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After a while Geet realized they were not heading to their house but to some other direction...
Then he stops a car in front of Hotel Hayat... Geet is all confused as what's going in Maan's mind...
Geet:"Maan hum yahan... i mean ...woh... kyun"
Maan:"you don't trust me?"
Geet: "Maan yeh kaisee baat ker rahen hai... Please... you know I trust you more than myself... I just meant why we are here"
Maan say nothing... goes to the reception
He comes back and hand a room keys to Geet
Maan:'Geet... this is the key for your room... Take rest… I will come to your room after a while... I need to talk something to you'
Geet is in her room all confused as what Maan would like to talk
Geet:"yeh Maan bhi na… abb itnee raat ko kya baat kernee hai… and he booked a separate room for me…. I will be his wife in few days.. but Maan is Maan aur who Dev…. How could he dare to touch me that way…. I just feel like… aur Maan who kitne disturbed honge…. He is so upset…. I need to calm him down"
Maan in his room Called Brij
At end of call, Maan: "uncle , so please do not worry about Geet… I will drop her tomorrow morning…"
Brij: "beta.. jab Geet apke saath hai tou hume kaisee chinta"
Just after Maan is done talking and is is disturbed about how could Dev touch Geet and sometimes thinking about how to talk to Geet….. he gets a knock on his door… and the moment he opens the door Geet gets in closes the door… she pulls Maan to herself and puts him on wall before Maan could understand….
Maan: "Gee---eet"
Geet starts caress his cheeks from her hand:"hnnn… tou ab kaisa mood hai mere janab ka…. What ever…. Waise yeh hotel mein rukne ka idea bura nahi… "
She comes closer to him….
Maan kept looking at Geet… her innocent flawless beauty compared to the complication he was going thru….. so many things going in his mind… He needed to calm down
He brought his face near her and took her lips within his… he started rubbing his on hers trying to find peace… Geet was lost in him and gave in…. she was enjoying his closeness. He was rubbing his lips on hers and Geet just let him do what he wanted…. She just wanted to feel him more and more .. with no one around only Maan and herself….her desires were rising…. She opened her lips to give him the way…. Maan placed his tongue inside hers and started tasting every part of it… making every part his…. He pulled her closer and closer to him… tighter and tighter…. Geet made no resistance to any of his act…. Maan was going more and more inside her mouth and sometimes brought it out just to bit her lower lips…. Geet closed her eyes to feel his every act and feel his touch… her heart was beating fast and her body was getting tighter from within…
Maan was pouring all his anger and thought thru which he was going on now….
It was only after a while that he separated himself from her….. Geet kept looking at him with all her love…
Maan: "main aa raha tha na tumhare kamre me…. Tum kyun aayee…."
Geet went and sat on his bed and laid down in relaxing position
Geet:"kyun kee.. itne acche se hotel me …. Aur jahan kewal mere Maan aur main hoon… alag kamre me rehna… apse alag… unn hun…. bilkul nahi…. "
Maan comes and sits near her:" Geet I need to talk something important to you….."
Geet suddenly pulls Maan and he falls and gets beside her…….
Geet: "but I am in no mood to listen anything important now….."
He is about to get up when his eyes goes on Geet laying down and looking at him, he stops… his eyes gets fixed on Geet's face and he keeps looking at her… he is looking at her face and then their eyes meet…. They both keep looking into each other eyes… their eyes full of emotion for each other… they are unaware as when their emotion changes to the desire….. Maan slowly comes closer to Geet… she keeps her eyes fixed on his…. Unaware of what he was doing he starts moving the hair on her face…. Geet closes her eyes and takes deep breath… he starts plying his finger on her face… Geet is unable to move even a bit of her self… he slowly moves his finger on every part of her face which slowly moves down to the side of her neck…. Geet doesn't know what's going within her… she has different feeling in her belly…. He is pying his fingers on her neck and slowly he starts tracing her collar bone from his finger…. Geet tightens her hands and legs…..
