Part-9
I am Mayamibhumi , a land that has witnessed the birth of countless brave men ...
She is the princess of Bhopal dynasty, and he is a rare mafia. He kidnapped ...
Rihana, yearning to break free from the predetermined fate of being a tawaif's ...
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nikita @beauty_niki
16 years ago
hey kashish continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.
sidivyapall @sidivyapall
16 years ago
awesome!!!! continue soon!!!Sai-licious39369.3978935185
Hana @HhAaNnAa
16 years ago
wow kashish dear awesome part loved it tooo tooo goooood just gr8...continue soooon
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
16 years ago
very emotional,very touching part.. very well written.. do continue soon...
nikita @beauty_niki
16 years ago
hey kashish the part was asusual extremely well written and superb .u know that part surely brought tears in my eyes . it was so emotional yaar .lekin aik baat samaj nahi aarahi hai that how come sujal is so nice to her .is this real or is he just acting taki koi tamasha na khada ho uske ghar mein .for ex: when kashish was crying sujal comes to her and lifts her up aur keheta hai that don't cry,chalo,nayi zindagi ki shurvat huyi hai .i mean he was so supportive and caretaking person at that time .pata nahi lekin i think it's all fake . he is kinda acting kyunki last part tak he had soooo much attitude in him and gussa aur badla lene ki bhavana bhi thi lekin abb he is sooooo damn quiet .but joh kashish ke saath hua woh bohot bura hua .she sacrificed her whole life for her family lekin abb family hi dur hogayi bechari se . nowwww.....agar uss sujal ne takleef di na toh i won't spare him at all .i think he should be nice and good to her just like he was now in this part .takleef bilkulna de woh usse .phir shayad issi wajah se woh dono aik doosre ke kareeb aaye aur wapas pyaar karne lage .the part was great !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz...........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.
Maham @Kashish_my_love 16 years ago Great going please do continue soon
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
A very touching part.Do update soon.
Daebak @Daebak
+ 7
16 years ago
Awww it was a very senti part n this was expected...!! Continue soon!! I hope sujal is not too harsh on Kahsish but Akshat will be a gr8 friend to her im sure
Bhumika amin @ami_princess
16 years ago
i knew it that this was going to happen......poor KASH...but i am glad that kripa-angad understood her....