Ok I know that was quite a long wait for all of you but I could not help it as I had my exams , and they are still going on just one paper left .
Part 7J
RecapJ
Angad plans to make kripa the biggest fool of the party , kunal rapes nimmo and a truth revealed that kunal and nimmo are married
ContinuedJ
Nimmo lay beneath kunal as a life less body she had lost all her sensing powers .. and by now she had also stopped screaming after all there was nothing left to loose now.. she had lost everything that belonged to her.. her eyes stared towards the ceiling and some vision flashed in front of her eyes
It was a dazed vision .. in which she saw a boy putting sindoor on a girl's maang .. and then another girl dying.. nimmo could not face it anymore she became unconscious but it made no effect on kunal his just kept kissing her body like a hungry beast
Kumud's marriage was being commenced with kshitij , as they took their pheras every single person showered them with flowers
After the marriage they took the blessings of the elders
"ok now time for the surprise kumud di" said anjali
"what surprise????" asked kumud
"well you will see" said anjali with a wink
Anjali then took a mike for announcement
"ladies and gentlemen today is a very special day of my kumud di life she has got married to the person she loves , the man of her dreams , and today we have decided to give her a gift… and the gift is that……… why don't you see it yourself????"
Just then the lights dimmed and the spot light fell on a person who had his back towards the audience
Dholak main tall hai
Payaal main chan chan
The guy then turns his face towards the audience and everyone is surprised to see angad
Dholak main taal hai
Payaal main chan chan
Ghoonghat main gori hai
Shere main sajaan
Jahaan bhi yeh jaaye
Baharien hi chayien
Yeh khushiyaan hi paaye
Mere dil ne sada di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai
Everyone is surprised to see angad singing… well no one knew (the family members ) that he had a good voice all they knew was that he was a real bad bathroom singer
As far as kripa was concerned she was shell shocked …. Well kripa had recognized the voice to be zaib's and now when she heard angad singing she just stood there speechless
And angad continued singing and dancing.. with anjali as his partner
Pyaar mila preet mili
Mere yaar ko
Badi pyaari jeet mili
Mere yaar ko
Khush hai jo dil
Main mehfil
Khush hai jo dil
Maine mehfil
Geeton se saaja di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai
Kumud was really happy she knew angad was zaib and she loved this surprise which angad had planned for her … where as kripa still dint know what to do????
Haar nahi jeet nahi
jahaan pyaar hai
jisme haar jeet ho
who kahaan pyaar hai
lagja gale
yaar mere
lag ja gale yaar mere
maine dil se sadaa di hai
mere yaar ki shaadi hai
mere yaar ki shaadi hai
in the end everyone joined the dance and song and started enjoying themselves just when the song ended everyone became silent … then kripa went near angad and just stood in front of him
"you are zaib??????" she questioned him
"no!!!!!!!!!!!" angad replied
"don't lie this was my zaib , you are zaib.. angad" she said looking into his eyes
"no kripa!!!!!!!!"
"NO PLEASE DON'T LIE" screamed kripa in tears
Just then another song played
Tum toh there
Tum toh there pardesi
Saath kya nibhaaoo ge
Subh phele gaadi se
Ghar ko laut jaaoge
Everyone was shocked to hear this song well after such a cute song from where the hell did this song play they thought
But soon enough a man came running towards angad
"sir sorry I put the wrong tape… I will just play the correct tape mr zaib's tape" he said this and he went back
Now everyone had realized that it was not angad who was singing it was angad who was just lip syncing on zaib's song
Kripa had also realized this that she had become the clown of the evening as she had recognized angad as zaib
"beta you know angad is a real bad singer… once when he was singing in the bathroom a donkey had come at our door step.. and you compared him with zaib" said kussum lughing
Hearing this everyone else laughed … and kripa had tears in her eyes .. she left the party and rushed towards her room
And angad and anjali totally enjoyed this "well serves you rite miss invader" they whispered to each other
Nimmo finally gained consciousness and she noticed that kunal was sleeping just beside her
Nimmo just got up from her bed in the state kunal had left her… she dint care that she was naked .. she tried to walk a few steps towards the door and she finally reached the door
She opened the door latch but just then her legs failed , her body was aching badly she just fell on the ground with a thud ..
