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PART 44 -
LAST PART
THE STORY TAKES A LEAP
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AFTER 5 YEARS..
Pulkit is 7 years old..and Priti and Kartik are 5 years old..
Laksh: KT!!! main jaa raha hoon..
Kt: ek minute..aayiee..
Laksh: (to his kids) ok bacho..chalo..jaldi..school ke liye derr ho jayegi..
Pulkit, Priti, and Kartik comes running down yelling.."wait..wait..wait"...
Kt comes with laksh's tie..She sweetly puts it on him..He kisses her a "Bye"..she insits to come home early..he agrees..and leaves with the children..
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AT NOON AROUND 2:00..
Kt was getting Lunch ready..since the kids, and Laksh were coming home..She was busy cooking..
Meanwhile the phone rang..
Tulsi: (yells) Main utaati hoon..
She picks up the phone and starts talking..
After 2 minutes, she comes running to the kitchen..
Tulsi: (paniked) Krishna!!..Krishna!! Jaldi chal mere saath..Abhi!!..
Kt: par baa..kya baat hai..bataiye to sahi..
Tulsi: Tu pehle chal..jaldi..
Tulsi grabs kt's hand, and runs out the door..in a rush..They both sit in a car..
IN THE CAR..
Kt: baa bataiye naa..kya baat hai..
Tulsi: driver jaldi chalaiye naa..please..jaldi..
Kt: baa please batiye naa..baa..
Tulsi: krishna!! laksh aur bacho ka accident ho gaya hai..
Kt: (panicked) KYA?! KAISE?! KAB?! (starts crying).. DRIVER GAADI JALDI CHALAO..
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IN THE HOSPITAL..
They reach the room's everyone is admitted in..
Laksh comes out of one room..with bandage on his arm..and head..
Kt: (runs to laksh) Laksh!!..
Laksh hugs kt..and kt hUgs him back..She looks at the badage on laksh..and gets shocked..yeh kya..fracture to nahi..
Laksh: nahi kt..fracture nahi hua hai..(starts crying)..meri chodo..bacho ko..kartik..
Kt: Kartik?? kya hua usko?? bache kaise hain..
Laksh: (crying) Priti, aur Pulkit theek hai..par kartik ko zaada chot ayiee hai..
Meanwhile everyone from SN comes down..and are worried..
Laksh and kt go to them..
Kt: laksh..kartik kis kamre main hai??
Laksh: (crying)..ICU mein..
Everyone gets shocked..Meanwhile Priti and Pulkit come out of the rooms..they are not hurt..They run to Laksh and Kt..
Kt hold them both..and hugs, and kisses them..
Meanwhile the doctor comes out of the ICU..
Laksh: Doctor?? Kartik--
Doctor: I'm sorry he's no more..
(Echo in everyone's heads: He's No More [sevral of times])..
Doctor: Unko kaafi zaada chot aayiee thi..
Kt lets go of the children, and falls to the ground..but laksh cathes her with one hand..[since he can't move the other one]..
Everyone has tears in their eyes..
Laksh: (crying, to kt) kt..sambhalo apne aapko..
Meanwhile the nurse comes running to the doctor..
Nurse: Doctor..Doctor..Patient ko kuch ho raha hai..
Everyone gets confuzed..
The doctor runs to the ICU room..
Kt: (crying) yeh kya ho gaya laksh..yeh kaise..(she couldn't stop crying)..
Laksh wipes off her tears with one hand..
Laksh: kt..yeh sab ek haadsa tha..agar bhagwaan ko yeh hi manzoor that to isme..hum kya kar sakte hain..
Kt: tumhe theek se dekhkar gaadi chalani chahiye thi laksh..ab dekho kya ho gaya..
Laksh: main jaanta hoon kt..isme meri galti hai..
Manthan: no laksh..isme tumhari galti kaise hai..it was an accident..pehle batao ki yeh kaise hua..
Laksh explains everything..
Flashback
Laksh went to the school to get the kids..The kids come running to him..and hig him..All of them sit in the car..and he starts driving..
While driving he didnt see a fast car coming behind them..and a fast car coming infront of them..
Laksh's car got bashed in between both the cars..
Priti and Pulkit fell out..but Laksh and Kartik were trapped inside the smashed car..
Laksh: KARTIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..(he fell unconsious)..
Everyone was unconsious..and somehow they all were admitted in the hospital..
We are out of Flashback
Laksh: (crying) yeh sab aise hua..
Everyone was horrified..
Laksh hugged Kt really tight..and everyone was crying..but mostly Laksh and Kt were crying the most..
After a little while the doctor comes out of the ICU..
Doctor: (to laksh) i'm sorry..we mixed your kid with another one..you kid is fine..but is is hurt badly..
Manthan: (comes in front of the doctor) (slaps him) yeh kaisa mazaak tha..dekhiye aapne uski maa ki kya halat kar di hai..aap theek se pehle check karke nahi bata sakte the..sharm aani chahiye aapko..apne aap par..shey..
Doctor: we are really sorry sir..
Laksh and Kt go to the ICU room..
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IN THE ICU ROOM..
Kartik was consious..
Laksh and kt walked up to him..
They both were crying..
Kartik: papa..mama..aap ro kyun rahe ho??
Laksh: (crying) kuch nahi beta..kuch nahi..(he couldn't say what had happened)..
Nurse comes in the room..
Nurse: aap isse discharge kar sakte hain ab..
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AFTER A COUPLE OF DAYS..
Laksh's arm got better..and Kartik also got better..
Since then on..they never had any problems..that they had to face..
And thus, all of them lived Happily Ever After..
~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~The End~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~ ************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
HI GUYS..WELL THIS IS THE END OF MY STORY NOW..I REALIZED THAT I DON'T HAVE THAT MUCH TIME TO UPDATE ALL MY 3 FAN FICTIONS..SO I DECIDED TO END IT..WELL SO THAT'S THE END OF ONE OF MY FF'S..PLEASE REPLY..THANKS URU!!..BYE!! LOVE YOU GUYS<3
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zinny.xo @zinny.xo
+ 2
16 years ago
Aww..you guys..thanks so much for liking it. Thank U all so much
Anupreet @Anu1993
16 years ago
Great Part i just read it all it is good but unfortunatly it is ending
xxAnuxx
Riyaa147 @Riyaa147
+ 2
16 years ago
This fanfic was awesome!!I really enjoys reading this!! You are a great writer!!Keep it up!!
tanya @rani_rani
16 years ago
hummm....cool parts...i read it in one part..continusly...lol....u r a gret writter and y do u make laksh in accdient situations..i don't get it...lol...welll keep urgus work on the other ffs and u r great...:):):):):)
Sapna @LakshFan#1
16 years ago
I just caught on today. Wow!! this fanfic was truly amazing. You should get an appalaud for this. Very hard work. keep it up
zinny.xo @zinny.xo
+ 2
16 years ago
Thanks for your lovely comments guys.
drashti26 @drashti26
16 years ago
awesome ff i luved it. ur an awesome writer.
Hira @hIra_89
16 years ago
i agree me waiting for ur new ff zinu*nIha*39224.3550810185
saira @.x.Saira.x.
16 years ago
NO!!!! PLZ don't end it! -*denial*
i cnt belive its ended!-*acceptance*
cnt w8 4 ure nxt ff! -*moved on*
madeline @babygirl
16 years ago
awesome this is one of my favorite fanfics well done its really good keep up the good work