Though the night was loud, the silence in the old, shabby warehouse was deafening. A man stood in front of a hooded figure on the chair, his hands raised up in surrender, one empty while other held a pistol, as tens of guns were pointed at him. Arjun stepped forward from the crowd, anger melting into disbelief as the face of the man lightened up by the single bulb in the room.
Finally, he stood in front of the man he had been madly searching for. His fingers clutched the gun as it pointed in the direction of Sikander. But his hands were shaking, his index finger refusing to press the trigger it was resting on. The lifeless body of his wife flashed in front of his eyes and his heart pounded against his chest. However, one look at Sikander and his determination was swept away.
He wanted to shoot the man responsible for his misery, wanted to end this chapter of his life. But he couldn't. He just simply couldn't. And that was when Arjun realized that maybe he wasn't as cold-hearted as he thought he was.
His arm fell to his side, his grip on the gun loosening when he realized that Sikander won yet again. And this time it was he who was willingly accepting defeat. There really was nothing he could do about it. He lost!
Suddenly, a gunshot rung out shaking the entire place followed by Arjun's scream, "Riya!"
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Mahi Way @RainOfDew
+ 23
5 years ago
[QUOTE=Aquabutterfly] Thank you so much dear Read the story and then I'll ask you if you still think Arjun should've shot Sikander
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Waiting for ur updates thenLets see if u remember to ask or not
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
The first chapter will be up tomorrow
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
[QUOTE=minamma]When are you going to update...
[/QUOTE] The first chapter will be up tomorrow
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
[QUOTE=Arjunasr]Prologue
Wonderful update. Hey no offence but this start reminded me of Beyhadh! Arjun reached Sikander but couldn't shoot him, stating he's not that cold blooded, what does that mean? Is Sikander someone close to him? Only time will tell. But what happened to Riya hope she's fine.Thanks for pm. And sorry for late comments.
[/QUOTE] Thank you so much dear Now that you mentioned it, you're right. It was completely unintentional and story definitely has no similarity
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
Thank you so much dear I wish I could answer that but Sikander's identity is the biggest suspense of the story
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
Thank you so much dear To know the answer to all these questions, you will have to wait for the story to unfold
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
Thank you so much dear The story will get even more interesting
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
Thank you so much Di Sikander kaun hai aur Riya ko kya hua hai, that will be revealed in the story
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
[QUOTE=Mdmadona]What happened to riya at the end???
Who is sikky??? Nice prologue Cont soon [/QUOTE] Thank you so much dear The story will unfold and answer all your questions
Jai Shree Ram @Aquabutterfly
+ 16
5 years ago
[QUOTE=minamma]Mysterious start...
Please continue soon[/QUOTE] Thank you so much dear