Hi All,
Thank you all again for liking my post. Please keep posting comments and your views which
helps me to formulate my updates.
The song in this update is aspecial dedication to my friend ritzy09.
Ritzy Dear - I could not put the other song as the video in that did not match the situation
while the words were too good. If I knew to make VM I would have for sure put that song as I
love it too.
I hope you will like this song too.
All - hope I come up to ypour expectation.
Thanks and Luv
--Anu
Part 42
Maan comes in Dadima's room ….
Maan:"Geet…."
Geet:"Maan aap.. main theek hoon maine kaha na…."
Maan: "yes, I know…. So now have your food… today such a special day for us Geet aur tum khana kahne se inkar ker rahee hoo….. "
He brings forward the trey with food for Geet…..
Geet was very touched with this act…. How could she deny Maan when he was bringing food for with so much love but she was in no mood to show him she has melted…..
Geet: "aapko lane ke koi jaroorat nahi thee……. Theek hai main kha letee hoon"
While Geet is having her food Maan is continuously admiring her and Geet can sense it…. How can she keep up her anger if he keeps on showering love on her this way…. Her heart was very weak where Maan was concerned..
She decided it was not safe here to stay with him….
After she was done: "Maan I will leave for home… I need some rest"
Maan came close to her…. This was getting worst… he held her by her shoulder and turned her to face him…. Geet avoided to meet his gaze
Maan: "to yahan hee aram ker lo na…. " he untied her hair and straightened it…..
It was getting harder for her: "Maan mujhe ghar jana hai bass" he was not listening….
He moved his hand from her hair to her cheek bones and neck…. Caressing them… Geet closed her eyes, she could not resist to feel his touch… she turned to other side..
Maan: "kyun itnee jaldee ho gayee achanak jane kee…. You are just going to cry there.. I know you…. You are not going anywhere…."
Geet now needed to go away:"mujhe jana hai bass.. kaha na maine….. nahi rukna hai mujhe yahan… why should I listen to you when you don't eeven trust me or don't share any decision with me…"
Maan:"Geet its not at all like that… I am sure you will forgive me if you decide to listen to me…."
Geet: "and my decision is I don't want to listen to you…. I am leaving….."
Even after Maan pleading Geet wanted to go as she knew what will happen if he was near her….. she will give up and this time she was determined not to let things go that easily
Maan:"Ok… if you want to leave I will drop you….."
Geet hesitated but Maan convinced her that he will drop her…….
While on the way to her home they were not talking and it was Geet's choice… Maan has no option but to surrender to her wishes…. While on way his eyes went on a shop and he got something in his mind….
After dropping Geet home he reached home….
Maan:"Here everyone I have to make an announcement"
Daarji:"kya puttar ji… aapke liye hum sab yahan hai aur aap aur Geet kahin aur hee hain…."
Maan:"Daarji… woh Geet ghar jana chatee thee to main bass usse drop kerne gaya tha… thak gayee thee bohut… "
It was not very convincing to anyone as how could Geet leave when it was such a big day for Maan
Maan: "Yes so here I am to make an announcement …. Why don't we keep a family party to celebrate our day….. We will have dinner and dance….."
Dadima:"wah beta yeh to bohut acche baat kee apne…. Geet ke sangat ka asar achcha ho raha hai aap pe…… per Geet…"
Maan:"She will come for sure……..mujhe pata hai."
He handed a parcel to Mrs Handa: "Aunty can you please give it to Geet please"
Viccky: "Wow Bro Gift…. aapp to badal rahe hain…kitnee gift mil chukee hai Geet ko aajtak"
Maan :"shut up Viccky…. And come to my room, I need to talk something to you…"
Maan and Viccky left for some discussion…. Maan was giving Viccky some special instructions for party in the evening
In Geet's house,
Her Mom gave Geet the gift Maan had given
Geet:"what's this…."
Mrs Handa:"See for yourself… Maan asked me to give it to you"
Her Mom went and Geet was just surprised as Maan was not into taking and giving gifts.
