Chapter 14

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                                              Part 14

Note:- Ok..guys..firstly I wanna apolize..coz its almost a month since I updated. Something or the other happened then I was on a vacation n den was 2 lazy 2 type. This created
a biig mess of my story..nd past one week Im so confused abt the story-line myself. I sat up the night solving the whole mess..as few changes..nd Im bak. Many people
dunt even rem wt happ last chap..So a brief re-cap.

RM n AA at a medical camp--Anjali starts having feelings for Atul--Rahul's mom unwell--hav2 leave for Punjab--Rahul's mom is faking it.

Im extremely sorry abt my bad Punjabi..pls excuse..nd no offence.Embarrassed
 
At Sanjeevani:- In the Cafe.

All the 6 doctors sat around the table discussing.

Ri:- "Matlab aaj hi nikalna padega?"

M:- "Haan Riddhima..Hum to ulte ek din late hai."

An:- "But Rahul..how is she now? Unhe huya kya hai?"

R:- "I dont knw Angie..Di kuch bata hi nahin rahe. Mujhe to kuch bahut badi gadbad lag rahi hai."

At:- "Abey Rahul..tu ye kya bol raha hai?"

R:- "Chod na Atul..Patiala jayeege sab pata chal jayega. Abhi to main tum sab ko treat dene ke liye bulaya hai."

A:- "Treat?"

R:- "Yaa..umm..sort of a farewell party..leken mere taraf se."

All:- "Farewell party?"

R:- "Relax guys..hamesha ke liye nahin jaa rahe hum. Bas aise hi man kiya to.."

M:- "Oyye! Tum logon ko to khush hona chiaye..Kanjoos Rahul treat de raha hai.." All laughed..except Rahul who glared at Muskaan.

At:- "Chalo is baat pe hum sab muh meetha karte hai."

M:- "Chocolate pastries!"

A:- "Waiter. 6 chocolate pastries leke aana."

W:- "Sir ab to sirf 3 piece bache hai."

A:- "Theeke. Hum sab share kar lenge." The waited left & returned with 3 pastries.

AA:-

An:- "Atul tum mere saath share karoge? Mujhe thoda hi chahiye."

At:- "Su..sure..Anjali."

After a few seconds Anjali dropped her fork.

An:- "Oh! God!"

At:- "Koi baat nahin Anjali..tum mera lelo..maine jhoota nahin kiya hai." 

An:- (Smiled at his innocence.) "Thanks."

AR:-

Ri:- "Di..to Atul ke saath share kar rahe hai...aur Muskaan aur Rahul..to hume hi saath khana padega."

A:- "Its ok. Tum pura khalo. Mujhe nahin chaiye."

Ri:- "Arre nahin. Pls tum lo na. Mujhe koi problem nahin hai."

A:- "Sure?"

Ri:- "Haan."

A:- Smiled. "Ok."

RM:-

R:- "Muskaan tu mujhe de main aadha karta hun."  Pulling the plate. [sweet voice.]

M:- "Nahin tu chod main karti hun." Snatching the plate.

R:- "Tu karegi to bukhad jaise pura khajayige. Aur waise bhi tu maths main badi week hai." [snatching.]

M:- "Ullu de patthe..isme maths kahan se aa gaya."[snatching.]

R:- "Dono ko equally katna hai na..buddhu."[snatching.]

M:- "Rabbaji! Mujhe to pehle se pata tha ke tu pagal hai."[snatching.]

An:- "Guys!! STOP it!"

Ri:- "Tum dono lad kyun rahe ho?"

R:- "Nahin kuch nahin Riddhima.." [snatching.]  "Ab tu ruk." He said 2 Muskaan.

M:- Got up. "Ek kaam kar tu pura khale."

R:- "Really? Thanks!" [big smile.]

M:- Got angry. "Tujhe pura cake khana hai na? Le kha." She picked up the cake n smashed it on his face.

All got a shock.

R:- "Muskaan! You stupid! Sab mere aakhon main dal diya..kuch dikhaye nahin de raha hai."[ Trying 2 wipe it.]

M:- "Ohh..mere pati ko kuch dikhaye nahin de raha hai?" [sweetly brushing his hair.] "To ye le." She took the a glass of water n poured it over him in one-shot. "Hmph! Kha ab."

All made faces of disgust.

R:- Got up! "Tujhe to main chodunga nahin!"


At the airport.

M:- "Rahul ki bache! Tujhe yehi saasti flight mili thi?"

R:- "Babaji ka shukar hai ye to mil gaye."

