Chapter 17

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Re-cap:-  Muskaan to keep fast. The sargi in the morning.


M:- "Rahul..main tumse bahut gusa hun."

R:-  "Hey bhagwan. Ab maine kya kiya??"

M:-  "Meri mehendi toh dekhi hi nahin.."

R:-  "Arre haan. Itna ladne ko kisne kaha tha." (Ignoring her "haww") "Bahut hi khubsurat lag rahe hai..bilkul tumhare tarah. "  He smiled.

She blushed & took her hand away..but he caught it & enntwingled his fingers with her.

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PART-17


He bought both their hands up & kissed it. As they were enjoying their intimate moments , they were interrupted by their family members. There were sounds of giggles & all eyes where on them. It was really very embarrassing for both of them.

R:-  "Woh ..Muskaan ke haath main lag gaye thi na..to main..usse khila raha tha.."

P:-  "Rahul..Humne tujhse pucha kya?" She giggled & all others giggled with her.

R.M(mom) :-  "Haiye Main mar javan..kitna sona munda hai mera." (Doing the vari-vari thing) Muskaan puttar tu na badi lucky hai.."

Rahul grinned at her...She just smiled.

   "Ab tu ye Karva Chaut karke isse dekha de..Ke tu bhi isse kinna pyaar karti hai..Haan ji?"

M:-  "Ji mummyji.."

Rahul's mum hugged both of them and all applauded.

In the room:-

Rahul was on the laptop studying some of his cases. Muskaan was on a bed reading a woman's magazine. She looked at the page & looked at Rahul.

M:-  "Rahul.." She said in a sweet voice.

R:-  "Haan."

M:-  "Main agar tumse kuch puchun to tum mere sawalon ka jawab do ge?"

R:-   He closed his laptop & turned 2 her. "Kaise sawal."

M:-  She got happy. " Iss book main hai. Ke tumhara pati tumse kitna pyaar karta hai." She said excitedly.

R:-   He gave her a wierd look & turned 2 his laptop.

M:-  "Arre..kya hua?"

R:-   "Tum aise faltu magazines kahan se leker aati ho?"

M:-  "Tumhare behen ne mujhe diye hai!  Ab mujhe sab samajh aa raha hai..tum mujhse pyaar hi nahin karte..is liye tum in sawalon ke jawab nahin dena chahte."   (Sad tone almost 2 cry)

R:-  He kept his hand on his fore-head. Sometimes she could be so stupid.  He got up & sat next 2 her. "Pucho. Leken jaldi mere paas time nahin hai."

M:-  She smiled in an excited way. "Ok. Pehla sawal. Agar maine ek din ek nayi recipe try ki, aur woh achi nahin bani, to tum kya karoge?"

R:-  "Umm..main uss waqt khalunga..main tumhe hurt nahin karna chahunga."

M:-  She blushed. "Ok..2 sawal.  Mere baare main tumhe sabse acha kya lagta hai?" She rested her cheek on her palm & looked at him with a smile.

R:-   This made him sort of uncomfortable. "Umm..mujhe kya acha lagta hai.." He thought in his mind..which din give him any ans..I hav2 give all postive answers otherwise..

        He slowly peeped in to the book & saw an option..."Eyes" ...He thought for a min.."Yes..eyes.."

She gave him a wierd look.

      "Tumhare aankhen.."  She blushed like never before.

"Acha. 3 sawal. Humare pehle dance ki date."  She was going away from the book questions. But she really wanted him 2 ans.

"Umm..Aisa book main lekha hai?"

"Ye kaan-khajura mujhe hamesha kaise pakad leta hai  !!" She thought.  "Nahin hain leken tum mujhe batao na."

"Mujhe date kaise yaad reh sakta hai?"

" 17th June 1991. 10th std main."

His mouth was wide open. "What??"

"Haan."

"Tumhe ab tak yaad hai?"

"Iski nahin mujhe sabki date yaad hai."

"Ok. To batao hamara 1st kiss?"

"Umm..28th Dec 2007."

His mouth was open again. "Tumhe to history lena chaiye tha.." he started giggling. "Actually sab ladkiyan aise hi hotin hai."