Hearing the thud kunal woke up.. he realized what he had done to nimmo.. he felt ashamed of himself when he saw nimmo in that state.. he then walked near her and covered her body with the bed cover
Nimmo was too scared she just backed up seeing kunal
"no please spare me" she begged him crying
"nimmo" said kunal feeling guilty "sorry" he whispered
"please" said nimmo getting even more scared
"nimmo look" said kunal moving close to her
"what ever happened I am extremely sorry for it ..i know I should not have done this sorry" said kunal with his head bowed in front of nimmo
" sorry will not heal my wounds kunal you have ruined my life…now what else is left with me you have taken away everything that belonged to me by RAPING me" said nimmo
Kunal could not help it he was too guilty he could not even face nimmo now!!!!!!!!!
Kripa who noticed nimmo's door slightly opened peeped into it as she herd someone cry. She noticed nimmo in a distraught and kunal's head bowed in front of her .. she had also heard their conversation and was shocked
That's all for now hope you all like it
Coming up- shocked kripa's reaction!!!!!!!!!!!!
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apra @apra
+ 3
17 years ago
rightly said it has to be dead serious but yes just for 3-4 parts and then we will enjoy the circus
Sir-Please @Sir-Please
+ 5
17 years ago
amazing part poor kripa but she deserved it "beta you know angad is a real bad singer… once when he was singing in the bathroom a donkey had come at our door step.. and you compared him with zaib" said kussum laughing...loved this line and it waz soo funny i waz talkin 2 ma frend while reading it and she thought i was laughing at her since she has to care of her annoying bro's poor nimmo arghh stupid kunal luking 4ward to reading more and i thought after this part it waz gonna be dead serious but u just said itz gonna be jokes/comedy cont soon hot_girl_252539008.5841435185
mebearynice @mebearynice
17 years ago
hi apra
just read ur ff
its awesome
plz cont soon
anandhini @Anandhini
17 years ago
hey apra
i just read ur ff and its awesome
you are doing a great job
luv
sweety
illuminated. @illuminated.
+ 8
17 years ago
COMEDY?????? OKKKK!!!
NVM CONT SOOOOOOON I AM STILL WAITINGGGG!!!!
Saraa
Simran @mannat.urwish
17 years ago
awsome part
i feel really bad for nimmo
cont soon
Ana @..oneOone..
+ 5
17 years ago
hey apra dear
kia part tha yaar
me feeling really sorry about nimmo
me just wanna kill kunal
how can hee
anjali & angad did too well with kripa
song on angad
aj na chooron ga tujhe
dam dama dam
tune kia samjha hai mujhe
dam dama dam
cont soon dear
lolz
ana
apra @apra
+ 3
17 years ago
well by invader they mean that kripa kavy and kunal don't belong to this family and they have just come to invade their privacy
dont get so confused this fanfic will have only comedy now onwards
illuminated. @illuminated.
+ 8
17 years ago
COPNT SOOOOOON I AM WAITING EAGERLYYY TO READ MORE AND MORE!!!!
Saraa
illuminated. @illuminated.
+ 8
17 years ago
okk I AM DONEWITH THANKING so here are my comments:
AWESOM, MINDBLASTING, AMAZING, MINDBLOWING and FATASTIC it was worthreading and waiting!! POOOOR NIMMMMMO i feeeel realllly bad for herrr ARGHHHHH kunalll these guyssss are always soo hungryy!! KRIPA i feeel like laughing wen i read tht she was the joke of the aprty!! POOR HER !!!!
Saraa