Kabir starts walking towards mayuri.. Mayuri feels a bit shy..
He extends his hand..
Kabir: Hi i am kabir..
Vikrant comes and stands next to him..
Vikrant: Baba ye aap kya kar rahe hai.. Ye meri umar ki hai..
Mayuri: Toh ye tumhare dad?
Vikrant: haan ye mere bab hai..
Mayuri: aap ki ithni umar hogayi hai aur phir bhi aap ithne jawan lagthe hai not bad haan..
Vani starts laughing..
She moves closer to him..
Mayuri : aur aap ithne hatte katte bhi hai..
Kabir is electrocuted with her touch..
Mayuri: kya aap mere sath date par chalenge..
He gulps his own saliva which is stuck in his throat..
Veer: boliye na kuch..
Mayuri waits for his response
Mayuri she leaves thinking that he is not interested..
Mahir comes and pushes kabir..
Mahir: dad jayiye.. Aapki mayuri aapka wait kar rahi hai.. And smiles..
Vikrant: tum pagal ho gaye ho kya woh ek morni hai morni..
Kabir runs behind her they bid them a good bye.. 😉
Vikrant holds his head with his hands..
Vikrant: main icchadari naag, mera baap nevla.. Meri maa morni aur mera bhai alien.
Mahir : ek aur..
Vikrant: kya?
Mahir: hamara ek aur bhai cheel 🦅
He points at veer.
Veer smiles..
Vikrant: ye kab hua..
Veer: bahuth pehle 😂
Vikrant: hey bhagwan kya musibath hai..
All laughs looking at vikrant's situation.. 😂
Suddenly a light appears which pulls rudra..
Rudra: shayad mera safar yahi thak tha.. Mujhe avantika se badhla lena tha aur maine le liya 😊ab meri jaane ki bari agayi..
BeNi: shukriya aap yaha thak aye
Rudra smiles and bids a good bye to all..
Rudra looks at shivangi for the one last time as he was in love with her.
He smiles and leaves..
Suddenly mahir gets a vision.. Where he sees veer dying in his arms..
Mahir screams nahi..
All people surround him..
Bela: kya hua mahirji aap cheeke kyun..
Veer: tune kuch dekha..?
Bani:bolo na mahir tumne kuch dekha?
Mahir: veer ki jaan khathre main hai..
Bani's heart sank for a minute..
Veer: mujhe kuch nahi ho saktha jab thak mera gandhak mere sath hai..
Shivanya: ye bhole nath ki soochna hai.. Hum isse nazar andaza nahi kar sakthe..
Rithik: shivanya sahi keh rahi hai..
Shivangi: lekin hum log iska arth kaise doondhenge..
Rocky : sochenge kya aur kaise karna hai..
Shakura: iss veer ko kuch nahi hoga.. Saala kithni baad mauth ke mooh se wapas aya hai..
Shesha hits shakura and asks him to stay quiet..
Bani laughs..
Veer: tu toh keh raha tha sheshu tujhe dant thi nahi hai.. Phir ye kya hai..
Shakura:sheshu baby tum bhi na.. Ghar pe chahe jo kuch karlo inke saamne marne ki kya zarooeath thi.. All laughs at their cute bonding..
Mahir pretends to smile but he is worried for veer.
Beni can see tension on mahir's face..
Bani: keeps hands on mahir's shoulder..
Bani: veer ko kuch nahi hoga.. Mere hothe hue toh bilkul bhi nahi..
Veer comes and make him smile..
They all lit a fire and starts dancing around it to celebrate their day 1 victory.
Markat seems to be very tensed..
Markat: ab mujhe hi mere khas hatiyaron ke sath jaana hoga..
Next morning they see that entire naglok is calm..
Mahir: kuch gadbad hai.. He goes wakes up everyone..
Veer: kya hai mahir sone de na..
Mahir: utth..
Veer: kya hua..
Mahir: woh dekh udhar..
Veer looks at the direction in which sun is rising..
They see some shadows..
Veer and mahir gets alert..
Veer..
Veer looks at them.. He is happy to see balwant who is coming with his cheel clan.. He goes and hugs them..
