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On request of some of buddies I will now give precap in all my updates.
As you all know Maan is gone to NY so pls bear with me for few updates. Along with Geet I am trying to pacify his anger too but he is Maan...doesn't listen to anyone...what can I do
Here I am with next Part
Part 18
Maan in his flight...tries to get a nap...but the fight with geet comes to his mind...
Maan(ST):"main bilkul sahi hee kehta hoon...dimag hai hee nahi iss ladki me...woh banda...idiot kaise kaise baat ker raha tha usse per isse kuch samajh hee nahi aa raha tha...bass mujhe chirhane ke chakkar me kissi se bhi kuch sune jaa rahee thee...yeh
nahi samajh aaya use kee woh uskee he insult ker raha tha...aise baat to main kissi anjane ke liye bhi nahi sun sakta...aur yeh to mere ghar me Geet ko hee bol raha tha...."
he again tries to sleep...but after a while
Maan(St):"aur ulta mujh se ladd parii...kya keh rahee thee...get off with interfering in my life...aisa kaha usne...himmat to dekho iss ladki ke...mujhe...Maan singh khurana ho aise kaha...theek hai...yehi karoonga main...
kabhi to khud he kehtee hai...Maan mujhse door nahi jaiye...aur phir jab mann chaha keh diya...do not intefere...sabhi aurteen eh jaisee hotee hain...
bass ek hee saukh hai inka...apne ishare pe sabko nachaoo...no baby no...not done with Maan sigh khurana"
At 7:30 am in morning Geet is in KM...Mr. Khurana is taking tea in the garden...
Mr Khurana:"Geet bete...aap yahan...subah subah..."
Geet:"uncle woh Maan kahan hain..."
Mr. k:"bete...Maan...Maan kahan hain yahan...per appko abhi kya kaam hai..."
Geet does not have more patience to answer any Q at that time...
Geet(st):"Maan nahi hain...itne subah kaha gaye...viccky se puchtee hoon..."
she runs toward viccky's room...who is sleeping...
Geet:"viccky get up...darwaza kholo..."
Viccky:"Geet tum itnee subha subah yahan kya ker rahee hoon...main so raha hoon abhi...baad me milta hoon..."
Geet:"get up soon...mujhe impt baat kernee hai..."
Viccky asks for 5 mints gets fresh and opens the door...
Geet rushes in
Geet:"Viccky yeh itnee early Maan kahan chale gayen hai..."
Viccky:"ohh hoo Madam...kya baat hai...abb to bass Maan he Maan aapkee juban pe hota hai...hum to aiwayee hain..."
Geet:"shut up viccky...Bataoo na Maan kahan hain..."
Viccky:"sorry baby...you missed him...just like me...kal raat ko main itne der se aaya aur tab tak to Bro ja chuke the"
Geet:"kaal raat se Maan nahi hain...aur tum itne aram se so rahe hoo...sabhi itne aram se hain ghar per..."
Viccky:"tou isme pareshan hone kee kya baat hai...woh bhi apne flight me aram ker rahe honge..."
Geet:"kya...flight se kahan gaye hain..."
Viccky:"ohh Geet...pata nahi hai kya tumhe...he is on NY trip..."
Geet:"kya?????????nahi aisa nahi ho sakta...Maan Ny nahi ja sakte..."
Viccky:"kyun nahi jaa sakte...unka visa aur passport valid hai to kyun nahi jaa sakte...abb tumhara Q khatam ho gaya ho to main so jaoon..."
Geet pulled him up
Geet:"viccky...Get up... mujhe Maan se bhoot impt baat kernee hain...kitne din me ayenge??"
Viccky:"din me...na na na na...say month...minimum 1 month...may be 1 and half month bhi lag sakta hai..."
Geet:"viccky tum mujhse majak ker rahe ho na...sach bataoo naa...mujhe pareshan nahi karooo"
Vickky:"oyyy..hoyyy...yeh betabi...but main sach bol raha hoon...wahan ek project suru kerna hai isliye time to lagega hee..."
