Chapter 10
OK- well, i just read ur update areej and i m so honoured!! THANX SO Much! so...to say thank u im once again gona dedicate this part to AREEJ!
RECAP:
KAN- Kripa I think I know how u can get him. 
K- (excited) HOW HOW??? 
KAN- Its time for u to get a makeover! 
K (groans) NOOOOO!!!!
KAN- u want him right? 
K- fine! 
They leave after drinking the coffee and shop. We see Kripa trying on many clothes and Kanika Didi shaking her head all the time. Then we only c the door open and then we c Kanika Didi's face and she nods.
Then they head to the salon, get Kripa's hair done. All this time we only c Kanika Didi's face. Then, Kanika didi gives Kripa a lesson on make-up and we c Kripa hand moving around the make-up and applying (we don't get to c her whole face however).
Then, after she puts on her make-up, Kripa puts on her clothes and is about to step out……
TODAYZ UPDATE:
She steps out and everyone staring at Kripa with their mouths hanging open.
KAN- WOWWW!!
Kripa blushes. 
K- (Meekly) can we go?
Kanika Didi manages to nod and they leave. As they walk on the street, all the teenage and even some old, fat men stare at Kripa. A few girls give Kripa an envious look. Kripa just smiles at them and walks on.
(One thing u guys should know-Kripa is wearing high heels and she doesn't have much practice with heels.) As Kripa walks, she stumbles and falls right into the arms of a cute boy (played by Ejaz Khan. In my fan fic he's 16). He keeps staring at her and she starts blushing. Seeing her blush he puts her on her feet.
K- (Stammers) umm….i…um…I'm really sorry…
Cute Boy- I'm not.
Kripa gets really embarrassed and looks at her high heels.
Cute Boy- Hi! Im Dan Vaidya.
Kripa- Hi im Kripa Sharma.
Just then Kanika Didi screams.
KAN- OMG! Are YOU Dan? Sahil's brother?
D- Ya! Do u know him?
KAN- yes. He's Ankit's best friend!
D- Ankit Bhaiya? How do u know him?
KAN- he's my boyfriend.
D- O kewl…
Dan then turns to Kripa.
D- Wat about you Kripa? Do you have a boyfriend?
Kripa shakes her head embarrassed like hell.
Dan just grins.
Just then Kanika Didi's phone rings and its none other than Ankit. They talk for about a minute. The phone call ends and Kanika Didi turns to Kripa and Dan.
KAN- hey im really sorry but I have to leave!
K- But what am I supposed to do??
D- Ill take u wherever u want!
Kripa blushes. (She's doin a lot of blushin!)
Kanika Didi hesitates but remembers how Ankit always says that Dan was the most decent guy he met.
KAN- OK! Here Kripa…this is 100 pounds for your shopping and food and transportation. If u need more than just call me up.
K- Ok.
Kanika Didi leaves after saying good bye.
D- So…where do u wanna go?
Kripa just shrugs.
D- Ok…so well just go to……..umm…how about Madame Tussads?
K- Ok.
Dan puts out his hand and Kripa takes it after a little bit of hesitation.
PREVIEW: Hook-ups and Break-ups.
NOTES:
Kripa and her whole family (as wel as extended family) are rich.
And wenever u c words or senteces in blue- tat means that this is an important thing that i added on.
And wenever u c words/sentences in red (like right now!) it means that those words are my comments.
K- well, i hope this part was gud.....i wil cninue soon!
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