Ram Kapoor held on to the coupon Pihu wrote for him. Become my mother's prince charming was her wish. To Pihu, it was a simple as writing those words on the card, but to Ram it was the most complex emotion. Priya's small lie to convince Pihu to become friends with him had turned into such a big issue. Because Pihu seems to genuinely think of Ram as her mom's Prince Charming. When Priya first called him, her Prince Charming. A part of Ram Kapoor foolishly hoped it was the truth but he knows that wasn't the case. He was Priya's ex-husband and her past. He had no right to her present life. But for Pihu's sake, he would have to pretend that he was Priya's prince charming that ...
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Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
1 years ago
The next part in the next page. The tags are on page early
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
1 years ago
Since i can't do boxing to reduce my frustration with the show, I wrote another part instead .
Milalal27 @Milalal27
+ 4
1 years ago
Truly this was so beautiful written. I am in awe Are y on Wattpad also?Do tag me for your future stories. take care and be blessed.
oh nakhrewaali @oh_nakhrewaali
+ 19
1 years ago
This is super awesome This is how they should end the show, since its Ram's hidden talent to overhear stuff Really good work Pihu is so cute Shubhu on street
Gems.musingsRN @Gems.musingsRN
+ 5
1 years ago
You should really join the writing team..this is so good..and this is what we want to see in the show instead of never ending misunderstandings and ram being an utter fool.
Jiyarao @Jiyarao
1 years ago
Your welcome ☺️ yeah i really did ☺️
Tiara @DreamOfEndless
+ 15
1 years ago
This is so beautiful, Nita 🥺❤️ Whenever I watch the show and see Pihu and Ram bond so beautifully, I always wonder how Ram would feel when he learns the truth. If the audience feels this way, Priya should feel at least one percent of that, but no. It is so disappointing she only thinks about Ishaan. The time has changed, the situation has changed, it's high time the truth comes out.I am happy you wrote this. I am happy that Ram learned the truth on his own and not by someone else telling him their version of the truth. The rain scene was fantastic. How Ram was hoping for an artificial one and it rained for real. ❤️And I love that Nandini, Shubhu and Vedika get kicked out of KM at the end 😅🤣
Mona @Monaparekh12
+ 3
1 years ago
Awesome update you describe ram pain beautifully wish it can happen in serial also enough of ram dumbnesss and Priya Mahanta do write more
LyssaPie @LyssaPie
+ 5
1 years ago
WOWAbsolutely amazing, beginning to end
Mandy @BeyondHorizon
+ 6
1 years ago
Loved this OS Nita The show is dragging at a snail's pace - well no! Scratch that! The writers of this show will put even that snail to shame I loved how Ram executed Pihu's wish in your story better than the show one. And you have expressed Ram's inner turmoil beautifully. It hurts to see Ram look at Pihu like she is connected to him but does not belong to him and thats killing him. I loved this line:It was as if every memory he shared with Priya was broken by new truths Loved this line. His anger coupled with regret for not trying to look beyond Priya's lie was depicted very well P. S - Everytime u get frustrated with the show, its good news for your readers so I ain't complaining