Veer: dad.
Balwant: tune mujhe bathaya nahi..
Veer: kya..
Balwant: tu markat se lad raha hai..
Veer: sorry dad.. Dimag se nikal gaya.. Lekin apko patha kaise chala
Balwant points at mahir
Balwant: isne bola..
Mahir wanted some additional eyes on veer. He felt cheels are best.
Veer: tu bhi na chote. And hugs him. 🤗
Mahir smiles..
Bani wakes up and sees balwant.
Bani: daddyji aap yaha..
Balwant: mujhe toh aana hi th mere bete ke pass and smiles..
Veer: andar chaliye dad..
Ponky looks at all the nags sleeping and gets scared and runa behind balwant.
Suddenly veer sees change in weather..
There is storm filled with dust.. Which looked like it will take away everything from them.
All stands and looks at the storm..
Shivanya:mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaiss kuch bahuth bura hone wala hai..
Mahir gets scared hearing this.. He looks at veer. Veer holds his hands and assures him that he will be fine..
Suddenly the storm stops they all was about to leave for their work..
They hear a voice..
"Bahu"....
"Bahurani"...
Rivanya and roshiv turns to see the familiar voice..
Vani turns behind to hear a much scary voice..
Veer: markat...
All gathers when veer takes markat's name..
Markat claps her hands..
Nayantara and tamsi stands next to them..
Vish: tamsi.. Her heart sank for a minute when she saw tamsi..
Vikrant supports her..
Vikrant: sambhalo khud ko..
Shivsha: yamini...
Nayantara tries to attack bani.
Bani: kaun ho tum..
Nayan: main nayantara hun.. Main ek sabse shaktishali icchadari naagin hun..
Bani: lekin tumhara toh hamse koi lena dena hi nahi hai.. Toh tum yaha kyun ayi ho..
Nayan: tum sabne milke meri maa ko mar diya.. Main usika badhla lene ayi hun..
She attacks bela..
Bela : kaun hai tumhari maa.. Aur kisne kaha tumse ki.. Hamne unhe mara hai..
Nayan: markat ne..
Bela: hamne tumhari maa ko nahi maara..
Bani:ye sach bol rahi hai..
Nayan: nahi tum sab jhoote ho. She attacks them..
Suddenly they see some one coming out of the cave.
Nayan wipes her eyes to see manyata..
She runs towards her..
Nayan: maa...
Manyata:hugs her tightly.. Mujhe inlogone nahi markat ne mara tha.. Meri shaktiya hasil karne ke liye.. Meri bacchi tumhe inse nahi usse ladna chahiye..
Nayan feels heartbroken.. She apologises to them..
Nayan stands with them in this fight.
Manyata stays back to see the end of markat who killed her brutually for powers..
Yamini: kaisi ho bahu.. Yad kiya mujhe..
Aur kali naagin.. Kaisi ho tum suna hai tumne party badhal di..
Shivanya: tum jaise dhoke bazon ko koi bhula bhi nahi saktha..
Shesha: maine party badhal nahi di.. Main sahi ke sath khadi hun..
Yamini: ye kali naagin.. Aisi acche insano ki harkathein tujhpar suite nahi karthe.. Tu jab buri hothi hai thab kaafi zyada.. Woh kya bolthe hai.. Hot lagthi hai..
Shivangi: bandh kariye ye bakwas..
Yamini: tu aur rocky bhi hai yaha.. Chalo aaj sabse samna hohi jaye..
Shesha was about to attack yamini..
Yamini: na na kaali naagin.. Tu mujhe nahi mar sakthi.. Tu toh kya insab main koi bhi mujhe nahi mar saktha.. Patha hai kyun.. Kyunki maine tapas karke shivji ye vardan liye mujhe koi bhi icchdari jeev maar na sake..
Shivanya: tries to attack her again..
Yamini holds her neck..
Shivanya feels immence pain as yamini has applied coating of belpatra on her body to torture them..
Shivangi: maa..
Yamini holds her neck as well..
Yamini: mujhe maroge tum log.. Pehle khud ko bacha kar toh dekho..
On the other end..