M:- "Muskaan aise gandi flight main kabhi travel nahin karegi!"

R:- "Acha. To behti reh."

M:- "Rahuuuuuul...tujhe to main na!!" About 2 press his neck.

A:- "Muskaan..relaxx..." Taking her hand. "Airport hai..tumhara ghar nahin."(Seeing around. Giving fake smiles.)

M:- Making a sad face. "Ye flight achi nahin hai..hum koi dusri flight main jayegene."

R:- "Haan. Haan. Iske baap ke naukar helicopter leke humara intezaar kar rahe hai."

A:- "Thodi der ke liye bas karo. Chalo ab flight ka time ho gaya hai." he took Rahul's arm nd put it around Muskaan's waist. "Aise rahoge to logon ko thodi to feeling hogi ke tum dono ki shaadi ho chuki hai."

M:- "Oyee..feeling..hamare to sach main shaadi ho chuki hai. Kyun Rahul?"

R:- "Haan. haan. Tujhe koi doubt hai?" [Clearing his throat.] "Muskaan..chalen??" [sweet voice.]

M:- "Chalo na Rahul. " touching his nose & blushing

A:- "Ye inhe kya hogaya?" (Took a deep breath.) "Chodo na yaar..jaise main inhe samajh paunga..main jaata hun Riddhima ke paas." (Stopping in his tracks.) "Riddhima ke paas
kyun?" (Ruffled his hair.) "Riddhima ke paas nahin. Sanjeevani! Sanjeevani! Armaan! FOCUS!" (Started walking n left.)


After reaching. In the car with Rahul's dad.

R:- "Papaji mummji kaise hain?"

Rd:- "Umm..woh."

Flash-back:-

Pooja[Rahul's sister.] "Papaji ap Rahul aur Muskaan se kuch na kehna. Woh yahan aayenge to apne aap sab pata chal jayega. Agar woh mummy ke baare main puche to
baat tal dena. Theeke na? "

"Driver. Mujhe yahin pe uttar do. Inhe ghar le jao."

M:- "Papaji..kya hua?"

Rd:- "Kuch nahin Muskaan puttar mujhe kuch kam yaad aagaya. Main tumhe ghar pe milta hun."

Muskaan elbowed Rahul with a confused expression..but he also had the same expression.

At home:-

 Both of them got down. They were amazed 2 see so many people standing on the door 2 welcome them.

M:- (Whisperring) "Rahul..itne saare log kyun khade hai darwaze par?"

R:- "Aur sab haas bhi rahe hai..maine pehleli kaha tha ke kuch to gadbad hai. Chal. " He caught Muskaan's palm nd they started walking.

People were screaming. "Rahul-Muskaan aagaye!" Rahul's sister came running outside.

P:- "Rahul!" Muskaan! (hugging dem.)  Akhir tum aa hi gaye."

R:- "Yaa..mummy kahan hai."

P:- "Kya aate hi mummy mummy chalu ho gaya..mummy ka chamcha." Muskaan giggled.

R:- "Kya hai?"

M:- "K..kuch nahin.." Still giggling.

They cleared all the people & went inside the hall. Rahul's mom & dad were sitting on the sofa comfortably & giggling with the other family members. They were surrounded
with cousins..girls n boys.

P:- "Baitho dono."

R:- "Mummyji aap to bilkul theek.."

M:- "Lag rahe hai.." In a confused manner. "Aur papaji aap yahan?"

P:- "Pehle baitho. " Both of them sat down.  Other cousins came n sat wid dem leaving no place. They were struggling 2 be comfortable. Muskaan kept on sticking 2 Rahul.

R:- "Muskaan! ek kaam kar mere god main aake baith ja." He said it loudly so every1 started laughing. Both of them were red wid embarassment. "Acha ab chado. Pehle
batao ke ye sab kya ho raha hai?"

P:- "Kuch bhi to nahin..aap Patiala nahin aa rahe the..to hum ap dono ko lekar aagaye."

R:- "Di? Maine aapse ye expect nahin kiya tha. Aur mummyji aap bhi."

Rm(mom):- "Puttar tussi shaadi ke baad ek bar bhi ghar aaye. Ab phir hum kya karen?"

M:- "Woh. Mummyji kaam main phas gaye the..to time hi.."

Rm:- "Chup! Ab bas mouth shut!" They both became silent. "Ab tum log aa hi gaye ho to ek mahina ruk kar jaana."

R:- "Mumyji leken.." She cut him.

