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Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
@Showrav I understand you too showrav.. Well I am going for too much shock..Gonna update now..
showrav @showrav24
7 years ago
I understood what u wanted to say what made me mad or angry on swara is her allegations on sanskar for laksh vanished & walk out on relation.I would accepted their separation if it for them.little shock ok but not much ok.Bye
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
[QUOTE=Nupur_5]
As Nynu said, Swara seems getting away easily & I neither want that nor like that! Bt I believe you when you said it's just the beginning & I will be patient!I don't care if I sound like a sadist but I want Swara tarpaoying for Sanskaar! Me too can't forgive Swara easily this time! And I trust you that you will do a lot better job than CVs :) Love,~ Nupur[/QUOTE]
Hi Nupur, Well guys.. I get it.. I really do. But believe me I am not planning out it so easily for swara.. There will be pain and heartbreak down the line.. Like you never expected before.. Okay I am exaggerating but I am not going to go the simple way this time.. Swara being in the house. Won't change anything. Wait till you read the next one.. You will be surprised Love Nita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
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Hi Sushma dearest.. Well Ragini and laksh are selfish to their core.. It won't change any time soon. You will find there reasons soon enough. But we'll not yet.. Maybe two three updates later.. Swara mission will be get back her love.. But it won't be easy at all.. You will find out when I update the next chapter.. Love Nita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Hi Showrav, Thanks showrav..Really happy to know you like the update .. Well I am trying to recreate the track.. But it hard.. I don't want to end up disappointing everyone.. But I am not going to change my train of thoughts.. I really hope you end up liking it While I want to make swara beg and plead.. Sanskaar stone cold to her attempts that doesn't how I imagine sanskaar to behave.. Hence he will melt at her slightest presence... But still the scars she created will always always plays it part in keeping him away from her.. I hope you get what I am trying to say.. You will understand it when you read the next update.. I intend to shock you all.. Love Nita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you like the update so far.. Well that is swara for you. And sanskaar will always have hope.. Will try to update soon dear.. Love Nita
Nupur @Nupur_5
7 years ago
As Nynu said, Swara seems getting away easily & I neither want that nor like that! Bt I believe you when you said it's just the beginning & I will be patient!I don't care if I sound like a sadist but I want Swara tarpaoying for Sanskaar! Me too can't forgive Swara easily this time! And I trust you that you will do a lot better job than CVs :) Love,~ Nupur
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Second that ..Add me too for the certified sadist when it comes to Swara .. and yes I believe Nita.like she said Its juts start .. and now Sanskaar's miss you is going to get into her headNita ... I say again .. anything that has got to do with Swara's redemption .. I love it and same goes here LoveLucky[/QUOTE]
Thanks Lucky dearest for the vote if confidence.. I try to make it work.. As I said I try. I might set you all up for an ultimate fail. I have thought it again and again till I have managed to have the draft for next two updates . But this SS is indeed an tricky one. I really hope to do justice to it.. Love Nita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Take your time showrav..
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Hi Divya dear.. I totally understand you and your disappointment but as I told Nyna.. This is so not over . You might not like it now but don't think swara is getting forgiven easily. Yeah laksh had an whole back story and yeah nikhil knew about it.. I drafted the next two part and I haven't touched upon this aspect yet. Because it won't play a role till later.. I will update next one soon. Once I re-edit it.. I am not sure if you will like the way swara gains her forgiveness.. But I promise too make it happen logically as possible..Love Nita