hey...
Thanks to :
Mona
Sanjana
Dmgrock
Ash
Yogitha
Riddhima
Mandy
Yachna
Saz
Tava
And..
Especially for zoya, won't 4get u this time lol
Recap: They both horridly left the table to stop Riddhima, otherwise their baby princess was in for a big shouting today and Rishabh and Armaan were not going to let that happen... were they? after all it was their princess they were talking about!!!
Part 3
Armaan and Rishi both stood by the steps thinking what to do. Armaan was chewing his lip nervously (like always) and Rishi had a frown on his face (like riddzy.) They both stood in the corner overlooking Riddhima as she made her way up the steps. Suddenly Rishi had a glow on his face and he clicked his fingers. He whispered something into his dad's ears and Armaan smiled as well.
Ar: Oye Hoye son, Dimag to tera mere par gayya hai. Shabash!! Fine I'll go put the plan into action. Roger all set. One two three go. Operation save Emmy from Hitler is a go go. Armaan and Rishi gave each other a high fives as Rishi gave his father thumbs up and went to the other room. Armaan turned to go to Riddhima.
Ar: Oh lord, please save me. Meri lovely si Hitler main ayya. Armaan hurriedly proceeded towards the steps and caught riddhima jus as she was about to open Emaan's bedroom door.
Riddhima frowned as she knew he was trying to his 'baby'.
Ri: Armaan, hato tum. Please move. I know you are trying to save Emmy but today I'll wake her up my way. Everyday this girl is a pain. And you know what it's all because of you and Rishi. You pamper her so much. She's m daughter as well but I want her to have some manners. Come one Armaan leave my hand. Riddhima said whilst getting a bit irritated.
Ar: Basket ji, if you have done your lecture then can I say something. I did not come to save my princess. Erm? I mean emaan. Sorry, I know yeah this girl is spoiled. Aaj toh tum ise sabak sikha hi do. But all want is my after breakfast kissy. He pulled her closer.
Armaan said this with a cute puppy face that Riddhima smiled. She knew perfectly well that this was a plan of the father and son to save their princess from their mothers spanking today. Riddhima was just smiling at the situation when she heard the phone ring. She looked at Armaan giving him a 'you-go-and-get-the-phone' look.
Ri: Armaan phone baj raha hai. Can you get?
Ar: (before she could finish) Riddhima main toh garden ja raha ho. Get it please.
Saying that Armaan looked at her as she knew perfectly well what he was up to.
Ri: RISHI?. CAN YOU GET THE PHONE PLEASE? (Shouting so that Rishi could hear her downstairs)
Ar: Riddhima who breakfast kar raha hai. Now go and get the phone. Armaan said hastily. Riddhima could sense the impatience and nervousness in his voice. She smiled mentally knowing that he was trying to get rid of her to save Emmy a thrashing for sleeping till late.
Riddhima got frustrated and turned to go but not before warning Armaan not to wake up Emaan as he wanted to do it. Armaan smiled at Riddhima's childness and stood there with his arms across his chest admiring her as she rushed to get the phone before it was cut. "Basket, tum bhi na, hamesha basket hi raho gi" Armaan said to himself.
Riddhima ran down the stairs and saw Rishi eating his breakfast and engrossed in the morning paper. Riddhima smiled and as soon as she turned to the pick up the phone, Rishi looked at her sighed of relief. He did thumbs up for Armaan who was standing above the staircase. Armaan took the signal and gently opened the door to Emaan's room.
As he opened the door, He saw his little baby sleeping on the opposite side of the bed, with her legs towards the headboard. Emaan's room wasn't the usual pink or lilac like typical teenager girls. In fact when they had refurbished their home 2 years back, Emmy had insisted on choosing a brown and beige theme for her room, which was highly untypical for a 14 year old girl. Riddhima was relieved as she knew she would grow out of the pinks and lilacs in a couple of years so riddzy was more than happy to go along with her decision. Armaan as usual let her do what she wanted. Lol
Lets take a look at her room?
Armaan sighed as he saw her sleep unknown to the world. How fast does time flow? He though the times when she was just a little baby and now? She was a teenager 16 years, but she was still a nave and innocent baby at heart. His baby. He shared a special bond with her. More than what he did with Rishi. It was Armaan and emaan and Riddhima and Rishi. Maybe it was because she was the replica of what he was. Armaan sat down on the edge of the bed. He gently caressed her face. Emaan malik was the splitting image of her father. Exactly the same eyes, same face. She even had the dimples.
Armaan's chain of thoughts broke as he saw his princess sleeping in a very strange position. She slept on her tummy, jus like he did. Her blanket was everywhere except for on her where it was supposed to be! Emaan was wearing a white vest with black 3 quarter trousers. Her hair tied up a pony tail, pretty messed now lol. She had her Teddy under one arm. Armaan smiled as he pulled the teddy from under her arm. It was the same teddy he had given her for her 5th birthday and she always kept it. She had reams and reams of other teddies but she loved this one. She had even named him!! She called him Ted, and she never slept without it. Lol
Here's ted?
Armaan gently shook emaan who groaned. Knowing who it was she shifted her head on her dad's lap and wrapped her arms around his waist. Armaan gently placed a kiss on her cheek.
Ar: Morning bacha.
Em: (yawning) Good morning dada.
He still caressed her hair.
Ar: Emmy come on baby, 9 am already. Mom was coming to wake you up. God knows how I managed her.
Em: (her voice still sleepy) Toh phir mumma se panga hi kyon lete ho dad. She let out a little giggle.
Ar: HAWW!! Panga aur me... Teri ma mujhe zinda chode ji??
They both laughed and emaan sat up straight and crossed her legs. She stretched her arms and got up of the bed. She bent down and kissed Armaan, said a quick love you and rushed to the bathroom.