Rm:- "Ine saare log tumse milne ke vasste intezaar kar rahe hai..milo sabse." She got up. "Waise tum dono ne safed(white) kapde kyun pehen ke rakhe hai! Koi mar-shar gaya
kya?" [Rahul was wearing a white shirt n Muskaan was wearing a white n black churidar.]

R:- "Mummyji aap ye kaise baatien kar rahe hai!"

Rm:- (smiling) "Acha..tum jake kapde badal lo..main tum dono ke liye changa ghee da khana banwati hun..Panner , Aloo , dal , butter chicken aur phir lassi" She chuckled.

R:- (Whispering) "Mujhe to sun ke hi indigestion ho raha hai."

M:- "Oyye chup kar." (Hitting him slightly.) She got up smiling 2 meet every1. All of Rahul's cousins were there. Rohan , Preet , Jasmeet , Kamya , Chirag & his wife Ritu.

Rahul & Muskaan met all of them. Rahul's smiles were fake ...but Muskaan was very happy..as all of them were her good frnds..& always had a gaala-time during their child-hood & last during her wedding.

R:- "Acha ab hum change karke aate hai..Chale Muskaan?"

M:- "Tu ja..main bad main aati hun."

R:- "Chup-chap chal." Pulling her hand.

J:- "Kyun bhaiya ab bhabhi ke bina ek min nahin chalta?" All started hi-fying nd giggling. Rahul gave a fake smile.

In the room:-

R:- "Yeh kahan phas gaye."

M:- "Oyye tu kya bol raha hai?"

R:- "Muskaan hum yahan se bhag jaate hain..agar main yahan par aur ruka na..main def. pagal ho jaunga."

M:- "Tujhe jaana hai to jaa..main to yahan pe enjoy karne waali hun.." Lying down on the bed. "Arre 7.00 baj gaye?! Mera TV programme! Remote kahan hai.."

R:- "Muskaan no ways..jo apna faltu programme hai kahin aur jake dekh..mujhe neend aa rahi hai. (yawns & lies down)

M:- "Phitte muh..tu sona baad main..pehle remote dhund.." She was searching everywhere..den she pushed Rahul's pillow. "Mil gaya!"

R:- "Ouch! Muskaan! Kamse kam bol to deti." She took the pillow & kept it on her lap & switched on the TV.

M:- "Maine last episode nahin dekha to recap waqt apna muh band rakhna."  Rahul went & lied down on the pillow on Muskaan's lap.

R:- (sweetly) "Muskaan pls TV band karna..dekh main kitna sweetly bol raha hun."

M:- "Chup! Chalu ho gaya."  After 10 mins during the first break. "Wow! Aaj to mazza aayega..sab jail main jayenge." (laughs)

R:- (keeping his palm over his eyes.) "Iska kuch nahin hoga!"

M:- "Rahul chocolate khayaga?"

R:- "Umm..ha.."

M:- "Arre tujhe to ye chocolate pasand hi nahin hai na! Chado." She opened a cadbury chocolate. "Haiyyo rabba..ye to pighal (melted) gaye. Ab kaise khaun?"

The add got over & the programme started again. When it ended , Rahul who was fast asleep , opened his eyes.

R:- "Finally!" He saw Muskaan & started laughing.

M:- "Main tujhse joker jaise dikhti hun kya? Jab dekho hasta rehta hai!"

R:- "Muskaan tune pure naak ko choclate khilaye hai. (laughing)

M:- (touched her nose.) "Kahan?"

R:- "Ek second. Thoda neeche aa." She bent her head down. He wiped it with his finger. "Yahan." He said poiting 2 his finger. Still smiling.

She also smiled.  R-M music started playing.  The smile became intense..both of them kept luking at each other..as if there was no world..jus dem..time had no limits..Rahul kept his hand on Muskaan's head & pulled her closer..She shivered but went close. And jus then the door opened.

P(pooja) :- "Rahul-Muskaan..tum to Nupur se mile hi nah.."(clears her throat)

Both of them got up in a jerk. They're cheeks turned red. Pooja closed Nupur's eyes.

N:- "Rahul mama se milna hai."

P:- "Beta..Abhi nahin.woh busy hai..hum baad main baat karenege..chalo.." (giggling)

Rahul & Muskaan dint say anything for like a min. Rahul went & locked the door. Muskaan shut the TV & started unpacking. When Muskaan dint say anything for a few more mins..Rahul got tensed.

R:- "Muskaan. Yahan aao." He pulled her hand & made her sit next 2 him. "Kya hua?"

M:- "Kuch nahin. Ab mujhe chodo mujhe kam hai." (got up)

R:- "Baithe raho."