She touched the parcel and happiness ran thru her "Maan is changing…. Changing for me"
Geet (st):"hnnn so he is bribing me for my anger… per isbar main aapkee baat me nahi maane wali Maan…. You have to change your ways and that's it"
She keeps the gift aside even without opening it….
Maan in his room
Maan(st):"Maan now better change yourself… you are now not alone to take your decisions…. You have Geet with you and she has right to know everything… old habits die hard but it's high time…. You need to change…. And what explanation do you have for what you have done… none… "
Maan(st):"what are you going to say her…. Geet I have no reason for what I did… it's just my habbit to take decisions and keep things to myself….. who aur bhi naraz ho jayegee…. Nahi… bass mafi maang lo and promise her this will not happen again…. And idiot make sure this should not happen again."
Geet's mom come and asks her: "Geet bata na kya diya Maan ne… abb main teri sirf Mom hoon ya friend bhi…."
Geet:"who Mom… I will just come down in a while… app chaliye main aatee hoon…"
Geet had now no option, actually she was looking for a reason to prompt her to open the gift…
She opened the parcel and saw that a dress was beautifully wrapped... smile came on her face… Geet loved dresses…. Maan had always teased her about her wardrob.
She opened the wrap and unfolded the dress… It was a beautiful Evening gown... mostly golden with self work and Golden and hands and bottom had red frills…. It was just awesome…. It matched Geet's style…no it was something beyond her style….. She was proud of Maan's taste how her choice was in his mind…..
The she saw that there was also something else…. A note.. she read it
"My Misti….
I have kept a party in evening to celebrate my day, but love this party I am keeping actually in your honor and for me you will be my chief guest.
Please wear this dress for me today in the evening.
Aoogee na Geet… Please!!!!
Sirf tumhara,
Maan"
The beautiful gown….1st gift from Maan and a letter full of love and request. How could Geet deny Maan now.
Geet (ST): "Maan you know very well… how weak I get when you are concerned…. And then this gift from you and this letter… you know I can't deny you…. You won… are you happy now…. I will come and you always knew that…"
Geet(ST): "but I am still angry on you… got it."
Geet was relieved when she made the decision of going to Maan's party… she showed the gown to her Mom who was very happy to see it… they discussed about the jewelry that would go with it and her mother got her ready….
She wore a golden jaraw set which had red ruby stone installed all over it….
Geet entered the KM hall with her mother…. And everyone in the hall which included Maan's family, Geet's dad , Daarji were awe to see Geet. She was looking gorgeous, beautiful and different the mix of western and cultural dressing and she was carrying it beautifully….
She was angry with Maan and wanted to show him her anger but her eyes were looking for him… he was not there……. He was actually watching from upstairs and waiting for Geet…
When he saw Geet he took a deep breath :"yeh meri Misti hai… she is a MAGIC… Geet if you do this to me phir to sabhi ko aajj pata chal jayega meri dewaangee ka… kaise rokunga main khud ko….."
Maan came down and his eyes was fixed on his Geet…. Geet's eyes met his… he was wearing a party suit and was looking extremely handsome…. Geet was thinking how he could take her breath away in any style he did….
She could not move her eyes from him and just wished that somehow she was not angry with him and that none was around so that she can run to him and melt in his arms.
Then everyone just clapped to bring the love birds out of trance.
Viccky was not going to miss his chance: "In dono kee hee party hai… hum sab to bass ayywayen hain yahan…."
Geet and Maan both felt embarrassed…. Geet blushed heavily and turned to the other side and Maan managed immediately and joined everyone….
1st they were all having snacks and drinks and Maan was continuously steeling looks at Geet, this time making sure to not make it obvious to all and Geet was doing same but would turn to other side when her eyes met Maan's.
Then Viccky announced that every one will dance in pair. Couples together… He will inaugurate the Dance with Dadi Ma… and he called Dadima on floor… All light and music arrangement was done by viccky at short notice from his Bro…
Dadima and Viccky Danced on "Huzur is kadar bhi na itra ke chaliye…." And everyone was just having fun… Maan looked at Geet laughing and enjoying Dadima and Viccky dancing…
Then came the turn of Mr & Mrs handa and they too danced on some tune of a romantic dance and then the same for Mr & Mrs Khurana….