"Toh ye achi baat hai na?"

"Yes. Yes. Very good. Okay mujhe kaam hai main jaata hoon." He was abt to get up.

"Arre..leken mera quiz.."

"Tum to waise hi dusre sawal puchke cheating kar rahi ho.."

"Acha..ab nahin karungi. Promise"

He sighed & sat very close to her. "Muskaan main tumse kitna pyaar karta hun..uske liye kya tumhe ek silly se quiz ki help leni padegi?"  His voice was nearly in whispers.

Trying to be confident. "Haan. Kyun nahin?"

He caught her shoulders with a tight grip. "Really?"

Struggling to move. "Haan."

"Main tumse itna pyaar karta hoon..ke tum to wahan tak pahunch bhi nahin sakti."

Sacarstic." Oh!"

"Tumhe ye sab mazak lag raha hai?" leaving her.

"Rahul..mujhe pata hai ke tum mujhse "kitnaaa" pyaar karte ho.main to aise hi time-pass kar rahe thi." Smiled & hugged him.

"Time-pass..now I get it. " She chuckled.

Holding her ears. "Sorry?"

"Phirse tumne aisa kiya na...toh phir main..."

"Toh phir kya..??"

He softly kissed her forehead.

"Oh. To mujhe ye baar-baar karna padega,.." She laughed.

Coming close. "Mujhe koi problem nahin hai."

Pushing him away & laughing. "Koi zaroorat nahin hai.main jaa rahi hun..byeeee..."

"Arre..leken suno..." laughing. "Pagal."

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Rahul..entered his room at evening. He had just visited a government hospital & offered to help for a case. He came home bushed. All he wanted was a hot shower & good hours of sleep. he was hungry too. But when he tried to open the door..it was locked. "Ye muskaan bhi na!" He thought. He knocked the door & said that it was him. To his astonishment, it was not Muskaan's but his sisters voice.
        "Paanch min baad aana.."

  "Ye di yahan kya kar rahi hai? He thought.

"Di mujhe kaam hai darwaza kholo."

He heard Muskaan's voice say "Open the door."

And when the door opened , there stood Muskaan in a shimmering red sari. He hair was clipped. Dark kohl eyes with minimal eyeliner covered her eyes. She had very little make-up on..but then too , she looked so BEAUTIFUL. All his stress vanished in a second looking at her fresh face. He smiled at her. She gave a tensed smile.

"Di jaldi karo na..late ho raha hai.."

Her saree was only half-done...

"Ek second..yahan se pakdo.." She did as she said.

"Pooja..Rohit aagaya..jaldi neeche aayo.." A voice screamed. (Rohit her husband)

She left Muskaan's saree.  "Rohit..aagaya...bye.." She ran down with full of excitement.

"Arre..Di..meri saree..kahan ja rahe ho??" She stopped. There was no use. She had already gone down.                
                                             "Haiyyo rabba. Ab kya karun?"
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She tried to adjust it by herself. But she spoilt it. The saree got stuck in her shoe heel & she stumbled..but when Rahul is there can she fall? She caught his arm & removed her shoes.

       "Thanks Rahul."

"Its k. Mujhe dikhao main band deta hoon." He pulled her with the saree.

"Nahin main karlungi..chodo..main karlungi..maine kaha na main karlngi..arre chodo na."

"Muskaan." He said in a stern voice.

"Main karlungi.." She replied in a soft voice.

After putting the saree..Muskaan glanced at Rahul. He was staring at her. She felt a little awkward. She looked away.
   
           "Rahul.."

He turned her face. "Aaj tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho.." he said in a seductive way.

She moved away to sit on the dressing table chair.

      "Woh..mummy ne kaha ke pehla  karva-chat hai to thoda heavy..kuch jyada heavy ho gaya hai na?"

        "Jaisa bhi hai tum bohot achi lag rahi ho."

        "Umm..woh case kaisa tha..??"  trying to change the topic.

                                 "Ya..it was good."

         "Maine tumhare kapde nikal diye hai..jaldi neeche aa jao."

                          Rahul glanced at the clothes neatly arranged on the bed.

