Maan got confuse and Geet paused as how to say what she was going to say, but she started again
She held herself tighter on Maan's chest….
"Maan I feel I am impure now…. Somebody looked at me with that intention, he made me impure"
"Geet… please don't talk like this…. You are the purest thing for me"
"Aajj mujhe bolne dijiye Maan…. Mujhe jo lagta hai bolne dijiye"
Maan kept quiet, Geet was with him and she needed to speak her heart to Maan, he should listen as what's going in her mind and heart.
"I want you to purify me….. I want your loved filled lookes on all places where that monster looked at me…. He filled my body with poison….. Aapp aajj mujhe itne pyar se dekhiye Maan ke uske samne who jeher bhi phika per jaye"
She looked with longing eyes into Maan's eyes… maan did not know if doing anything such will be good or bad for Geet in this situation. She is broken and react anyways but Geet had confidence in her love for Maan.
"Geet…. I am here for only you baby, you are so tired today…. "
"I will have no rest Maan until your eyes shower it's love on me"
Maan knew that's what has been going in Geet's mind. He kissed her forehead, Made her lay down on pillow, he kept looking at her face for long time, it was complete love, Geet looked into his eyes and a small smile formed on her lips.
Maan bent down to place a soft kiss on her lips, he slowly moved to her eyes and placed soft kisses on her eyes and then on her nose tip….. He got a little up and again admired her face… In her eyes he could only see her love for him.
He very slowly removed he jewelries, one by one taking Geet swiftly in his world of love…He kissed her each places he removed the jewelry from.He moved to her ear of one side and kissed it slowly liking it and then biting it…. "Maa-aan" Geet moaned. With his both lips openand her soft skin between them he slowly moved to her chin, cpllarbone… he licked the small hollow between her collarbones deeply… geet just moaned his name again…. She was slowly going completely in his world. He removed her chunri which was always coming in between.
He moved down her chest… passion taking over him now, but he had to control himself and do everything very slowly… this was all for Geet he was doing, he don't have to let his emotion overpower him. He kissed each and every inch of her exposed chest, then licking them and softly biting them…. Before he reached her cleavage he looked into Geet's eyes. She wrapped her hand around his neck and pulled him down towards her. She took his lips.. Maan opened it and they both went deep inside it… Maan's hand automatically went to her chest… he squeezed it a little hard, it was tough to control.
They broke after a while
"I want you to love me your way… with your passion… just take me to your world Maan, I want to see the same passion for me in your eyes that you always have"
Maan smiled at her….
"Abb tum itnee pyaree ho to waise bhi main jyada der control ker bhi nahi paoonga"
"Tou kisne roka hai aapko… I am all yours… show me I am all yours"
Maan kissed her on her lips and took it deeply within him… Geet went completely with him.
He then mischievously looked at her cleavage and sucked the bulging parts that were exposed…
Geet moaned again… Maan bit it and moved down… He started unhooking her blouse from his mouth while his hands were on her back and waist… he lifted her a little, continuing to unbutton her blouse… he pulled her blouse from the back and removed it…. He looked at Geet mischievously and gave a naughty smile to her making her a little shy…. While his eyes were talking with hers he unhooked her bra suddenly with the finger on her back…. And removed it….
He looked at her exposed curve shamelessly…. "Maa-aan" she hid her face in the pillow
"Don't hide your face there… I want to see the redness in you" he demanded….
Geet was completely red but she did as he demanded….. He again reached for her lips and sucked it harsly within his…. His passion was no where in control after looking at exposed Geet…. His hands started playing with her curves making the tip hard… he went down and tasting each part of her curve… tasting the softest part of her and then taking everything within his mouth…. Tasting biting and licking them
It was getting tough for Geet to control now…. She was completely wet within and Maan's slow process was just torturing her….. She started unbuttoning his shirt and almost broke the buttons to feel his chest… Maan removed his vest for her and rolled her on the top of her…… his hands running everywhere on back of her and her exposed curves pressed on his hard chest… Geet trailed her both hands on both side of his arms to feel his well tonned muscles.
Their lips were glued and completely within each others. He made one more roll to bring himself on top of her…. His was hard and Geet felt it….
