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They had got the permission to take Geet as there were others accompanying them and Geet would share room with Pinky… this Maan did for her security…. After the attack on her that night he was not going to take any chance….. he wanted so much to have a separate hotel or Geet and himself and separate one for the others but Geet's safety was more important for him…..
Geet had asked him so many times "why have I to share room with Pinky….. can't she and Shasha share….."
Maan have explained her though he himself wanted Geet to stay alone so that he had free access "Baby it's just for the time I am not there…. It's for your safety…."
The night before they have to leave both Maan's and Geet's heart were restless…. Only the thought of spending time with each other alone with no family member…. It will just be their time was making their heart beat faster….. Maan was feeling funny how could he, Maan Singh Khurana feel such a childish restlessness……
Geet was pacing in her room with restlessness….. why had this night have to be so long….. she was eagerly waiting for the time she will leave from home with Maan and after that it's her in her Maan's arm…. She was pacing when her Mom knocked the door to check if she had packed everything…. Geet's heart skip the beat…. "Are you done with the packing Beta"
"Yeah mom….. Just planning to have nice sleep… need to leave early tomorrow morning"
"yeah I know how hate morning flight…. But it all your Maan's deed"
Ohh only she knew how much she was loving this morning flight this time…. she could give away any pleasure just to get the pleasure to be with Maan…..
Early morning Maan came to pick Geet… he was wearing white shirt tucked in his blue jeans… it was a thin material and his top few buttons were open to show his wonderful chest… Geet came and Maan got down to get her…. "ohh.. how fresh and sexy he was looking"
Geet had a white shirt too and a jeans capri at bottom…. She was wearing a flat sandle which showed her beautiful feet…. Maan controlled himself by giving her a sweet smile….
Driver picked the luggage and placed them in the car….. and the moment they sat in the car and were just little ahead Maan pulled Geet towards him, held her by her waist and brought her more closer "Dare you sit an inch far from me" Geet just smiled and rested her read on his arm… she was overflowing with emotion and desire.. yes it was more of desire this time…. he swiftly made way from bottom of her shirt to feel her bare waist…. Fluid ran within Geet and she held him tightly and then the moment he squeezed her waist she closed her eyes and her breath stopped for few moments…. She wanted to moan his name but driver was just in front so she just drank his name within her…. It was getting hard to hold
They were holding themselves for long… so just after they had checked in their bags and were to go towards boarding Gate both looked at each other…. Maan pulled Geet closer to him with hard jerk.. held her head from back from one hand and other on her waist to lift her face to him…. Geet reached up to his lips and he took her lips within his… wildly…. No softness… full of passion and lust…. They were madly tasting each others tongue, each parts of others mouth and drinking their saliva…. They were get whole night's restlesness….. He did not need to hide their relation now…. He had held himself long due to Sameera's case… now no more….
They were done after a while "let's go to our gate… and see if everyone has reached…."
Maan was holding Geet by her waist and Geet was as usual hanging herself on his arm….
Adi, Shahsa and pinky were at Gate and they all saw this…. Shahsa was boiling from anger to see their intimacy…. She has always dreamt to in Maan's arm… to become mrs Khurana and have as much share in company as Geet…. Be rich and have high status in society etc…. Things looked shattered in front of her eyes… she consoled herself Again "they are childhood friends… that's it…"
Adi: "Pinky tumhe kuch dikh raha hai…."
Pinky:"Haan Adi sir…. Kya hum jo samajh rahen hain who sach hai…. Maan sir Geet ke saath haste kitne achcha lag rahen hain na….." she goes in dreamland…
Shahsa:" Shut up you both.. just gossiping all the time… Mk ko pata chalega tumharee batoon ka to tumharee khair nahi…"
Maan and Geet reaches there "Good morning everyone….."
They are surprised and happy to see Maan smiling and greeting everyone….. except Shasha "Good morning Sir"
Geet hugs Pinky….
