Hi All friends...
So few comments this time.. me like
. But Liking has increased so 
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Dears believe me... All your comments give me so much happiness.. so please keep giving me happiness and I will also try to keep giving you guys nice update(atleast I can try...).
Aur thorda vada vada comments milne pe aur bhi achcha lagta hai...
And to all of you who have kept continously giving comments... so many are there in this group... Thanks to all.
I appologise to you all for hurting your feeling but here is my POV for this dialouge.
Maan trust Geet so much and he very well know Geet will not go with anyone else except him and he just take it for granted when he said that... His direct meaning to her was he cannot go with her and she should go to the party on her own... It was instant reaction as he was so busy and also he wanted to avoid party in any case...
But above all this he have concern for Geet and we see what he will do... he has his own style of loving Geet he will go to the party but not for her couple dance but for some other reason...
We will see in this update...
Also sorry for incorrect font and I will take care of dialouges next time...
Thanks
--Anu
Update coming soon...
Part 36
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After Geet left Maan was little restless...
Geet in her Room:"What does he think of himself.. how could he say that i should go with someone else... he very well knows I will never go with anyone other than him phir aise keh diya... saf saf keh dete na... akele chalee jao... This is my last party with my frinds and he doesn't care a bit."
Maan(st):"What did Geet say... party was on Saturday night... hnnn" he sighed
Maan(ST):"Geet ke party... nothing is kept hidden from anyone about Geet's program... yeh baat to aram se leak ho saktee aur Geet isse hide bhi kyun karegee... But Dev... If he is really following her he will know for sure that Geet is going for a party... that too at night... Aise me how can I leave her to go alone"
Maan(st):"But we are planning to break Sameera's news on Monday... Saturday I will be busy making arrangement for that... kya karoon... and if I go with Geet aur yeh news Sameera tak pahuch gayee tou..."
Maan(st):"aur agar usne Geet ko koi aisee baat keh dee then Geet will be disturb... what to do... let me try to stop Geet from going to the party... she won't agree... ek try kerne me kya jata hai... if she doesn't agree I will think of other option..."
Maan calls Geet... Geet is happy:"I think he is ready to come with me..."
Maan:"Geet tumharee party Sat night ko hain na..."
Geet:"Yes...wahi to main aapse keh rahee thi that it is a very convinient day and you can come..."
Maan(really scared of her reaction):"Geet how can i explain you... I am really busy with some thing urgent that day... aur main nahi chata kee to night party me akele jao... can you not ... see please don't get angry... is it possible if by any chance you can avoid this party... Hum ek badee see party dete hain na kuch hee dino me and we will invite all your friends aur phir main bhi rahoonga..."
Geet(completely shocked my Maan's new idea's):"What?????????"
Maan:"woh Geet dekho..."
Geet(very furious on Maan's proposal):"you don't want me to go to the last party with my friends... fine... I won't go... aur koi phermaish hai to bata dijiye... aur haan you don't need to arrange any party for my friends as they are not that important as to involve your important time..."
Maan:"Geet tum over react ker rahee hoo... i am just requesting and there is a reason..."
Geet:"Bye Maan good night..."
Maan thought for a while and again called Geet
Geet is not able to sleep after her talk with Maan
Geet(st):"yeh kya kia maine... ek party ke liye Maan se itne bure tareeke se baat ker lee... woh khud pareshan hoker mujhe phone ker rahe the aur main... main Maan se aise behave kiya... sirf ek party ke liye..."
Maan(st):"Geet to bhoot upset ho gayee... no I can't do this to her... but I can't let her go alone... mujhe bhi uske saath jana hoga... aur waise achcha bhi hai... mujhe pata to chalega that Dev is following her for sure or not.. ya main bewajah jyada hee soch raha hoo... aur uss Sameera... no ... uss se der ker main apnee Geet ke khushiyon ko aise nahi jane de sakta... "
Maan calls Geet and Geet immediatly picks his phone
Geet without listening to Maan:"I am sorry Maan... maine apse aise baat ke... apne kuch soch ker hee mana kiya hoga na... maine ek party ke liye apse..."
Maan is smiling at his Misty's love for him:"Geet.. sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye na... apnee misty ko itna gussa dila diya maine... waise tumhare liye ek khuskhabree hai..."
Geet(instantly):"kya... humaree shadi kee date pakki ho gayee..."
Maan:"Geet tum kahan se kahan jaatee ho... abhi party kee baat ho rahee thee... tum shadi pe kahan pahuch gayee..."
Geet:"mujhe laga party wali baat khatam ho gayee... tou yahee news hogee..."
Maan:"nahi party wali baat khatam nahi huee... we will both go to your party on Saturday..."
Geet:"kya... ohhh Maan... i luv you luv you luv you..."
Maan is relieved after making Geet happy... he feels like teasing her...
