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Aquabutterfly
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly 5 years ago Thank you so much for your kind words. It really means a lot - By bribe, I meant the commissioner basically bribed Arjun to join ETF and the bribe was Sikander's case. Because the commissioner did tell him that he will handover Sikander's case to ETF when they get some lead. - Like you said, Riya being Roshni's sis is very repetitive. So I'm not introducing that angle in this story. Riya knows Arjun but for a different reason. - In this story, I'm only going to be focusing on Sikander's case because it has a lot of mysteries and questions to be answered. There will be a separate story for Riya being present during the original cases that were in the show after her death. I hope that appropriately answers your questions.Sakshi's character is intriguing and had lots of potential. I agree with you that she can be the voice that's different from everyone else and that's the reason why I couldn't imagine her as the vamp. And a vamp Sakshi in Ariya stories is very common and I don't want this story to be the cliche. While reading the paragraph, I thought you are a Sakshi fan but I guess not. For now, I've kept the updates as weekly because I am receiving a good response on this *touch wood*. I'll be updating this every weekend so I guess the next update will be tomorrow. Thank you once again. I hope this story can maintain your interest in it
Aquabutterfly
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly 5 years ago Thank you so much dear Abhi toh suspense aur badhne waala hai I'm glad you liked it
Aquabutterfly
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly 5 years ago [QUOTE=teja21]Nice update dear
Thanx fr d pm[/QUOTE] Thank you so much dear
Aquabutterfly
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly 5 years ago Thank you so much dearI'm glad you liked it
Phir_Mohabbat
HattBurbak @Phir_Mohabbat 5 years ago Ooh I like this narration style, you give enough information and let the readers fill the gaps, not spoonfeeding everything. I have couple of questions though, if you are kind enough to explain.- Who bribed Arjun and when and how it led to Sikandar? As far as I remember nobody believed Arjun regarding Sik because most probably Sik was a myth which in the last epi Rathore got proof on and both went on to find him?- So Riya probably know Arjun from a time before ETF and he knows too but can't remember? Wonder if she is his Sister-in-law or something...eh personally not too fond of Roshni/Ri being sis, it was something done to death in AriYa fanfics previously.- Will you incorporate cases which actually happened on show post Ri's death? Would be really interesting to see her in situations which we were deprived of in the show.Sakshi not being a third angle/ villain is so refreshing, I am glad you clarified it in some reply. I personally did not like the characters when the show was online but now have gotten over it. To think about it, the character has potential to be a voice very different than others- she is a journalist (albeit shown very childish and one dimensional in show) she knows black and white, she sees the police procedural which is not always 'moral' (Arjun literally threatens suspects and criminals during custody) and can question others on the same, a vehement voice which may led the team to work differently in a right way. Rathore does presses on being right but always succumbs to Arjun, the juniors will follow, Aisha is alot similar like Arjun. Riya can oppose to his ways but she can use a helping hand Weird how I wrote a paragraph on a character which I don't even like. I hope you update soon even though you mentioned updates may not be regular. Eager to see the team dynamics now that our girl is back!Haal-e-Dil2019-04-20 11:12:02
shreyashi19mld
Shreyashi Chakraborty @shreyashi19mld 5 years ago Superb n amazing Love it Finally Riya ki entry ho gayi Want to read more Suspense to bahot hai Let's see what happens next Eagerly waiting for next
Aquabutterfly
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly 5 years ago [QUOTE=ishitadalal]Great story...love it...i want a FF with full on romance alond side of thriller...nd plz continue soon
[/QUOTE] Thank you so much dear You will get a lot of romance with equal amount of thriller *fingers crossed*I'm glad you liked it
Aquabutterfly
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly 5 years ago Thank you so much dear. It truly means a lot to me. It was a heartbreaking moment when Riya sacrificed herself for the entire city.Yes, Riya is back in action and now a lot of things will happen
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