LAST PART
Aliya and Disha are in the car. They are going to the mall.
Aliya: Dish, tum meri bhabhi kab ban rahi ho?
Dish: Yaaar, whats up with everyone? Har koi mujhi se yehi sawaal kyun kar raha hai?
Aliya laughs. Suddenly, the driver comes to a stop.
Dish: Ramsingh, kya hua?
Ramsingh is stuttering.
Ramsingh: Maimsaab, aap khud hi dekh liye...
Disha and Aliya look outside. They are shocked! tHEY ARE SURROUNDED BY GUNDAS!!!!!!
Aliya grabs Disha's hand.
One of the guys opens the door and pulls Aliya out.
She screams. Disha is trying to contact DK, but her cell sin't working.
The other guy pulls Disha out.
They are misbehaving with the girls.
Aliya: STOP!!!!! STOP!!!!!!!!!!
Disha: BATAMEESE, WHAT THE HECK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING??? I WILL CALL THE POLICE.
Guy 1: Eiy, police…huh…abhi dikha te he tujhe.
The guy rips off Aliya's shirt's sleeves.
Aliya: AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Suddenly, a car zooms past them. It turns back and a stop. A guy steps out and it is none other than our hero JOSH!!!!!!!!!
Josh: HEY! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?
Guy 1: WHY THE HECK DO YOU CARE? HUH? GO FIND GIRLS OF YOUR OWN!!!
Josh is in rage!
He strats kicking the guys butts!!!lol!!!! BAAAM!!! BAAM!!!! Finally, the guys run away before Josh can hit them anymore. Josh comes over to Disha.
J: You ok?
D: Thanks, but you better see Aliya.
Aliya is crying. Josh puts his arms around her. She pushes it off and walks to his car.
Disha has already gone with Ramsingh.
Josh gets in the driver's seat.
Josh: WHY ARE YOU CRYING NOW?
Aliya:…..
Josh: A!!!!!!
A: JOSH, SHUT UP!!! OK, YOU DON'T KNOW, UNN LADKO NE JO MERE SAATH KIYA HAI. TUM KYA JAANO…HUH? MAIN ISS DUNIYA KO MOO DIKHANE LAYAK NAHIN HOON.
***The goons did more to her than that. You can fill in the blanks***
Josh speeds up the car and drives in reverse.
A: WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
J doesn't listen. He is driving like mad in reverse. Finally, he sees the gundas. They are laughing and enjoying. Josh gets out of the car and…
BAAAM!!!!!
BAAAMMMM!!!!!
BAAAMMM!!!!!!!
One guy runs away. The other is bleeding like mad.
A gets out of the car.
A: WHAT DID YOU HTHINK YOU WERE DOING, JOSH? HE COULD HAVE DIED!
J: DROP IT ALIYA!
A: J, TALK TO ME, PAAGAL HO GAYE HO TUM KYA? WHY DID YOU DO THIS?
J: ARRE YAAR, BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!!!!
Josh gets back in the car and drives off. Aliya is standing speechless!
Next morning:
Khanna mansion:
Kk: KUMUD, ANGAD, NAKUL, NEECHE AAYO!
A+Ku+N: YES MOM!!!!
The trio get dressed and go downstairs.
The whole family is sitting at the dining table.
N: Mom, can we make this fast…I have to go meet …uhhhm…someone
Abhay: Ok, ok
Kk: Bachon, we have decided…Abhay, you take it.
Abhay: We have decided that you are old now…old enough to…get
Kk: married!
N slips out.
An+Ku: WHAT!!!!!
Kk: And issi liye, hum tumhare shaadi kar vana chahate hain!
An: Mom, meri shaadi nahin ho sakte.
Ab: Why?
An: Because…
Kk: Leken beta, humne ladki ke mata pita ko haan bhi kar di!
An: MOM!!!!
Abh: Yeh shaadi ho gi, aur isse koi bhi manna nahin karega, understood Angad?
Angad gets mad and leaves the house.
Kk: AUr beta, Kumud, we have found a guy for you too!
Ku: Mama, but…
Abhay: Kumud, atleast you don't behave like your brothers.
Kk: Aur humne ladke ke mama aur papa ko bhi haan kar diya hai.
Ku(to herself): Sorry, Mr. Mystery Guy, mein apne mama papa ki baat nahin taal sakti.
Ku (sad): Ok…
She leaves.
DK's house—
Disha and DK are talking. DK has his arm around Dish.
Disha: DK, tumhe nahin lagta ki hume iss rishtey ko aagay badana chahi hai? DK, I want to live my entire life with you!
DK: WHAT!!!! Disha, are you nuts? Tumhe pataa hai kit um kya kehe rahi ho?
Dish: What are you trying to say?
DK: Dish, shaadi is a commitment, and I am not ready for it.
Disha: So, when will you be ready?
DK: I don't know, maybe never.
Disha: To humare iss rishtey ka kya hoga?
DK: Why, can't we stay as G/F B/F?
Dish: BUT, DK, TUMHE SHAADI SE KYUN ITNE PROBLEM HAI?