"Maan I love you… love you from so core of myself…. Make me yours Maan"
Maan again moved down kissing her everywhere… his hands now playing with her curves…
"Maan please… please love me…. I can't take it anymore"
Maan moved down removed her part of sari from her skirt, the moment Maan opened her skirt Geet closed her eyes … Maan touched her cheeks with his hand wanting her to meet his eyes….
He kissed her everywhere…. She now completely lay opened infront of him and he was just admiring her body…. Looking at them kissing them… Geet was getting restless for Maan… her nails were digged on her either side on bed…. Maan looked at her in love…. She was dying to see this passion in Maan's eyes…. Dying to see him admire her openly…
Maan then went within Geet and then they were lost in each other…. She was now completely Maan's and Maan hers…. They both felt they were not of this world…. Lost in each others love… There lips were continuously glued…
They separated after a long time…. Panting…. Maan took the cover and cover both their exposed body. Geet just hid her face on Maan's chest and Maan held her tight close to him.
They rested for a while but the passion was no where stopping…. They again started loving each other…. This time more madly…. Both feeling each other everywhere….
It was almost 4 am when they went to sleep. Both were glued to each other in deep sleep.
It was almost 11 am in the morning, nobody wanted to disturb them…. Maan's eyes opened to see Geet sleeping peacefully in his arms…. He just prayed he could keep her mind in this peace always…. He needed to heel her emotionally too…. He have to do things slowly…. Sometimes her ways and sometimes his ways. He kissed her cheeks softly so as not to disturb her and went to get fresh…..
He dressed up and was about to wake Geet up and found she was looking at him…. He came beside her…caressed her cheeks
"Neend achchee huee??"
She was just looking at him with pure love "hmm" she didn't want to waste beautiful moment with words…..
He pulled her up securing her cover properly "chalo uttho… niche sab hamara wait ker rahe honge"
She didn't say anything but she was still not ready enough to sit with all family and have chat with them… Maan was the only one at this moment she wanted… she knew all were her family and loved her deeply but she was not ready….
Maan read the confusion on her face…. But he wanted her to open up slowly, this closing herself will not help her… she needed to feel normal slowly.
"They are elders right…. We should show respect to them hmmm…."
Geet can never deny Maan's word. She got up and got ready….
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GurruKiDeewani- @GurruKiDeewani-
+ 2
12 years ago
awesome update cant w8 for next continue soon-maankimishti-2011-11-14 14:15:03
Melvina Preece @angel-ki-shona
+ 4
12 years ago
love it could you add me as your buddy so I can get a pm, I can't add anyone that's why I am not adding you myself
GurruKiDeewani- @GurruKiDeewani-
+ 2
12 years ago
emotional and beautiful partupdate soon
TeamMcSwarek @TeamMcSwarek
12 years ago
That was AMAZINGyour writing created magic!
ritzy09 @ritzy09
+ 7
12 years ago
Anu me pakdofying my ears...so so sorry...actually i was ultra busy at work and not keeping well too. And i like to read and comment on your's and Piya's FFs with peace and in detail...isiliye late ho gaya
coming to the update, it was marvelous. I have always admired Geet's frankness in voicing her emotions throughout this FF. As a matter of fact from very beginning...be it acceptance, speaking out her feelings, sameera's case...she has always taken an intiative. She has not only spoken her mind but cajoled Maan too to voice out his emotions as he tends to be too protective.
even now, it was great for her to voice out her need and help Maan coming over his hesistance. Somewhere it reflects trust at a different level. She understands him compltely to know he still respects her and just urges him to show that respect.
Loved how Maan is trying to integrate her back into normal life. Precao is hinting towards that and waiting eagerly for it.
SR moments itself for me were great not only because they were Maaneet moments but there was lot of emotion attached to that passion. Loved every bit of it
nafisa_kazi @nafisa_kazi
12 years ago
anu,
well hats off to u if u write so well in ur state of nervousness...
Deepa @spvd
+ 4
12 years ago
part 54very lovely one...Maan with his love has made Get forget the horrible memories...cont soon...
preethia @preethia
12 years ago
loved the update...only maan can get her out of this shock and make her normal...waiting for her time with family without maan
allibr @allibr
12 years ago
superb updateloved itcontinue soon
saam123 @saam123
12 years ago
MAAN DONE A GREAT WORK TO COMFORT GEET IN ALL THE WAY. HE WILLING TO DO ANYTHING4 GEET.SO GREAT UPDATE