Tears of Love

Tears of Love Completed M

Chapter 23

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i rok
i rok @i rok 16 years ago heyyyyyyyy i love ure fanfic its really good. cant wait for u to continue. love the way u made em fight. plse continue i cant wait anymore.lol i hope u continue soon its ossum. byeee thanx
Kashish_88
Aalia @Kashish_88 16 years ago maan tht was soo good..cant wait till kashish confess..but in the mean time i love the litlle romatic scenes b/w sujal n kashish.... ok so u added piyush, hope he doesnt mess nething up between SK...im glad u added him as a rival for both S & K..coz i hate the piyush who tries to act nice but isnt nice for real...i like it wen hes either totally nice or totally mean... neway cont soon cant wait for the next part...
beauty_niki
nikita @beauty_niki 16 years ago aree wahhhhhh.....kya baat hai kashish, teeno stories aik dum khushi ke mahol mein aage badh rahe hai . the ending of "sea of love" was superb . aur baaki do mein bhi saab kuch kitna acha hai . in this story sujal aur kashish aik doosre ke paas aarahe hai . that's really nice . hey but that bloddy piyush !!! hell.....he is such a loser . i was really disgusted when he wasn't giving kashish her cell . hey but kashish ko maana padega yaar . kya thapad tha woh, zindagi bhar uss thapad ki gunj uske kaano mein rahegi . but i am also worried ki kahi yeh piyush sujal kashish ke beech misunderstandings aur fasle na create karde . seriously yaar i think ki aab sujal kashish should confess their true feelings for each other aur apna rishta majbut karna chahiye jisse unke rishte mein koi darrar na daal paye aur shaq ki bhi koi gunjayish na ho . wowwwwwwww....holi.....luckyyy yaar....yaha pe toh mujhe holi kya rang bhi nahi dikhayi dete . i miss holi soooooo much . hmmmm....paar shayad iss baar i won't miss because sujal kashish ko dekhe aur baki saab ko dekhe aisa lagega ki even i played holi a bit . thanks kashish for showing holi festival in this story . really you potray each and every emotion wonderfully . hmmmmm....so abb dekhna yeh hai ki subah subah sabse pehele aik doosre ko rang kaun lagayega . sujal or kashish ??? aur yeh jaane ke liye mujhse aur intezaar nahi hota . the part was great !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....................can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.
Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 16 years ago very nice parts..too good...i just like it very damn much kii sujal,kashish ke beech ka love is increasing... sujal , kashish ka pyaar is like thoda sa pyaar hua hai..bohat hai baaki...maine izhaar kiya hai tera hai baaki..these lines fit-in correct kyunke dono ko ek doosre se pyaar hai... aur rahii baat pyaar ke izhaar kii tho sujal tho apne dil kii baat bata hii chuka hai bas kashish ka hai baki.. anyway nice going..& piyush deserved that slap..i'am proud of kashish... just lovely.... do post the next part soon...dear i have a request please let sujal know the batameezi that piyush did with kashish...tab sujal, piyush kii baand bajayega..aur mazaa aayega... continue soon...
Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 16 years ago
very nice parts..too good...i just like it very damn much kii sujal,kashish ke beech ka love is increasing... sujal , kashish ka pyaar is like thoda sa pyaar hua hai..bohat hai baaki...maine izhaar kiya hai tera hai baaki..these lines fit-in correct kyunke dono ko ek doosre se pyaar hai... aur rahii baat pyaar ke izhaar kii tho sujal tho apne dil kii baat bata hii chuka hai bas kashish ka hai baki.. anyway nice going..& piyush deserved that slap..i'am proud of kashish... just lovely.... do post the next part soon...dear i have a request please let sujal know the batameezi that piyush did with kashish...tab sujal, piyush kii baand bajayega..aur mazaa aayega... continue soon... sun_42339515.3494907407
momsbaby
momsbaby @momsbaby 16 years ago heyyy its really good plse continue soon cant wait any more lol. i love the part about sujal and kashish where they fight.u are an oosum writer.anyways byeee plse continue as soon as possible.
le_me_star
zaira @le_me_star 16 years ago finally sujal admits that he's in love wt kashish!!!!!!!!!.......he knows that she loves him, but coz of what he did to her family she won't forgive him ! ...but he have hope that one day kashish herself is going to admit that !....i just love reading this story yaar !!!!!!....the way everything is developing it's really interesting ! SK falling in love ! will kashish forgive him? will her family forgive them n understand kashish desicion ? ......................congrats too sujal for winning the project ...he'll do a great work wt it!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................yaar yeah piyush kaha se nikal aya , i hate him , i hope he doesn't create any problems between sujal and kashish !!!!!!!!!!!..........waitting eagerly for the holi part ! lets see who puts rang first Sujal or Kashish ?????????????......................waitting eagerly for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago hmm pata nahi holi kya rang layegi..
Daebak
Daebak @Daebak 16 years ago Aww cute part!! Piyush is such a loser admi
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