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Chapter 33

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Im really very very sorry guyz 4 keep u all w8ing 4 long actually part to main kal he post ker rahe thi per kya karu net prblm ki wajah se nahi ker payi but now the w8 is over here is the next part hope that u like this part also

Now they r back to shimla & it's the day of akshat & charu's sangeet rasam.
Its been a week since they r back in in all the week sujal had tried his best k wo kashish k dil main apne liye thodi se he sahi magar jagah bana paye us k dil amin apne liye chhupe pyaar ko us k zuban tak la sake.& iss poore week mian kashish k dil main chhupe sujal k pyaar main din ba din izafa hota jar aha hai jitna sujal uss k kareeb aata jaraha tha utna he kashish k liye sujal se door jaana mushkil ho raha tha magar still she was on her decision not to tell sujal abt her feelings 4 him.
So 2day was the sangeet.
Every1 is looking really good.
sab he guests aachuke hain magar sujal abhi tak naih aaya hota akshat uss ka mob try kerta hai but no response kashish bhi besabri se sujal ka w8 ker rahe hoti hai coz ab to use bhi aadat se hogayi thi sujal ki.
Kafi dair ho chuki hoti hai magar sujal ka bhi tak koi pata nahi hota kashish was now really worried abt him.
Kashish ooper charu k room main jati hai coz usse ab kuchh bhi achha nahi lag raha hota she wants to be alone 4 some time.
Kashish opper room main chali jati hai & tabhi sujal enter hota hai.
Sujal ko dekhte he akshat uss k pass jata hai.

A-time dekha hai tumne? ye time hai aane ka?
S- im really sorry yar bas last moment pe ek meeting nikal aayi to ussi k chakkar main L8 hogaya.
A-aaj k din to ofiice k kaam chod dete after all tere frnd ki shadi hai yar.
S- frnd ki shadi hai tabhi to sarra kaam aaj he nimta k aaya hu kal se office ka koi kaam nahi karuga bas tere saath rahuga.
A-ye that's like a buddy.
S- achha ab ye bata k charu kahan hai?
A-charu yahin to thi[looking here & there] haan wo rahe.
S- chal main mil k aata hu.

Sujal goes to charu.

S- hi charu.

Charu turns to him.

C- mujhe tumse koi baat nahi kerni.
S- magar kyu maine kya kiya?
C- time dekha hai aane ka? Tum to khud host ho aur guests se bhi L8 aaye ho.
S- array sorry baba kal se koi kaam nahi karuga bas sarra din tum logo k sath rahuga.
S- wese lag to tum bohat khobsurat rahe ho akshar ki neenden udane ka poora program lagta hai kyu?

Charu ye sun k sharma jati hai ..lol
C- tum bhi na achha ye sab chhodo ye batao k kashish se mille ho?
S- nahi to kyu?
C- to pehle ja k abhi milo usse bohat intizar ker waya hai tumne usse.
S- kashish mera intizar ker rahe thi?
C- nahi apni office k peon tushhar ka intizar ker rahe thi stupid of course wo tumhara intizar ker rahe thi magar kisi ko jataya nahi magar main bhi uski bachpan ki dost hu us k maan ki baat jan leti hu ab jao bhi milo usse ooper room main hai wo.
S- ab tum apna ye lecture band karo gi to jaon gana.

Sujal goes upstairs to meet kashish sujal opens the door coz door khula hua tha & he sees kashish standing by the window looking out & there was complete dark in the room.
Sujal goes there & stands behind her.
Kashish had her back 2werds sujal.

S- ab bahir dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai jis ka intizar ho raha tha wo aachuka hai.

Kashish feels very happy & relieved hearing sujal's voice but she didn't turn to him & she controls her happiness & says..

K- main kisi ka intizar nahi ker rahe thi wo to bas neeche dil nahi lag raha tha to main yahan aagayi.
S- to ab neeche ajao ab main aagaya hu na to tumhara dil bhi apne aap lag jaye ga.

Saying this he left from the room.
Kashish thinks..
K- janti hu sujal k dil lag jayega magar mujhe apne dil ko rokna he hoga.

She also leave from the room.
Ab dekhte hain k neeche kya ho raha hai..

Sujal neeche aata hai akshat us k pas aata hai.

A-yar sujal tere dost ki shadi hai aur koi hangama koi nach gana nahi ye kesa sangeet hai yar?
S- to tujhe gana sun-na hai.
A-to aur sangeet ki kya maine[meaning] hoti hai?
S- to ye le abhi sonata hu.

& he start to sing.