Maan:"hnnn... bass bol ker kaam chalana chatee ho... what will i get in return..."
Geet:"whatever you say... waise bhi kabhi aapkee baat talee hai maine..."
Maan:"think before you promise Geet... kuch mangoonga phir peche nahi hatna..."
Geet:"yeh Geet Handa ka wada hai... mangiye kya mangna hai..."
Maan:"not now... let the correct time come...abhi bhi soch lo..."
Geet:"soch liya..."
Call ends
Next whole week Maan is busy wrapping up sameera case...
Maan:"Mr. Garg so all arrangements are done for Monday... right?... I will like to review everything myself once... I don't want to take any chance... Friday whole day we are working on it"
Maan(st):"Party ke baad main khud Geet ko saree baat bata dunga... we are going to party together... Sameera ko agar mere aur Geet ke bare me shak ho gaya... then she can twist things in Geet's mind... which will only hurt Geet..."
So whole Friday Maan is busy going different places... talking on phone... and making various arrangement with Mr. Garg...
On Saturday evening... Geet is ready in white Saree with silver border... her hair is coombed in straight.. she has a long earing with diamond... a diamond neckless ..she has a big ring surrounded with small diamonds... with just a touch of slight make up above all this Geet is looking like an angel...
Maan is in his party suit and comes to pick Geet up... when Geet comes down Maan cannot move his gaze from her... with smile on his face he is completely lost in her...
Geet is very happy to see Maan in party wear... he was looking so handsome... she looks at Maan but he is lost in her beauty... Geet comes near Maan... she is blushing by the way Maan is admiring her...
Maan softly places his hand on her cheeks "Geet... " and he places a kiss on her fore head taking a deep breath.. with this act and restlessness of Maan Geet is blushing like anything...
Geet:"abb... woh Maan.. chalen..."
Maan:"hnnn"
They leave for the party...
Next to be continued
Precap:"tou mera shak sahi tha... yeh yahan bhi aa gaya..."
tellyme2011-08-24 08:13:55
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Smily @angel_smily
+ 2
12 years ago
wowww yaar it's awesome ffi read this ff in one go nd it's really superbplzzz add me in ur pm list
allibr @allibr
12 years ago
i started reading ur ff and i really loved itplz do pm me
ritzy09 @ritzy09
+ 7
12 years ago
kya baat hai...chalo saare shak door kar diye tumne Anu...all set for party though now I am scared because of this sameera wala angle...but chalegs...you know why...mujhe Geet par pura bharosa hai...she is childish but not immature...and she has comple faith on her Maan...
JayaR @JayaR
12 years ago
Loved it Anu...Loved their cute little adorable fight...And how they think about each others happiness...
jassi @Jassi_preety
+ 3
12 years ago
Wow Nice FF...Pls Pm me and Update soon
seemamary @seemamary
12 years ago
Amazing, the precap is interesting continue soon.
Radhika Shah @Radhi12
+ 6
12 years ago
nice update..
Continue soon
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
Dev we all know will be there...
As for Sameera till now it's only Maan's assumption or a precutionary measure regarding Sameera... Let's wait and watch what happens in a party...
Anubhuti @tellyme
+ 14
12 years ago
[QUOTE=piya-]Hi Anu
Okay coming to the update as usual ekdum jhakas tha yaar
Loved maneet convo
Maan Geet ko mana kar deta hai n Geet gusse mein maan se naaraz ho jaati hai
Then both realizing their mistakes
phir maan k kuch kehne se pehle Geet maan se sorry kehti hai maan bhi maafi mangta hai
but the khushi ki khabar part was good... Geet humare shadi ki taarek tai ho gayi Geet inti utawali ho thoda wait karo dear ...
Ok Maan ne geet se ek vaada liya I hope future mein iss vaade se koi problem na ho
Anu ek baat samaj mein nahi aayi Maan baar baar ye kyun soch raha tha k Sameera Geet ko hurt kar sakthi hai ... she can twist the situation... can u pls clarify this I mean Geet ko tho puri sachhai pata hai n I m sure she won't believe Sameera then why maan is thinking this way
Khair update was dhamakedaar
sorry for late comments
love-Piya[/QUOTE]
He is not worried that Geet will believe Sameera... he is sure about his Geet...
I will just reveal ... just after very few parts that what dirty plan has Sameera come out this time... but Maan has worked all against it...
Maan knows that if Sameera comes to know about Geet and his relation she may try to say those wrong things to Geet... Geet will always trust Maan but then Geet will know what bad plan Sameera has against Maan and Geet will be very troubled to realize that Maan is facing or still going thru so much...
He want so save her from this as Geet gets very disturbed even if Maan is in small trouble and this is a big issue and Geet will be hurt for Maan...
I hope I cleared your doubt dear
Luv
---Anu