M:- "Acha theeke..waise bhi jab tak main tumhe bataungi nahin ke kya hua..tum mujhe uthne nahin doge?"

R:- (He was glad that she was bak 2 her normal self.) Hmm,,to bolo.

M:- "Woh..agar di ne kisi se kuch kaha to..phir sab .."

R:- "Muskaan...tum itni si baat ke liye tension le rahe ho?"

M:- "Oyye ye tujhe itni si baat lagti hai?"

R:- "Ok. Relax. Main sab sambhalunga." (smiles) "Ab change karlo..varna mummyji phir gussa ho jayegi."(got up..)

M:- "Haan." She got up.  "Arre Rahul.."

R:- "Kya ?"

M:- "Im sorry...wohh..kal maine tum par cake daala."

R:- "Sirf cake?"

M:- "Aur paani bhi ...ok..Im sorry."

R:- "Tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise first time ye kiya ho."

M:- "Leken first time sorry bol rahe hun." (innocently)

R:- (smiling at her innocence)Hmm..

There was a knock on the door.

"Puttar khana lag gaya hai...neeche aa jao."

Rahul lied down with his eyes shut.

R:- "Ab sab mujhe zabardasti woh ghee wala khana khilayegne.."

M:- "Aww..so sadd" She kissed him on the cheek.

R:- "Aur ye kis liye tha?"

M:- "Aiwayeeeee.."

R:- (smiling) "Muskaan..." (with a sweetness n his voice.) "I love you."

M:- "I love you too."

After dinner:-

All were sitting & talking 2 Muskaan..asking her abt her new life...nd other stuff. Pooja was standing alone. Rahul quitely went & stood nxt 2 her. He was talking in whispers.

R:- "Hello ji." She started giggling. "Ok. Di enough."

P:-  "Sorry..ok bolo.."

R:- "Dekho room main jo hua agar apne kisi se kahana to dekho.."

P:- "Oh! To mere CHOTA bhai mujhe dhamki de raha hai?"

R:- "Jo samajhna hai samjhlo."

P:- "Waise tumhe chaiye to main room ko decorate karvan lun?"  He was glaring at her.  "Arre..pehle baar dono saath main is kamre main rehne waale ho..suhagrat huye na?
Maine kuch galat kaha kya?"

R:-  (Cheeks red) "Dii dekho.."

P:- "Hayee..Gal tamatar ki tarah lal ho gaye hai.." (pulling his cheeks) giggling.

R:- "Haan..apke bhi to ho jate hai..jabhi Mr. Chadda ka naam lete hai."

P:- (smile faded) Rahul no.."

R:- "Kyun..Mr. Vikram Chadda ki Mrs. Chaddi." He burst out laughing.

P:- "Rahul main mummy ko jake bolungi.."

R:- "Tum to hamesha 5 saal ki toh rahogi..Mrs. Chaddi. jao bolo.."

P:- "Uhh! Rahul!" She started running behind him.

They were running around the whole house. Shocking almost half the people.

Rm:- "Puttar shant ho jao. Ae ki kar rahe ho?" (tensed)

P:- "Mummyji ye mujhe chida raha hai.." Still running behind him.

R:- "Jhoote..maine kuch nahin kiya..marna hai na mar.." He stopped.

P:- "Tu ruk!"

As soon as he was abt 2 hit him..he started running up he stairs..She ran behind him.

Muskaan sat there smiling thinking.."Bechara phitte muh..hamesha mar khata rehta hai."


After 2 hrs, All the cousins sat there playing cards.

R:-  "Mera show."

Jas:- " Itni jaldi!"

Roh:- "Oye disturb mat kar."

Kam:- "Dono chup."

P:- "Tum log chinta mat karo..main Rahul ko jeetne nahin dungi."

Sitting far-away was Muskaan n Rahul's mummyji.

Rm:- "To puttar tu khush to hai na?" She dint hear properly as she was busy luking at Rahul.

M:- "Huh? Kya? Khush? Haan..main bahut khush hun. " (embarassed smile.)

Rm:- "Rahul tenu pareshan-wareshan to nahin karda?"

M:- "Karta hai..leken main usse zyada karti hun.." (wierd laugh)

Rm:- "Jeende reh puttar..ab bache khush ho to.." She started telling stories.

Mean-while RM were talking thru their eyes.

R:- "Idhar ao!"

M:- "Kaise?" She said rolling her eyes & poiting 2 mummyji.

R:- He hit his head. He elbowed his sister. "Di."