Armaan smiled at his princess and called out to her in the bathroom.
Ar: Emmy, hurry up aur come soon to the breakfast table. Ok?
He heard her yell a 'yes dad' and he left her room.
Down stairs, Armaan and Rishabh settled sown on the table and they saw Emaan run down the stairs, slowly as in not to make any noise which could grab Riddhima's attention, who was busy on the phone.
She gave Rishabh a kiss on the cheek.
Em: Morning bhai.
Ri: Morning baby, oi why are you so late. Got any ideas how me and dad managed to save you today. Rishabh pretended to scold her. She mumbled a quick sorry and sat down quickly. Grabbing the paper she pretended to be engrossed in it as she heard the phone being put down and her mum approaching the table from behind.
She gave cold stares to her dad and her bhai whom were having a hard time controlling their laughter.
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And that was part 3 folks. Tell me honestly do you like the way the ff's going. Please feel free to criticise as it helps me to improve ff??
NOTE PLZ READ: as you might know I have got another ff running so every time I update a part I get confused with whom to pm because some people read one ff but not the other so please is you want me to CONTINUE sending you pms for THIS ff then please leave a comment or pm me.. That will be my pm list for this ff. Pms will still go out to my regular readers. Hope that isn't too much to ask for..
Please please leave a comment because pms for next update will go to the people who comment on this part as it will be my list. EXTREMELY SORRY for the trouble but you have to agree it's a waste of mine and ur time if you don not wish to receive further pms from me. Lol
THANK YOU FOR ALL THE SUPPORT SO FAR!!!
Lots of love
Rav
xxxxxx
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rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=cool_pisces]Hey Rav
A very cute part
I loved the family scene u potrayed
Thanks for the PM
Love Mini[/QUOTE]
thnx mini di!!!
tc
rav
x
Mini @cool_pisces
+ 3
15 years ago
Hey Rav
A very cute part
I loved the family scene u potrayed
Thanks for the PM
Love Mini
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=kash fan4ever]hey rav,
thanx for the pm
the ff is gr8.
luv the sweet bonding and eman bein the 'princess' of the men of the house.
m lukin forward to seein the special mother- daughter relationship btwn. Riddhima and her daughter as well as rishab's luv for his sis.
cant wait 2 see the kids' reaction 2 their parents when they see them as young as themselves. lol.
pls pm me. waitin for the next part. hope it will come soon and not in 2027. lol.
sakshi
hey,
just read ur third part.
must say, its amazing.
i totally connect with emaan as i too m more or less the same.
wiatin eagerly for ur next part.
pls. pm me.
luv, sakshi[/QUOTE]
thankyou hunny for the encouraging comments
lv u
rav
xx
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=Wild.Aimee]Hi again Rav,
i read you reply to my first comment. you said that you cant stand horror. Well, though even i dont quite 'enjoy' horror, but sometimes i do see them. Actually i prefer them over Ekta Kaporr Daily soaps . No offenses to any of the Ekta fans, but personally Ekta serials are not in for me. i absoulty agree with u di.. lolz... i dunno how my mum n sista watches them lol...
Regarding Part 2, its was a very cutely written part. I loved the first scene where AR from 2027. Hey in you FF Armaan loves Aloo Parathas, even i love them, actually, i love Aloo as well as Gobi Parathas, so if you get them cooked, keep 2 for me as well . i surely will di... by da way even i can make some smashing aloo paranthas bt nothing beats the mums paranthas.. But yep, i missed Emaan in this one. There wasnt any bit of her. i am sure you have some in next.
Once again, i am there to comment of Part 3. Hey Rav ,
You know what i went on laughing as i read the line - Oye Hoye son, Dimag to tera mere par gayya hai. Shabash!! Fine I'll go put the plan into action. Roger all set. One two three go. Operation save Emmy from Hitler is a go go. di.. i soo made that up...
So our Armaan is still a Banter King. I liked Emmy's room. Woah, so finally Emaan is there. And her father and brother managed to save her from her Hitler Mommy. Good. I will look forward to the next part. Thanks for the PMs dear.[/QUOTE]
thx di...u r d best..
rav
x
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=cute_unknown_fr]lol very nice part yaar.............
loved it..............
so sweet............mallik family...........
thanx for pm
n i want u 2 PM me...........[/QUOTE]
will pm hun
thnx
rav
x
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=Mandyy]aww i luv th family thing theyre jus so cute...
armaans still th same lil kid at heart n his daughters jus lyk him lol
luvd it...plz cont soon
xx[/QUOTE]
hey mand.. thnx hun
rav
x
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
awww dat is sooo sweet...
thnx yachu
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
hey hun...
aww thnx ..
will pm
x
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=kvn1983]
waoh its really a nice on superb both the parts r awesome so cute plz continue it soon & thankls for the pm & sorry for late reply"DIL MEIN BASA LIYA OUR HUMKO BATAYA BI NAHI,SATH REHNE KA KHUWAB SAJA LIYA OUR HUMKO BATAYA B NAHI,AB B DEKHTE HO KHAMOSHI BHARI NIGAHON SE,CHUPKE SE DIL CHURA LIYA OUR HUM KO BATAYA B NAHI."[/QUOTE]
aww thnx nidz... rav
x
rav @-midnightsun-
+ 2
15 years ago
[QUOTE=Zoya_01]Hey
First of all thanks for the pm
And sorry for being rude
Coming to the part it was awesome
Loved the way armi and rishi saved emmy from armi's lovely hitler lolz
the phone idea was great
but call kisne kia????????
jis se ridz ne itni lambi baat ki???????
Continue soon
eagerly want to read about rm
ZOYA[/QUOTE]
hey zoya...
aww np u wern't rude
u 'll get ur answers soon...