Vish runs towards tamsi..
Vish: beta tum theek ho..
Tamsi: ahem.. kaun beta..
Vish: main tumhari maa hun..
Tamsi uses her power and throws vish in the air..
BeVik holds vish..
Bela: Vish..
Vikrant: Vishaka
Bela: tum theek toh ho..
Visha still in immence pain given by her own smiles and nods to say yes..
Vikrant fights for his wife..
Vikrant: Kaise ladki ho tum.. Apne maa ko aise dhakka de diya..
Tamsi: aap hothe kaun hai mujhse aise bath karne wale.. She holds his neck and tortures him..
Behir and vish screams for vikrant..
Vikrant struggles in pain..
On the other end..
Markat : veer.. Tu jantha hai ne teri maa tujhse kithna zyada pyar karthi hai.. Uthna ki tujhe marne ke liye ek pal bhi nahi sochegi..
She tries to attack veer. Inorder to kill him..
Gandhak saves veer.
Balwant: tune kya socha veer ko aise hi mardegi.. Veer ke pass gandhak hai.. Jo uska baal bhi baka nahi hone dega..
Markat understands that gandhak will save him..
Bani : kya hua.. Ek patthar se har gayi..
Markat: takes her weapon and shoots at mahir..
Veer runs towards mahir and mahir is only focusing on vikrant..
Veer takes that weapon inside him since the attack was not meanr for veer the gandhak could not save him..
Veer screams in pain.. He flies and falls on the ground severly injured..
Everyone screams for veer.
Mahir holds him before he touches the ground..
Mahir can not imagine his vision was true..
His eyes get moist..
Mahir:veer tu theek hai..
Markat laughs..
Markat: kya hua adi naagin.. Tumne kya socha main bina taiyyari ke aungi..
Bani is in the state of shock..
She runs towards veer. And holds him..
Bani: veeranshu utho tum aise nahi ja sakthe..
Mahir: please veer utho..
Balwant: utho veer.
Veer while dying..
Veer: sweetheart.. Mere pass bas kuch hi pal bache hai.. He tries to get up.. But falls down screaming on the ground..
Veer holds her hand.. Maine jo bhi satyug main kiya woh anjane main kiya.. Main tumse iss yug main kaafi zyada pyar kartha hun.. Ithni had thak ki tumhare liye jaan bhi de saktha hun.. Lekin shayad nahi de paunga.. Iss bar maine apni jaan apne bhai ke liye diye hai.. He holds mahir's head.. Tu vada kar mujhse royega nahi..
Mahir with heavy heart: ut thu.. Aisa mazak math kar..
Veer pulls shakura: tu iska khayal rakhna
Shakura whose eyes are wet after seeing veer like this nods..
Veer hugs mahir and bani and they feel nothing as if veer has stopped breathing..
Mahir : veer....
Balwant and other cheels starts crying for veer.
Bani: kya kiya tumne veeranshu ke sath..
Markat:kuch nahi bas brahmastra se iski jaan le li..
Bani: kya... She wipes her tears.. Tune veeranshu par brahmastra se war kiya..
Bani : main tumhe chodungi nahi..
Bela: hum tumhe chodenge nahi..
Bani and bela joins their hands... Mahir carries veeranshu in his arms.. They all 4 form powerful power which has a potential to destory any thing..
Bani uses her all her strength and attacks markat.. The combined force which attacked markat was so high that she falls dead on the ground..
Yamini and tamsi are shocked..
Vish takes a trishul from the temple and pierce it across tamsi's chest inorder to save vikrant..
Vish:maine kaafi koshish ki tumhe apni beti banane ki.. Lekin tum sirf hukum ki beti ho..
Rithik: pushes yamini with so much force that she falls on the trishool which is kept on the temple front..
Yamini: rithik tu..
Rithik: haan main.. Tumne ye vardan le liye ki tujhe koi icchadari na mare.. Lekin main toh aaj bhi insaan hun.. Aur tujhe marne ka sabse zyada adikar mera hi hai..
He cries in pain..
Mahir carries dead veer.. Takes them infront of temple..
Its a bad day for entire.. Naglok.
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