              "Babaji ab ye chand jaldi se nikal jaye..zoro ki bhuk lag rahi hai.."

                     He loved it when she suddenly got back to normal. He chuckled.

"Haso tum..hmph..bhooki to main mar rahi hun..tumhe kya.." He stood there smiling and adjusted her hair.

Hitting his hand. "Rahul..kya kar rahe ho kharab ho jayenege."

"Kya hai??"

"Kuch nahin..main neeche jaa rahe hun."

"Ruko na saath chalte hai."

"Acha theeke. Jaldi karo."

He took a quick shower & wore the clothes. As soon as he came out.

"Ye kya..tumne phirse apne buttons khule rakh diye." Reaching for them. "Tumhe ramp pe walk nahin karna."

He loved it when she took care of such small things. He tried o irritate her. "Ye kaho ke tumhe jalan hogi.."

"Kisse jalan hogi woh bhi mujhe??" Saying proudly.

"Sab ladkiyan jo mujhe ghoorti rahengii.."

Cutting him. "Dekh Rahul mujhe pareshan mat kar. Aur ab chal neeche." He laughed.

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Down they met Pooja's husband Rohit. Rohit & Rahul were child-hood friends. Rohit was a few years elder to him.  He was his first friend when he shifted to Patiala. A love-strory had begun of Rohit & Pooja..& he got them toghter..It was the happiest time of his life.
Rohit had his own bussiness in Delhi. He was a totally cool..enjoyable & fun-loving guy. He was a typical Punabi & also acted like one.

After a lot of wait , the moon finally came..Rahul's family had oragnised a big gathering as it was Muskaan's first karva chaut. Muskaan was the first girl to break her fast. RM were the center of attraction. They were made to stand in the middle while Muskaan's mom kep telling her what to do next. It was very embarassing for them.
As the fast was broken Muskaan rushed 2 the food. If she hadnt eaten for another minute..She would have defintey passed out.

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After all the eating..all the youngsters organized games for couples. There was one such naughty & fun game. The game was simple. There would be a newspaper on which all couples were to dance , without taking their foot out. As the music would stopped , the newspaper was 2 be folded. This was to be continued. Rahul got a good oppoturnity to be with Muskaan. During the dance he would keep staring at her which Muskaan hated.To fit in to the paper they were clunged together. Muskaan's arms were full-time around him & his around her waist. He irriated her till they reached the finals. Rahul-Muskaan & Pooja-Rohit were the final two couples. The paper now became pretty small paper..leaving place for only one person to stand.

           Rahul "Kya kehete ho jeeju? Uttha le?"

           "Main to utha lun..to nahin utha payega.." He replied laughing.

          "Aise kaise..assi bhi punjabi si.."

           "Rahul..no..yahan sab hai..."
 
            "Rohit..no..pls.." Pooja started to move away.

             "One..two..three.."

Both of them lifted their wives with them still shouting. There were loud claps from the youngsters..even the elders were enjoying the scene..A few mins passed..still they did not put their wives down. Muskaan had put her arms around Rahul for support.

                "Rahul..I hate you!!" She said blushing.

He touched his forehead with her hers.."But I love You." He softly whispered.

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All of the elders had departed to their rooms after a long day. The youngsters were gathered around the dining table with drinks..& small snacks..
They were playing spin the bottle with an empty wine bottle. It stopped to Muskaan.

        Rohit- "Ok..main Muskaan se kuch puchunga..tum hum sabko tumhare aur Rahul ki love-story from beginning to end sunao. I hope intresting ho..kyunki hum sabko bahut bore mar raha hai..Kyun guys..??"

All screamed a "YES"

            "Jiju..kya love-story..bas pyaar hogaya..aur phir shaadi.."

            "No..Mujhe pata hai ke ye ek bahut khubusrat kahani hai batao na..pls..tum chaho to Rahul bhi tumhe isme help kar sakta hai..."

She kept refusing..but she finally gave in.  

               "Acha theek hai..batati hun..hmm..Hamare love-story shuru huye.........................................."


To be continued....

Precap:-  Their love story from child-hood to now..

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