The Family Circus

The Family Circus Completed G

Chapter 11

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apra
apra @apra 17 years ago
rightly said it has to be dead serious but yes just for 3-4 parts and then we will enjoy the circus
Sir-Please
Sir-Please @Sir-Please 17 years ago amazing part poor kripa but she deserved it "beta you know angad is a real bad singer… once when he was singing in the bathroom a donkey had come at our door step.. and you compared him with zaib" said kussum laughing...loved this line and it waz soo funny i waz talkin 2 ma frend while reading it and she thought i was laughing at her since she has to care of her annoying bro's poor nimmo arghh stupid kunal luking 4ward to reading more and i thought after this part it waz gonna be dead serious but u just said itz gonna be jokes/comedy cont soon hot_girl_252539008.5841435185
mebearynice
mebearynice @mebearynice 17 years ago hi apra just read ur ff its awesome plz cont soon
Anandhini
anandhini @Anandhini 17 years ago hey apra i just read ur ff and its awesome you are doing a great job luv sweety
illuminated.
illuminated. @illuminated. 17 years ago COMEDY?????? OKKKK!!! NVM CONT SOOOOOOON I AM STILL WAITINGGGG!!!! Saraa
mannat.urwish
Simran @mannat.urwish 17 years ago awsome part i feel really bad for nimmo cont soon
..oneOone..
Ana @..oneOone.. 17 years ago hey apra dear kia part tha yaar me feeling really sorry about nimmo me just wanna kill kunal how can hee anjali & angad did too well with kripa song on angad aj na chooron ga tujhe dam dama dam tune kia samjha hai mujhe dam dama dam cont soon dear lolz ana
apra
apra @apra 17 years ago

well by invader they mean that kripa kavy and kunal don't belong to this family and they have just come to invade their privacy
dont get so confused this fanfic will have only comedy now onwards
illuminated.
illuminated. @illuminated. 17 years ago COPNT SOOOOOON I AM WAITING EAGERLYYY TO READ MORE AND MORE!!!! Saraa
illuminated.
illuminated. @illuminated. 17 years ago okk I AM DONEWITH THANKING so here are my comments: AWESOM, MINDBLASTING, AMAZING, MINDBLOWING and FATASTIC it was worthreading and waiting!! POOOOR NIMMMMMO i feeeel realllly bad for herrr ARGHHHHH kunalll these guyssss are always soo hungryy!! KRIPA i feeel like laughing wen i read tht she was the joke of the aprty!! POOR HER !!!! Saraa
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