An week later . Swara held on to her anger for so long , and she didn't know when a crack appeared in it . She didn't know how but back in the hospital when he ignored her ,it hurt more than words could convey . Then when she walked back home ,she realized that she was way out of line with her words accusing him yet again for not caring about his cousin . Last time she spoke in anger and when it led to their separation she held on to the anger ,this time she hated that she provoked him needlessly . She wanted to apologize but didn't know where to start , the sheer disbelief in his ...
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Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
New update on next page.. Yay me
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
I don't like to post an new update as an in-between post.. So don't mind the spamming
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
Hi Talia dearest, Well even people who read chapter four seems to ask me how she got pregnant.. So it quite Okay.. Atleast you didn't read it.. I know I never explicly said it.. But yay that me.. I am glad you liked it dear.. I really am.. I just love having your constant support.. That matter to me more than anything Not hospital error.. It was ragini plan though.. Will try to update by tonight.. So you can find answers to your questions in the update... I was going for six months.. So four months is bit less in my time frame.. I didn't want to keep them apart for more time.. So reduced it to four.. I know they were almost apart for an year sadly.. But atleast I didn't take an leap for five years right.. .. You will get your peace in the next update don't worry.. Love Nita P. S:" You might want to check page no 102 in forced thread two.. I have an surprise for you.. Well surprise I think..
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
@Helee :" Will post by tonight i think.. Thanks for being understanding.. It really helped to come up with the next update.. Happy ending that the goal.. Not cliffhanger as of yet.. Just an hint to the upcoming events.. That it.. Will try to update soon Love Nita
krishuuuuuuuuuu @krishuuuuuuuuuu
6 years ago
Nita honey...Again read couple of chapters together...sorry..missed 4th chapter somehow..finally read it...i was suddenly wondering how she got pregnant ??...then realised i have missed one chapter...hehe...So coming to updates 3 4 and 5...they were brilliant...i liked all dialogues and reasoning behind certain action of swasan...you certainly think very deeply darling and it shows in conversation between swasan...what both felt and wanted to say...n do...could not do...all...u effortlessly describe it through conversations...bravo darling...Loved how hospitals error lead to sanky thinking swara is going to die...that one week with her was blissfull for both swasan..but alas good thing do come to an end..again swasan seperated...which made me sad ..he misunderstood again...now im waiting for next..what will be his reaction to her pregnancy...???Anxious...Love uTalia...P.s...one thing...how exactly u manage to type 4..FOUR.. months of swasan seperation???just one number made my heart constrict in pain...how swasan got seperated for this long..first 6 months then 4...gosh nearly a year of meeting n seperations..now please dear unite them once in for all..i want peace...my mental peace...muahhh
Ginny potter @Bluehue
6 years ago
don't worry di...take your time and I love happy endings as well and i do believe there is nothing true love can not win over and swasan's love do deserve happy ending... and with the baby on the way they will have really happy ending I guess you can rant it out anytime di...don't worry this story is as wonderful as all your other stories... and I m quite relived that swara was again not hiding things from him...another cliffhanger... chalega if you update soon..just kidding take your time.lots of love...Helee.Helee2017-05-01 08:45:38
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
Thanks srividhya dearest, Don't worry about swasan.. Things will get much better soon.. Yeah it was ragini and laksh plan to reunite them.. Which backfired.. They will clear it up.. Don't worry.. Yep swara is pregnant.. Will try to update soon Love Nita
srividhya87 @srividhya87
6 years ago
Feeling very bad for swasan.. Ragini is behind hospital incident too.. Both r suffering a lot... Hope they clear their misunderstandings soon.. Swara is pregnant OMG... Wtng for next part
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
Hi Helee dearest, Will try to update soon but next one will end in cliffhanger too.. Swara is not hiding it from him. He was not available for her to tell him.. You will get her perspective next update and no she is not hiding it from him.. I understand your feel regarding swara and sanskar.. But I was determined on an happy ending so I has to resolve their issues and also it means sanskaar accepting her. Though I prefer my OS ending.. I had to give an happy ending to this one. So sorry if it turned out to be n disappointment. Even I am not happy with how this tale is shaping up.. I want to take a break and not do it till I find interest.. But at the same time I want to finish this one as well.. Sorry for the rant dear.. Unlike my FF this SS seems to be hard to write.. But will try to update soon.. Thanks once again for the lovely feedback Love Nita
NitaReid2017-05-01 02:41:23
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
6 years ago
Hi showrav, Thanks showrav.. Yeah sad one indeed.. Things will get better from now on.. Yeah initially I thought of going for six months, then changed to three finally decided on four I don't think he will accept her for the kid.. But he will be there for her.. Insecurities will play a huge part indeed.. Will try to update soon showrav Love Nita