Pinky: "Geet tu bhi na…. kahan rehtee hai aaj kal… bilkul milne bhi nahi aatee"
Geet:"sorry baba…. Abb kuch din to hum saath me ek kamre me hee hain… we will have loads of fun… You should thanks to your Maan sir… he has given us this nice trip…." She was just finding ways to thanks maan a zillion times for this trip
Maan did not want to discriminate so he got Business class tickets for whole group…..
They boarded and Maan and Geet took the seat together…. Now it was no looking back for them….. Adi and pinky were so happy while again someone was boiling…. Maan and Geet were in their own world….
They have flown so many times to Mumbai but this time it was different…. Each others hand in hand….In eagerness of reaching Mumbai quick they were pressing each others hand tightly…..
They reached Mumbai and then their hotel….. Geet went with Piinky… Adi and Shahsa were on different floor jut below their and Maan was on same floor as Geet but a little far…. It was a special room as Geet was to stay there and when pinky saw the room she got over excited…
Pinky: "Geet it's really nice to share room with you… Wow kya room hai yaar"
Geet smiled…. All in her mind was to somehow go to Maan's room as he could not come here….
Pinky:"Geet Chal na…. I am sure yahan ka khana bhi bohut achcha hoga…. Mujhe to soch ker hee bhook lag rahee hai…"
Geet: " Pinky.. I am really not hungry dear… you can enjoy anything you like dear…. Maan is taking care of all bills so don't hesitate at all and enjoy yourself"
Pinky: "Geet tu bhi na…. we are together after such a long time and you don't want to spend time with me… abb yaha akele akele kya karegee"
Geet:"Pinky who kuch nahi… woh actually I was thinking to see if Maan need something or not… "
Pinky: " Geet we are Maan sirs guest here… not he ours… chal na he will take care of himself…. He can make this whole hotel staff run after him"
Geet is getting restless…. She knew Maan must be waiting for her and here Pinky is just making her crazy with 1st her admiration of place and now this
Geet:"Nahi yaar humara bhi to farz banta hai…. Tu adi ke saath chalee ja na"
Pinky:"Adi sir… yeah he will go with me…. Waise tujhe Maan sir kee kuch jyada fikr nahi ho rahee….. I mean jo hum samajh rahe hain who sab sach hai"
Geet could not control and a smile came on her face….
Pinky: "OMG Geet… this time you are with Maan sir"
Geet: " Shut up… it's not this time…. it's forever……"
Pinky:"You and forever????"
Geet went and sat on the bed in relaxed position placing her hands on her side "tere Maan sir ka jaado hee kuch aisa hai….."
Pinky was super duper excited but Geet asked her not to make it a gossip especially in front of Shasha as she just wanted to avoid her….
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Maan had waited long for Geet and after waiting for a while he decided to take shower…. He just came out of the shower and finished placing his jeans ON that bell of his ring rang…. He knew it was Geet…… opened the door, let her in and closed the door…. He stood there and looked at her angrily but Geet got lost in him….. His wet shirtless body and towel on top of it…… she kept looking at him.. lost in his charm….
He suddenly pulled her to that wall and held both her hand pinning them to the wall "so are you done with your gossips"
So close to him this way… she could breath his fresh manly smell and just wanted to free herself and feel the heaven in front of her…. She tried to free her hand but in vain…. Maan was looking intently at her….. but not freeing her "Maan please…." She begged "not so soon dear…. There is punishment for Making Maan waiting" "Sorry Maan… please" he was loving the way she was dying to be with him …same as he was….