Hmm hmm hmm hmm hmm
La la lala la
Hay hay hay hay hay
Aahaaaa
Then he sees kashish standing on the stairs & he just lost in her beauty coz he hadn't seen her & when he saw her he just 4got everything near him though kashish ne tayyar hone main kuchh khas tayyari nahi ki thi magar jitni bhi tayyari ki thi wo sujal k hosh udane k liye kafi thi.
SubhanaAllah[8]

chand sifarish jo kerta hamari
deta wo tum ko bata(he looks @ kashish & sings)
sharm-o-hayya k parde gira k
kerni hai ham ko khata (kashish looks down)
zid hai ab to hai khud ko mitana
hona hai tujh main fanna

chand sifarish jo kerta hamari
deta wo tum ko bata
sharm-o-hayya k parde gira k
kerni hai ham ko khata

sujal goes to where kashish was standing.
teri ada bhi hai jhonke wali
chhu k ghuzar jane de(kashish apna dupate ka palu peeche kerti jo k kashish k peechhe khade sujal k chehre pe girta hai & jese jese kashish aage badti hai wese wese uss ka dupata sujal k chehre ko chhu k jata hai )

teri lachak hai k jese dali
dil main utar jane de
now both were on the stairs & sujal neeche tha while kashish neeche aa rahe thi she was looking @ sujal & she misses a step she was abt to fall when sujal moves & catch her @ the right time so now they were in hugging position.

aaja banhon main ker k bahana
hona hai tujh main fanna.

Kashish leaves him & goes down.
chand sifarish jo kerta hamari
deta wo tum ko bata
sharm-o-hayya k parde gira k
kerni hai ham ko khata

to ab thoda sa misic fast hota hai & kuchh ladkiyan kashish ka haath pakad k usse wahan le jati hain jahan pe sab dance ker rahe hote hain charu was also there dancing & she made her dance.
Kashish ko charu jaan bhooj k zor se turn kerti hai so that wo sujal se takra jaye aur hota bhi wahe hai kashish loses her balance & seedha sujal k banhon main…lol

hain jo irade bata du tum ko
sharma he jao ge tum
dhadkane jo suna du tum ko
ghabra he jao ge tum
ham ko aata nahi hai chhupana
hona hai tujh main fanna.(sujal sings these lines still holding kashish in his arms)

chand sifarish jo kerta hamari
deta wo tum ko bata
sharm-o-hayya k parde gira k
kerni hai ham ko khata
zid hai ab to hai khud ko mitana
hona hai tujh main fannaaaaaaa.

Every1 claps 4 him.
Sangeet rasam goes very well & now 2day is the menhdi.
That was a special ladies function & ladko ko us main enter kerne ki permission nahi thi but akshat wants to go & met charu.
Akshat was thinking how he meet charu but usse kuchh samajh nahi aaraha tha k kya kare then sujal comes to him.

S- kya baat hai aese kyu betha hai?
A-yar mujhe charu se milna hai per tu to janta hai k mera wahan jana allow nahi hai.
S- bas itni se baat w8 l8 me think sumthing.

Sujal thinks 4 a while & says sumthing in akshat's ear.
Hearing what sujal said akshat jumps up with excitement.

A-gr8 idea yar maine pehle kyu nahi socha?
S- simple coz tumhare pass sochne k liye dimagh nahi hai.
A-chal chod na ye baten come lets go.
S- milna tujhe hai main wahan ja k kya karuga?
A-chal na ab zyada sawal na ker.

They reached charu's house.
Sab se chhupte chhupate they reached the back side of her house.

S- chal beta lag ja kaam se wo raha charu ka room wo rake khidki aur ye raha pipe lage raho.
A-theek hai magar jese he koi aaye to mujhe call kerna.
S- wo sab main ker luga magar tum jaldi aana.
A-theek hai.

Akshat pipe chad k charu k room main enter hota hai.
Charu was all ready & was sitting in front of the dressing table charu hears some voice & she turns around & find akshat.

C- tum yahan??
A-haan main.
c- yahan kya ker rahe ho? Kisi ne dekh liya to?
A-array koi nahi dekhe ga main to sirf tumse milne aya hu.

Now lets see k sujal kya ker raha hai??

Sujal was standing where akshat left him magar akshat tha k neeche aa he nahi raha tha & sujal ek jagah pe khade khade boar ho raha tha then he decide to go to the garden's back side he goes there & find some 1 standing there sujal thoda aage ja k dekhta hai k it was kashish who was standing there sujal goes to her.

S- kashish yahan andhere main kya ker rahe ho?
K- ab to meri poori zindagi main he andhera reh gaya hai to iss andhere se kya farak padta hai?
S- kis ne kaha kashish k tumhari zindagi main andhera hai? Zindagi ki ronaken tumhara intizar ker rahe hain kashish bas tumhare haath badha k unhe thamne kid air hai.
K- jo ronaken mera intizar ker rahe hain sujal main unhe thamna nahi chahti kyu ki ab mujhe iss andhere ki aadat ho chuki hai.
S- bhale he tumhara ye faisla kisi aur ki zindagi main andhera ker de?
K- kisi ki zindagi main andhera na ho issliye maine ye faisla kiya hai.
S- ye tumhari apni soch hain main isse nahi manta.
K- tumhare man-ne ya na man-ne se mujhe koi farak nahi padta main bas tumse ye kehna chahti hu k mujhe mere hall pe chhod do meri zindagi main dakhal dena band ker do.
S- main tumhe tumhare hall pe nahi chod sakta kyu ki ab tumhari zindagi pe kuchh haq mera bhi hai.
K- Haq?? Kis haq ki baat ker rahe ho tum?aur hote kaun ho tum meri zindagi pe haq jatane wale? Aakhir chahte kya ho tum? Mera pechha chod kyu nahi dete?
Sujal halka sa muskurata hai..