By this time Geet was somewhere within her heart dying for her's and Maan's turn but she spoke to herself…
Geet(ST): "inke bulane pe main party me aa gayee bass…. Aabb dance floor pe kaise bulate hain mujhe… I am not going to do it…"
Maan looked at Geet sensing her desire but Geet gave angry look to him and turned the other way….. Maan was smiling to himself….
Viccky then announced Maan and Geet on floor… Geet's heart was giving a fast beat between what will Maan do now and what should she do.
Song started (to get real feel of song please watch this video.. This song is from Satte pe Satta - Dilbar mere)
Maan came near her…. she looked at him confused what to do
mai aag dil mein lagaa doongaa wo, ke pal mein pighal jaaoge
He took her Hand in His
yek din aayegaa, pyaar ho jaayegaa
Geet started to walk away but Maan held her
mai aag dil mein lagaa doongaa wo, ke pal mein pighal jaaoge
Viccky shouted:"come on Geet… itna maat sharmaoo yaar…. Come on do the honor… everyone is waiting"
Then the music started in between while Maan turned her towards him…. Geet was melting but trying to resist…. They kept looking into each others eye
dilbar mere kab tak muze, ayese hee tadapaaoge mai aag dil mein lagaa doongaa wo, ke pal mein pighal jaaoge
Maan pulled Geet on dance floor and brought her closer to him
yek din aayegaa, pyaar ho jaayegaamai aag dil mein lagaa doongaa wo, ke pal mein pighal jaaoge
Viccky whistled and elders clapped… everyone was enjoying but Maan and Geet where lost in themselves
Geet started loosing to him completely
He turned her towards him from backward…
he was playing and she was just dancing to his tune….. she knew nothing was in her control now
Music in between started…. And everyone shouted… Viccky "Geet now its your turn….. come show Bro what our princess is"
Maan whisperd: "Mishti show it…. Make me dance to your tune…"
dil se milegaa jo dil to mahakane lagoge
Geet was now smiling… she knew she had lost to him as ususal and her love have own her
Geet turned towards Maan and pulled him towards her
Viccky wisteled again…..
She came in full mood and got lost in maan with her dance
tum meree baahon mein aa ke bahakane lagogehosh kho jaayegaa, pyaar ho jaayegaa
Lastly everyone joined them
Next to be continued
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JayaR @JayaR
12 years ago
Very lovely update Anu...Well I was expecting Kurbaan Hua...but you did a good job with Dilbar Mere...
soni4eva @soni4eva
12 years ago
awsome updateluv da way maan wa tryin 2 melt geets angerrelii relii swtluv da precap eagerly w8in 4 da nxt updateplzz cont soon xfanx 4 da pm
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=anuandavi][QUOTE=tellyme]Today I just updated my other FF Dears...
Will try to update this very soon in weekend[/QUOTE]Hey, just wanted to ask, how frequent do you update your FFs? Like once in 2 days ?[/QUOTE]
I have 2 FFs dear... soI try to update each on alternate day but sometimes miss a day or 2 in between...
Anu @anuandavi
+ 4
12 years ago
[QUOTE=tellyme]Today I just updated my other FF Dears...
Will try to update this very soon in weekend[/QUOTE]Hey, just wanted to ask, how frequent do you update your FFs? Like once in 2 days ?
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Today I just updated my other FF Dears...
Will try to update this very soon in weekend
disha @_wallflower_
+ 2
12 years ago
hooked...!!!ur ff is really brilliant... plz do pm me whenever u update nextcont sooonnn...
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Thanks for placing the comments Dear even if you are so busy with school.
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=piya-]
Waiting for the update [/QUOTE]
Hi Dear...
Am working on yeh rishtoon ke uljjhan today...
I will try to update this on Weekened
skdevil @skdevil
+ 4
12 years ago
nice part do continue soon ty 4 the pm
TeamMcSwarek @TeamMcSwarek
12 years ago
Niceeecont soonthanks for the pm