He left her hand but soon picked her in his arms to take her towards bed… Geet felt as her cheek touched his chest muscles which smelled so fresh…. She could not stop… turned and kissed on his chest…. He sat on the bed and made her sit on his lap…. "Maan" she removed the towel on his shoulder to have complete view of his bare top….. she placed her palm on his chest and rubbed it …. Maan was getting restless now…. She better not provoke him…. Geet bent down to taste muscles of his chest… "Maan you are so amazing"
Now Maan had waited for long…he placed her hand down and then planted his lips hard on her…. Geet was getting restless too and gave in with equal intensity…. While still his mouth on hers he started unbuttoning her shirt… Geet was lost in his kiss and feeling his back with her hand…. moving them up and down and in every direction of his back…. Maan removed her shirt from her and she moved her hands to help him get it out…. He pulled her near her and their bare body touched… heat ran thru them… making them more wild…. Their body was completely touching others only thing in between was her Bra… Maan placed his hand on her back and without giving a thought unbuttoned it and pulled it out and threw it somewhere on floor… Her full bare curved and her nip**** crushed on his bare chest ….. they both felt heated….room felt completely hot…. Geet kissed him on his chest were her lips landed not daring to move herself from him "Maan you will make me go crazy…"
While still she was on his lap he held her waist and in that position laid her down with him….. he then made her laid on her back and got up a little to get full view of her bare upper part….. Geet felt his looks were piercing her… she closed her eyes… Maan was holding both her hand …. He did not want any interferance before he completed the unfinished task which was haunting him…. He placed his lips on the softest part of her curves and licked them…. "ahh---hhh Maa—aan" he then did same with her other curve making Geet restless now…. She wanted him to free her so that she can calm down … she wanted to taste him badly….. Maan was not leaving her…. He then took the hard top of her curve … in his mouth and Geet jumped.. he bit her a little there and Geet was moving her head here and there in search of some relief…. "Maan mera haath choriye na… please Maan… I need to feel you…. Please Maan" he moved to the other curve and did the same there….. Get did not know how to get some rest… she got her hips up and down….
After torturing her he left her and Geet pushed him immediately on the bed and started tasting him madly…. He placed his hand on her back and she removed it "Don't…. it's my turn now"
And then there was knock on the door….. Geet suddenly got up… Maan gave her clothes to her and signaled her to move to bathroom……
"Yeah Coming…." He quickly placed his shirt on and went to open the door…
"Adi tum…. What's the matter"
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Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=preethia]loved the update...
the way maan threatens sasha ultimate MSK style...
but feel bad for both for the guilty feeling...
waiting for the next...[/QUOTE]
Yeah he is sweet with Geet and family but when someone pokes their nose in their life... he is MSK
mishty_shona @mishty_shona
12 years ago
will u updt 2de????waiting...btw updt ws awesome as alwayzz!!!!!!!!!
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Yeah you are absolutely right but think of Maan's situation... suddenly this happens and he could do nothing so he is feeling guilty... this is the immediate reaction... lets see how it progresses
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=jyoti_l]this is really bad...
hope they will b able to talk to each other...
continue soon...
thnx for PM..[/QUOTE]
Thanks for liking it Dear... yeah whatever happened was most unexpected, lets see how they handle it now
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Yes what ever happened was completely not expected from both of them... they were having such afun time and suddenly this... world is upside down now for them
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Yes you are right... its a real worst situation for girl and that's why din't want to write this part but it was part of my script so I had to do it...
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=piya-]Hi Sheru
Oh this was an emotional update both of them thinking that they don't deserve each other
But the best thing was Shasha ka the end ho gaya now she is where she has to be in her real sasural jail...
Poor Geet still in a mental trauma it would be a difficult task for Maan to get her back to her normal self
Only geet can make maan realize that he should not feel guilty and same is the case with maan...both of them need each other right now... they have to be each other's strength...they have to overcome this guilt
ok today I won't trouble u with my boring poem I have a song for this situation
"Jab koi baat bigad jaaye
Jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawa
Na koi hai na koi tha
Zindagi mein tumhare siwa
tum dena saath mera o humnawa"
love u Di
urs- piggy (Piya)[/QUOTE]
Thanks alot Dear for your wonderful analysis...
yeah both are at present in guilty trip...
and yet they both need each other... specialy Geet... lets see how they handle it...
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=hinal_maaneet]wowww loved it
poor maan n geet both are feeling so guilty
n sasha caught but i wanted maan to punish her more
maybe he will do after geet is back to normal[/QUOTE]
Thanks alot for liking it... yeah both are in guilty trip, lets see how they handle it
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Thanks a lot Dear for liking it... yeah both are feeling guilty
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Thanks Dear for your continous support