Geet:"viccky...abb main kya karoon..."
Viccky:"intezaar...now let me sleep..."
Geet:"Get up...yahan meri jaan atkee padi hai aur tumhe sona hai...maine bhoot bade galtee ker di...aur Maan mujhse bhoot naraz hai...matlab bhoot jyada..."
Viccky:"yeh tumlogon kee puranee kahani hai...isme naya kya hai...kab hua yeh..."
Geet:"nahi viccky...OMG!!!...kaal woh jane kee tayaree ker rahe the...aur maine unhe kaisee kaisee baat keh dee...I did a blunder viccky...abb main kya karoon...ek help karoge...jab Maan ka phone ayega then will you give his NY number to me..."
Viccky:"Ok...at your service mam..."
Geet is all worried...waht shuld she do now...she is sitting in the hall of KM thinking...
Everyone gathers for breakfast and Mrs khurana asks Geet also to take brakefast...Geet says no...she is in her thought
Viccky sees Geet worried...he is in full fun mood to tease Geet...
Mrs khurana:"Geet...kya baat hai...bhoot pareshan ho beta..."
Viccky comes down singing loud
Viccky(SINGING):"RUTHE RUTHE PIYA MANAOON KAISE...RUTHE RUTHE PIYA..."
Mrs k:"yeh kya viccky...subah subah yeh gana kyun gaa rahe hoo..."
Viccky:"is tarah ka scene hai movie ka...to gana ka setup soch raha tha...Geet yeh gana situation ko suit to ker raha hai na..."
Geet gets angry at viccky and goes away...
Geet is all impatient untill she gets Maan's number...
Geet(ST):"babaji...Maan ka gussa kaam ho gaya hoo...bass woh baat kerlen mujhse...main kisi bhi tarah mana loongee...saaree galtee meri hai...pehle hee bol dungee..."
When she get's his NY number from Viccky...it's night in NY and Maan after calling everyone at home is about to retied to bed...
then his phone rings and see's Geet's number
Maan(ST): "abb yeh mujhe kyun phone ker rahee hai...abb kaun si nayee ladaii sujhee isse...kerne do...isne soch kaise liya ki itna kuch hone ke baad main isse baat bhi karoonga..."
Geet keeps making call so that atleast once Maan will pick it...but atlast maan switch off his phone and sleep...
this keeps happening for each day...Maan never picks her phone and and Geet's paniking increases...
One night when Maan is switched his phone off...she is very sad as usual she takes out their snap of camp and start remebring their day their
Geet(ST-looking at his snap):"Maan pls aise nahi kijiye...meri galtee hai, mann rahee hoon...tabhi to itna phone ker rahee hoon...ek baar baat bhi ker lijiye pls...itna gussa bhi kaise ker lete hain aap..."
Tears drop her eyes...
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On the other side...House of Rajendra Kapoor...owner Kapoor builders...talking to his son Dev Kapoor
Rajendra:"Dev...abb samay aa gaya hai hume apna plan execute kerne ka...bhoot raj kerliya KH construction ne...Handa aur Khurana...saath milker saaree industry ko piche chor diya...aur jabse yeh Maan singh khurana bussiness me aaya hai isne tou saree bussiness hee capture ker lee hai..."
Dev:"per Dad hum sab suru kaise karenge..."
Rajndra:"abhi tumhe kuch kerne ke jarrorat nahi hai...pehle main uss Handa ke pass uskee batee keliye rishta le ker jaoonga...phir jab tumhare rishta ek baar uske betee se ho jaygee...phir alag karenge hum in khurana aur Handa ko...aur Handa ki saree property tumhee to dekhoge...uske betee in sab cheezoon se bhoot door hai..."