P:- "Kya hai..?"

R:- "Pls Muskaan ko yahan leke aona..bechari bore ho rahi hai.."

P:- "Tujhe badi fikar ho rahi hai?"

R:- "Di..promise main apko chidaunga nahin..pls..pls.."

P:- "Acha. Taher." She walked over 2 where they were sitting. "Mummyji aap yahan hai? Papaji apko kabse dhund rahe hai."

Rm:- "Acha ji..to pehle bolna ni..Muskaan puttar to ja..gud night hai.."

M:- "Gud night." (smiling) Ater she went. "Thanks didi."

P:- "Its ok..ab chalo apke pati dev intezar kar rahe hai."  She blushed. "Arre sab jaga banyi..bhabhji aa gaye.."

Every1 sitting near Rahul moved away giving space 2 Muskaan.

R:- "Toh finally." He whispered in her ear.

M:- "Game par dhyan de."

R:- "Ya..game."

After a few mins..Rahul slowly brushed his finger on Muskaan's hand.

M:- "Oyye kya kar raha hai?" She was abt 2 move her hand when he took it in his. "Rahul chod kisi ne dekh liya to?"

Ch:- "Rahul ab aage to khel..jaldi..Muskaan ke aate hi concentration gayab?"

R:- "Haan.." He threw one card..nd again started talking 2 Muskaan. "Kuch kaha kya?"

M:- "Haan mera haath chod." (shivering)

Ro:- "Bhabhi wahan se paani ki bottle dena.."

She looked at him n a jerk.

M:- "Paani haan.." She cudnt reach her right hand...nd Rahul was holding the left. "Rahul chod."

Ro:- "Bhabhi left hand se li jiye naa.."

M:- "Haan..woh.."

P:- "Kya ho raha hai?"

Rahul put both their hands a lil up..Muskaan was shocked..nd den left itt. She quickly passed the water.

"Thank god no1 saw!" she thought.

P:- "Ahem! To romance chal raha tha.." She told every1.

M:- "Oh! no!"

P:- "Main to pehle hi keh rahe thi..aaj to inhe akela chodo..inki suhagrat jo hai.." All were confused. "Arre..tum sab samjhe nahin..? Main samjhati hun..Ab is ghar ke kamre main dono pehli baar saath rehene waale hai..to huye na suhagrat?"

All shouted.

M:- "Tu kamre main chal teri kher nahin hai.."

P:- "Ok..to sab pack-up. Sab utho..Rohan lights off kar do..Bhaiya bhabhi chaliye naa.." When they were entering..Pooja let Muskaan go inside..but wen Rahul was gonna go,
she blocked the door..

R:- "Di..kya kar rahe ho?"

P:- "Pehle baar to mujhe naik nahin mila..is baar haath se jaane nahin dungi..chalo nikalo 10 ,000."

R:- "10,000! Di dunt tell me apne ye sab 10,000 ke liye kiya."

P:- "Ofcourse! Tumhare aur Muskaan ke romance main mera kya kaam..Ab chalo jaldi se paise nikalo..varna chat pe jaake sona padega."

R:- "Mera wallet kamre main hai.."

P:- "Mujhse jhoot bolna band kar."

R:-  "Di! Kya main ghar main paise leke ghumunga? Aap mujhe mera wallet lane dijiye.."

P:- "Main leke aate hun."

R:-  "Apko nahin milega."

P:-  "Kyun?" She took off the hand she blocked.

R:- "Nahin milega." With this he slowly went inside & shut the door. "Hahaha! di apko 10 kyun main 20,000 deta hun na!"

P:- (stamping her foot.) "Rahul! I hate you!"  She went off.

R:- "Wow! yaar! im 2 gudd! Di se to peecha chuta..ab.." He turned.

M:- "Mujhse kaise chutega.." (hands on her hips.) "Kaan khajure..tera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai? Sab kya sochenge?"

R:-  "Muskaan! relax! sab mere dost jaise hain..kisi se kuch nahin kahenge.." She was fuming. "Aur jab sabke saamne hum lad sakte hai..to pyaar bhi to kar sakte hain?"She started blushing..  "So am i right?"

M:-  (hitting him on his chest) "I love you."

R:- "Din main do baar! Aaj to baarish aayegi!"

M:-  "Rahul!!" (giggling)

R :- "I love you too."

Ok..So my longest chap till date! Pls do most comments..I req the silent readers 2 do the same! Thanks!

                                -Mansi

 

 

*mansibhatia*2008-09-15 08:12:38

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