Then the part of her saree comes on his way… he slowly moves it and keeps on moving it until he puts it off her shoulder… he is in trance and Geet is all lost in what he is doing to her…. Now he is able to whole bare part of geet's silky skin above her blouse covering and how her well shaped blouse is shaped around her beautifully curved upper part of hers….. her suddenly kisses the part were the two mounds are making vally on her body….
Geet takes a long breath…"Maa---aan" she moaned
With this Maan immediately comes out of his trance and sits up staright
Maan:"Geet… I need to talk something important to you…. Only if you can sit up staright and listen to me…."
Geet:"kuch nahi sunna… baas apke pass unhee rehna hai… I just want to feel you like Maan…… this is our day… please Maan" with this she gets up, comes close to him and holds his arm
Maan was now trying hard to resist Geet's clossness…. His desires going high but he needed to control…
He suddenly said:"Geet mujhe tumhe Sameera ke bare me kuch batana hai… aur aaj he.. abhi…"
Hearing Sameera's name Geet got angry and immediately got up and sat….
Geet: "why…. Don't want to hear anything about her… she was the one coz of whom my 1st date was spoiled aur abb aaj ka din bhi…. Nahi sunna hai mujhe kuch…."
Maan:"Geet try to understand… it's really important that I tell you this…….."
Geet went to the other corner o the bed and turned her face….
Maan came near her and sat beside her….. he held her by her waist and placed his chin on her shoulder….
Maan: "Geet apne Maan ke liye…. I know I am troubling you but it's very important that I tell you this….TODAY…. For me please Geet…."
Now this much was enough to melt Geet… she always knew she will do what Maan wished and that was making her angry…..
Geet:"Ok… per ek shart per…… main aaj yahan apke kamre me hee rahoongee… you will not ask me to go from here…"
Maan thought for a while then he said :"OK"
Next to be continued
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SONU_29 @SONU_29
+ 3
12 years ago
WAITING...!!! FOR THE NEXT PARTTT
--Nargis-- @--Nargis--
+ 5
12 years ago
Anu...great progression in the Maaneet story in the last 2 updates...nice written. Sorry I haven't been able to read and comment earlier...I am stuck with a lot of work at the office lately...and was busy with EID last week. Looking forward to the next part!!
nafisa_kazi @nafisa_kazi
12 years ago
anu,
thanx,
lovely update...
Divya Nair (aka Piya) @piya-
+ 10
12 years ago
Anu sorry for the late comment
actually i had an accident and hence was unable to comment
ok as usual a supercool update
maan wants to tell something about sameera but geet toh geet hi hai nahi sunna chahthi
khair loved maneet's short romantic moment geet agar maan ka naam na lethi toh shayad aaj maan apne jazbaato par kabu na kar paata
waiting for the next part ab aakhirkar sameera ka plan par se parda utnewala hai
love- Piya
SONU_29 @SONU_29
+ 3
12 years ago
WAITING...!!! FOR THE NEXT PARTTT
Anu @anuandavi
+ 4
12 years ago
Awesome. So finally We will get to know what Sameera is upto this time.
Madhusk @Madhusk
12 years ago
superb...kash ye sub real me hota...i luv maaneet...
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=tonyahk]Hi Anu,
how are you dear?
missed you a lot. so i thought to say an hello...
i have to catch up a lot with this FF...i wish i get some time and read all the left out parts...but i am helpless...please bear with me yaar...
though i am enable to read your FFs, i am sure that you must be doing a wonderful job in all your FFs. keep rocking dear.
take care
143
Tonya
[/QUOTE]
Hi Dear Tonya,
So nice to hear from you after a long time.
I can understand how busy you must be with new responsibilities... Take your time Dear
But keep coming up like this whenever you have time...
Hope you are n'joying your new role...
Best of luck
Take care
--Anu
maaneetsangel @maaneetsangel
+ 2
12 years ago
part 38 ...awesome ... superb ...thnx 4 d pm ...continue soon ...
Remya @Remya_Pillai
+ 5
12 years ago
ds sameera...bt maan has to talk to geet asap..he did d rt thing..continue soon..