apne lada beta ko aur anurag ki taraf dekhti hai with giggling aur anurag kehta hai mera nahi tumhari ladla hai aur prerna kehti hai mere ladla yaha hota tho mere kehna per ut jata hai tumhari beta ki tarah nahi aur kehta kehta prerna ki ankho mein aasu aa jata hai anurag yeh dehkta hai aur prerna pass jakar usse console kerta hai tabii waha ki phone bajti hai anurag aur prerna ek doorse ko dekata hai
Anurag phone utatahai then he hears some voice .voice suntay hai anurag cheekta hai prerna gabrajati hai aur doosery ek insaan hasatha hai prerna anurag say phone cheenti hai aur vo bhi chalati hai indono key cheeck sunathay hai rishi apney neened say utat jata hai thodi waqt usko kuch samay nahi aati oh apney maa baap ko phone keylia ladtha dekhata hai aur vo undonose phone laytha hai aur baat kartha hai
Vo bi phone per chailta hai BIGB aap
Who is this BIGB? Iska phone aatay hee sab kyoun cheeki
Preview : Sujal Entry
note:2-3 parts sujal character is very less
if dont like the story then will stop
i will improve myself also for comming parts and i will also write in hindi
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brainychild92 @brainychild92
+ 2
17 years ago
its nice... so isnt sujal a gerewal(spelling??)
u said ap have one child, rishi... is he adopted.. is big b sujal???
continue sooonn!!
Imaan-Ki-Duaa @Imaan-Ki-Duaa
+ 2
17 years ago
gr8... ..seemng 2 be good ff...frst part was nice...do cont soon...so we gt 2 know further....
golu_1677 @golu_1677
17 years ago
seems interesting pls cont. good part. But pls clarify who is sujal?
404_NotFound @404_NotFound
+ 7
17 years ago
It's sounds interesting....do continue
Anupreet @Anu1993
17 years ago
this seems interesting please do cont
Daebak @Daebak
+ 7
17 years ago
nice story .............but who's son is sujal if he's not prerna's son then...u said rishi is the only son of anurag-prerna......then who's sujal....adopted?????? plz clarify......
luv,
vandana