S- kashish agar tum ab tak nahi samajh saki k main kya chahta hu to tum shayad kabhi bhi samajh na sako.

Kashish looks down @ this.

S- agar tum jan-na he chahti ho k main kya chahta hu to suno.
Sujal goes near her & held her by her shoulders.

S- main tumhe chahta hu kashish. Suna tumne tumhe chahta hu.

kahish frees her self from is hold & says..

K-magar main tumhe nahi chahti.
She says this looking the other side.

S- yahe baat meri aankhon main dekh k kaho k tum mujhse pyaar nahi kerti? Vadda kerta hu uss k baad tumhari zindagi se hamesha hamesha k liye chala jaonga.
He made her look @ him.
Kashish 1st closes her eyes then looks in his eyes & says..

K- haan…na….nahi…krti main tumse py…pyaar.

Sujal was shocked hearing this he didn't expect that from kashish.

S- k..kya?
K- haan naih kerti main tumse pyaar tang aagai hu main tumhari in harkaton se ab plz (she foded her hands) haath jodti hu main tumhar mujhe mere hall pe chod do chale jao meri zindagi se mujeh tumhari koi zaroorat nahi hai just leave Mr Sujal garewal just leave from my life I said leaveeeeee.
She shouts while saying the last line.

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx jyothi will cont very soon

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 ur comments soon u'll know what will happent to them & will cont soon

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Chantelle @Bolly*_Crazed

17 years ago Pheww...Fianlly caught up..after soo many parts...Very Very nice...And Why did Kashish tell Sujal to Leave?...I Wonder when shez going to tlel him..how much she loves..him...N E Wayz...GREAATTT Part! ...And Continue SOON!

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx ghazal 4 ur comments

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 liking the part golu

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 ur commnets ashi i think that this is the best commnets which i've ever got

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Aisha Tanvir @Ashi91

17 years ago dis is the best fanfic i've ever read ..do continue soon

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
No thanx 4 ur comments yar u liked the part that enough 4 me will cont soon

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 liking Guriya
dont worry sujal k saath bura kuchh nahi hoga

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
No thanx ana dear dont cry patner
kashish lakh bura chahe to kya hota hai?
kya hota hai?
haan yad aaya
wohe hota hai jo manzoor-e- RS hota hai

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RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago Thanx jyothi will cont very soon

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago Thanx 4 ur comments soon u'll know what will happent to them & will cont soon

Chantelle @Bolly*_Crazed 17 years ago Pheww...Fianlly caught up..after soo many parts...Very Very nice...And Why did Kashish tell Sujal to Leave?...I Wonder when shez going to tlel him..how much she loves..him...N E Wayz...GREAATTT Part! ...And Continue SOON!

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago Thanx ghazal 4 ur comments

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago Thanx 4 liking the part golu

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago Thanx 4 ur commnets ashi i think that this is the best commnets which i've ever got

Aisha Tanvir @Ashi91 17 years ago dis is the best fanfic i've ever read ..do continue soon

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago No thanx 4 ur comments yar u liked the part that enough 4 me will cont soon

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago Thanx 4 liking Guriya dont worry sujal k saath bura kuchh nahi hoga

RK @Rajeev_gr8 17 years ago No thanx ana dear dont cry patner kashish lakh bura chahe to kya hota hai? kya hota hai? haan yad aaya wohe hota hai jo manzoor-e- RS hota hai

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RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx jyothi will cont very soon

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 ur comments soon u'll know what will happent to them & will cont soon

Chantelle @Bolly*_Crazed

17 years ago Pheww...Fianlly caught up..after soo many parts...Very Very nice...And Why did Kashish tell Sujal to Leave?...I Wonder when shez going to tlel him..how much she loves..him...N E Wayz...GREAATTT Part! ...And Continue SOON!

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx ghazal 4 ur comments

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 liking the part golu

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 ur commnets ashi i think that this is the best commnets which i've ever got

Aisha Tanvir @Ashi91

17 years ago dis is the best fanfic i've ever read ..do continue soon

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
No thanx 4 ur comments yar u liked the part that enough 4 me will cont soon

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
Thanx 4 liking Guriya
dont worry sujal k saath bura kuchh nahi hoga

RK @Rajeev_gr8

17 years ago
No thanx ana dear dont cry patner
kashish lakh bura chahe to kya hota hai?
kya hota hai?
haan yad aaya
wohe hota hai jo manzoor-e- RS hota hai