DK: Because I want freedom in life.
Dish: DK, I will give you whatever you want! I will never complain to you about anything!
DK: DISHA! I CAN'T RUIN MY LIFE GETTING MARRIED!!! OK!!! EK BAAR KEHE DIYA, TO BUS KEHE DIYA!
Disha is in tears. She runs out the door.
Kshitij's house—
Ks: Mom,shaadi????
Saakshi: Yes beta, and humne tumare liye ladki bhi chunn li!
Ks: But, I don't want to get married right now!
Ks gets up to leave.
Arayman: Beta please, humne tumhari har quaish puri ki hai, aaj tum apne mama papa ki ek baat manne ko tayar nahin ho?
Ks is touched.
Ks: Leken…
Saak: Beta, humne ladki ke mom and dad ko haan bhi kar di!
Aryaman: Yes, aur jaane se pehele photo to dekh lo!
Ar extends his arm out tog ive Ks the photo. Ks looks at it and MMMAAAANNN!!!! HE IS SHOCKED!!!!
Kriap's house—
Angad rings the door bell.
Kripa opens the door. He quickly enters and closes it.
An pins Kriap to the wall and kisses her.
Kr: AN, chodo naaa!
He starts kissing her neck.
Kr: An, koi dekh le ga!
An: Tum mujhse jhoot bol rahi ho? Ghar mein koi nahin hai!
Kripa smiles and hugs him. He brushes his lips against hers.
Kripa: Arre, aaj Mr. Khanna koi zaada hi romantice mood mein hai!
An looks into her eyes.
An: Kr. My parents are getting me married…
Kr: WHAT!!!!!!
He kissed her again.
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armaghan @sidra01
16 years ago
amazing fic just read it mandblowing con asap
Ika @-De.De-
+ 3
17 years ago
woow gr8 part, finally u continued. now keep writing.
monika @monikaseth
+ 2
17 years ago
verry nice part please conti soon i love it thanks for update
Lifedream @Lifedream
17 years ago
[QUOTE=Kshitij+Khumud]
PART 18
Here is the b'day treat! Hope you enjoy it!
Kr is shocked!
Kr: Yeh tum kya kehe rahe ho?
A: My parents just came from India and un hone mere aur Kumud ke liye ek ladki/ladka dhunda hai.
Kr: What are you going to do know?
A: Kr, we will get married.
Kr: KYA!!!! A tum kya paagal ho gaye ho? Don't you value your culture and tradition. Tumhe pata hai ki kitna bura hota hai jab ek ladka ladki bhaag kar shaadi kar lete hain?
A: FINE!, THEN WATCH ME GET MARRIED!!!!
He is about to leave when Kr grabs his hand.
Kr: Theek hai, jaisi tumhari marzi.
They hug.
Sharma House:
Dish is on the sofa crying. Kr comes in.
Kr: Di, what happened?
D: kuch nahi…
Kr: Mujhse chupa hogi?
Dish tells Kr about her conversation with DK.
Kr is shocked.
Kr: How could he do this?
D: I dunno.
Kr: I AM GOING TALKING TO HIM PRONTO!!!!!!!!
She slams the door shut. Dish gets up and gets a glass of water. Suddenly the doorbell rings. She goes and opens the door. The glass drops from her hand and breaks.
Dish: TUM!!!!!!!
Khanna House-
Everyone is getting ready because the guys family is coming.
Ku is in her room with Angad.
Ku: Bhai, ujhe yeh shaadi vaadi nahin karni.
An: But, tum mama papa ki baat thodi taal sakti ho!
Ku: I know (sighs)
An: Waise, Ku, you look great in that outfit!
Ku: Thanks bhai! I thought you'd never say that, because the only girl who you think looks pretty these days is Kripa!
An: Shut up!
Kk shouts from the first floor.
Kk: KU, AN!!!! NEECHE AAYO!!!!
The doorbell rings. Abhay opens it.
Abhay: Aryaman, Saakshi, andar aao!!!! Arre Kshitij bet, kaise ho?
Abhay: KK, Kumud kahan hai?
Kk: \Aa rahi hai!
The guests are welcomed. Kshitij is like "Angad, neeche aa" (Kumud and Angad don't know who the guy is!)
Kk looks at the stairs.
Kk: Lo, aagaey dono bhai behen…
Kumud and Sngad are staring t the floor.
Abhay: Kumud, beta…
Ku looks up.
Kumud: Ji, papa!
Abhhay: Come on!
She comes around the sofa where she c
sumera @asian_gyal
17 years ago
just read ur fanfic its really good keep it up
brainychild92 @brainychild92
+ 2
17 years ago
it was soo good.. y dont u continuee...
Simiran @Simiran
17 years ago
that was good Plz contiune where r u plz contiune
GK-KK~ROCKS @GK-KK~ROCKS
18 years ago
Plz continue.Are you there
Jas @Jaslove
+ 3
18 years ago
where are you yaar.
please continue soon
Ika @-De.De-
+ 3
18 years ago
Aps, plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon.