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He was racing to and fro in the room while doctor was checking on Geet…. His heart beating faster…. Why is Geet fainting continously…. The condition in which Geet was wrapped in the sheet trying to save herself…. What must have happened? His heart cried realizing she had nothing on herself….
Doctor:"Mr. Maan… she is in shock and her bloor pressure has dropped and so she is faiting continously… have given the injection… give her lots of liquid when she wakes up and make her start eating something healty…. Try to keep her cheered up… I am writing down…." And so and so she gave her instructions to Maan and he got them all noted as an obidient student… it was matter of Geet….
He then gathered courage "Doctor…. Actually … I mean if she is otherwise all fine... I mean to say"
Doctor:"I understand what you are asking Mr. Khurana…. She has not have any physical injury… no sign of it at all but she had put hard effort to save herself and in that she has gone thru lots of physical and mental stress…. You have to be very carefull to handle her…."
Doctor left…. Maan sat beside Geet, took her hand in his, laid his head back and tear rolled down his cheek…. He felt so helpless…."Mishty I could do nothing for you… mere hote hue tumhe apnee ladaii khud ladnee padhi…. "
He took her in his lap and just kept looking at her… caressing her cheek and her hair….
"for 5 days I brought you here and in five days I could not fulfill my responsibility… Zindagee bhar ke bharose ke layak hoon bhi ya nahi main"
Pinky was also shocked and crying feeling guilty of leaving Geet all alone but Shasha's mind was working and she quielty went to her room to think what she should do now….
Pinky opened the door and saw tears in Maan's eyes and Geet on his lap….
Maan saw her and anger arised in his eyes….
"Where the hell where you… itnee raat ko Geet ko chorkar…. Kahan tha na maine…"
With the noise Geet just shiffled …. Maan turned to Pat her to make in sleep… she needed as much rest...
Pinky(with tears in her eyes):"Sir who app he ne to kaha tha"
Maan:"maine kaha that Geet ko chor ker jane ke liye… now you are lying for your mistake…. hmm"
Pinky:"Nahi sir… Shasha Mam ne to yehi kaha…."
Maan:"Shasha.. abb who isme kahan se aa gayee… anyways she was here… kahan gayee who…"
Pinky:"sir… abhi to yahee thee… per unhone he mujhe bulaya tha…."
Then Maan's phone ring… it was from Adi from police station…. He listened to Adi and his face changed to shock with what he heard….
He disconnected the phone and anger boiling on his face….
"tou Shasha ne bulaya tha tumhe … right????"
Before she could answer "take care of Geet…I am coming"
After giving some thought, shasha decided that she is now stuck in a big mess… she had never imagined thing would turn up this way and also that Geet would give such a fight…. Now she had no option but to run away….run away some where far at the moment for few days may be month…. Her truth can come out anytime… she quicly packed her stuff and was going to leave… she opened the door only to find Maan standing on the door……..
Shasha :"Mk app… I mean abhi Geet ko aapkee jaroorat"
Maan:"ander aane nahi kahoge… who I just missed tum to khud bahar ja rahee ho… that too with a bag…. Flight to kal hain na sabkee…. Koi khas wajah jaldi nikalne kee"
With the way Maan talked Shasha knew she was in a trap… she drank her saliva….
Shasha:"who… Mk who.."
He pushed her inside and locked the room…. Shasha stood still not knowing what to do….
Maan:"Don't be so happy….. main tumhe cho ker yeh haath ganda nahi kerna chata…. Yeh sab sirf Geet ke liye hai…. But what should I do with you… I am thinking…. Sit down and suggest me what should I do with you….."
Shasha sat down… bringing crocodile tears to her eyes …."I am sorry MK… main Geet se mafee mangoongee… main bohut sharminda hoon…."
Maan:"Maaf Geet karegee Maan Singh Khurana se aise umeed bhi mat kerna…. Mere saath bura kerne walon ko main ek maafi deta hoon per per tum to Geet tak chalee gaye…. You don't have an inch of idea kee tumhara kya haal hoga…. Abhi ke liye jahan bhagna hai bhago…. Jitnee dur ja saktee ho jao… I am not giving you to police… itna asan nahi hoga tumhara saaza….."
The way he spoke shivered her thru bone…. What will he do to her… she pleeded but Maan just left…. "abhi mujhe Geet ka khyal rakhna hai, I just don't have time to waste on you at present…."
Maan left for Geet's room… Shasha thought it was best to run away at moment but the moment she went on gat she was welcomed by police and taken away
Maan sat beside Geet… she opened her eyes and saw Maan holding her…
"Gee-eet" he helped her sit down… she looked up at him blank… still in shock, he kissed her forehead and rested her head between his arms and head…she rested like that and he kept caressing her back….
He signaled Pinky, who was standing still there feeling guilty and sad not knwing what to do. He asked her to bring some juice and buiscuit.
"Lo yeh pilo Geet…" he tried to make her sit…
She didn't feel like taking anything in…. just wanted to throw away whatever had happened to her…. "Manine usse kuch bhi nahi…." His heart went out… He placed his hand on her mouth and turned his head in no as directing her not to speak anything…. "shhh… ye loo … you need to eat and drnk something" He just didn't want that talk to come up at present…. Geet was just lost … He brought the juice glass near her but she couldn't eat… just moved it away … "Geet you need to take something in warna abb main bhi kuch nahi lunga…." Geet knew he wouldn't… She wanted to throw up but just for him she took it in…..
Maan was himself feeling guilty… he felt he could not take care of her…. That did he really deserve her
Geet was lost…. How could someone other than Maan see her… Compltely… would he even like to touch her now… did she even deserv him now
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Hinal.94 @Hinal.94
+ 4
12 years ago
wowww loved itthe depth of their love is seen here n u have written it so well even though u were not feeling well hats off to u yaarn what geet did to herself she shouldnt havewaiting for the next part n sorry for late comment
6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 @6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6
12 years ago
Hey Anu I read ur FF and how can I express what I feel after reading it...so intense...so beautiful...so perfect FF...I loved to read it..I am sending buddy request...plaese pm me when u update...
nafisa_kazi @nafisa_kazi
12 years ago
anu,
thanx,
liked the update...
TanuDDian @TanuDDian
+ 4
12 years ago
awesome part... lovely one...
Crystal Saya @CrystalSaya
+ 2
12 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE...MAAN IS TOO CARING...WAITING FOR MORE...
seshatree @seshatree
12 years ago
awesome updates...loved it all..
Deepa @spvd
+ 4
12 years ago
part 52nice part...Maan finally realized his mistake...Geet has hurt herself and Maan was hurting himself...cont soon...
ritzy09 @ritzy09
+ 7
12 years ago
Sorry Anu for late response...I was very busy with office
How are you feeling now? Hope ab tumhari tabiyat thodi thhek hogi.
Update was awesome. I liked the way Geet's dad made him realse his mistake. The way Maaneet talked was very emtional and matured. Totally loved ot.
Is Maan going to marry her?
Atiffa @Atiffa
12 years ago
just came across this FF and its awesomeCont soonLuvTCAtiffa
SONU_29 @SONU_29
+ 3
12 years ago
precap is interrestingcontinue soon