Our First Child

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Our First Child

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m4manju
manjiri @m4manju 3 years ago this was really sweet...well written...do write more
vijisridhar
Viji Sridhar @vijisridhar 4 years ago wow 🤩 wah wah beautifully written enjoyable read 😍
I loved the fact that you kept the story very positive, keeping all the bonds of the family completely intact 👍 kudos to you 👏👏👏

BTW, the author of this story "mishbirstruck" - are you twitter, can you please publish this on hashtag #YehRishteyHainPyaarKe ✌️
if not i would like to publish this on your behalf giving credit to you 🙏🏻
kindly let me know ✌️
LetThereBeLight
LetThereBeLight @LetThereBeLight 4 years ago Wow wow vaishu you just nailed it yaar.. the flow of the story, the flashback, kunals pain, mishbir happiness n then guilt after knowing kunals pain, kuhu n her truth coming out abirs reaction just like him subtle yet perfect,.. take a bow...
and coming to main part misha baby,,... aweee the pic you posted its so so cute mishbir reaction on pregnancy,, ahh got me emotional too, family love awee... the labor pain scene was best pati n devar they will actually react like this only haha... n i liked the guitar scene cute n sweet family time...
my most favorite abir saying kunal is his first son, who taught him a fathers responsibility... you got me so emotional girl... mish supporting them... its like silently agreeing she too thinks the same.. superb...
just love it vaishu... love you so much for this....
ruhi19
ruhi19 @ruhi19 4 years ago wow... vaishu u nailed it yar...like everytime its perfect... the idea of giving news to abir is the worth... i just love the moment...and abinal having tension about mishti when she is in labour...its very realistic as we know how abinal are... misha...the heart of everyone... i loved how kunal exprssed his insecurities and how kunal tried his relationship.... last but not th least how abir said kunal that he made him father first... i love that....
yrhpk_aus
yrhpk_aus @yrhpk_aus 4 years ago amazing! so lost for words...bohut emotional kar diya yaar.
It felt like a watched a small short film, I could imagine all the characters in my head, it was perfect!
Npdeepa
Npdeepa @Npdeepa 4 years ago Whoa....Girl you made me sob....Amazing yaar..The family pose in the delivery suite gave me goosebumps...
Nanko hamesha MishBir ke First child hi Rahega...
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