Dev:"wow dad...abb jald hee suru kiya jaye yeh plan"
Rajendra goes to meet Brij handa
Brij:"yes Rajendra...you wanted to have meeting with me...I came here on your insistence...I don't think i want to make any bussiness dealings with you"
Rajendra:"Brij...why do you always think of bussiness...Main kyun tumhare saath Bussiness ke baat karoonga...actually mera beta Dev hai...and he has done all his studies abroad...abhi mere sath business bhi sambhalne laga hai...per bada sabhaya hai yeh ladka..."
Brij:"yeh tumne mujhe apne bete ke gun batane ke liye yaha bulaya hai...I am sorry, i have impt stuffs to do"
Rajendra:"Arre pehle meri baat to sun lo...mera beta arrange marraaige he karega aur abb mujhe ek bahu chahiye ghar me...ghar kee raunak hotee hain ladkiya...to sabse pehle mere khyal me tumharee batee hee aayee...ek baar dekha hai usse...bahut pyaree ladki hai woh"
Brij:"per maine tumhare bete ko nahi dekha..."
Rajendra:"tou mil lo...akhir ladka to tumbhee chahoge na apnee ladki ke liye..."
Brij is confused but agrees...
He meets Dev and Dev as per plan is able to impress Brij.
Brij is not sure about this relation as he does not trust Rajendra very much but he want give a chance to Dev and see how Geet feels about Dev after meeting him
Next to be continued
Precap 1: Geet kee rishte kee Baat ne Maan ke gusse ke agg me kiya Ghee ka kam
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Anu
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nishi @nishi_I-fian
+ 2
12 years ago
awesome update yar...Geet k rishtai ki baat ne toh mujhai v restless ker diya...Omg maan flight-wlight choro...Come back soon..Wanna knw more abt sec. Precap...Plz update soon
abina03 @abina03
12 years ago
lovely updateVicky is so sweeti am sure Geet can alone manage this Devhope you will update soon
palak13 @palak13
12 years ago
super excited poor geet maan is not answering her call lol vicky was making me laugh when he was teasing geet. god hope dev and his dad plan dont work.. the precap is awesome update soon and thanks for the pm
shalinisaran89 @shalinisaran89
12 years ago
awesome upd...dev...bakra he he...he
Maaneet.Lover @Maaneet.Lover
12 years ago
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roopali @rsroopali
+ 4
12 years ago
wowww awesomeeen ya dev d bakra
Tyro @Tyro
+ 5
12 years ago
awesome part...vicky is such a tease...maan itni jaldi nahi maanne wala...geet really has to work very hard...yr deb bich me kahan se aa gaya??continue soon..thnx for PM..
Tanu @butterfly.tanu
12 years ago
love the part..wanna know hw maan will react to this news..cont soon..
--Nargis-- @--Nargis--
+ 5
12 years ago
Hmmm...toh Maan sahaab kuch ziyaad ahi aakad rahe hai...huh? Poor Geet...feeling bad for her...she is missing him so much...upar se she is feeling so guilty about what she said to him. Ugh...not liking this Dev...and Mr. Kapoor guy at all. So Dev all set to be the groom...usse kya pata uska paala kiss se pedne waala hai...MSK and Geet ke pyaar ke beech mein aayega...i think not!! Really looking forward to the next part. Would be nice if Maan ran back home to India...hearing about a rishta for Geet...kaise yeh hone dega!! I can just see him getting bck home and giving her attitude...when in actuality all he wants to do is just grab her and pull her into him...ke hemesha Geet ussi se i judde rahe!! Looking forward to the next part...plz update soon!!
Divya Nair (aka Piya) @piya-
+ 10
12 years ago
Brilliant work anu
unka visa aur passport valid hai tho kyun nahi ja sakte this was really a good one
i loved d way vicky was teasing geet " ruthe ruthe piya manau kaise
thanks 4 d pm anu
precap dev bana bakra
nice one keep it up
love- piya