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Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
Thanks Dear. Happy to know you liked this update . Plz no sorry from now on, you can take your time . Well they can pretend they are roommates but they are seeing the other one as there spouse all the time. You just can't live in denial about the fact that they are married .You might try not to address the issue now but you cant help see the other one as your spouse. Will try to update before Weekend LoveNita
NitaReid2016-03-28 19:49:59
shamina @Sakkiyah
+ 2
8 years ago
My friend, First of all sorry for my late reply. The update was awesome. The feeling of love is started from both sides. The care and jealousy are the common symptoms of that. But when they will realize it? It will be interesting. Sanskar is a good husband. He was waiting for her mis call and he checked his phone more than ten times. And swara is jealous, she is behaving like a typical wife. The fact is that they accepted this wedding. And laksh is playing the cupid between swasan, nice And ragini is in her thoughts and ego. Waiting for your next update.
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
[QUOTE=CogitoErgoSum]Res Will Un Res as soon as I can, dear. Not feeling well so catching up with pending Un-res's a little gradually. Please bear with me. Un-ResHey Nita Back finally for my Un-res, thanks for your patience dear. Have been feeling really under the weather for many days, with my vitamin deficiency and severe cold. Finally got a bit better, thanks for all your get well soon wishes. ...You can take all the time you want Viji dear .I am happy to know your are getting better. Hopefully you will be back to your best soonComing to this chapter, I liked the steady and gradual pace you have shown in the growth and deepening of the SwaSan relationship. That gave a realistic touch, because both of them were kind of forced into their wedding. Though they are of course soulmates , it would take some time for them to understand each other, become comfortable with one another. I am happy that no one is complaining about the pace. As i still do feel it is a bit slow. But as you said i cant seem them becoming close with out the small steps first. Chapter 9 will be a slow one too .Precaution warning .Sanskaar is really so mature and understanding. I loved the way you have described his thoughts about Swara---his introspection that he really loves the way she looks, the innocence and beauty of her eyes, and more than that, her inner beauty which complements her outer beauty too. I loved the way you made your readers look at Swara through Sanskaar's eyes. His regard and affection for her, his admiration for the way she forgave Lakshya, the way she has maintained her cheerfulness despite her childhood of always being forced into activities which would suit Ragini---all these were well described.Thanks dear. I wanted readers to see how Sanskar views Swara and i am glad i was able to convey it a little. I also liked his thought process and introspection about his expectations from their marriage, how he would handle the situation if he fell in love with Swara but
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
NitaReid2016-03-28 19:51:16
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
Thanks dear. Will send you the PM from now on . Update might be not so soon. Will try to post one before the weekend
Cogito_Ergo_Sum @Cogito_Ergo_Sum
+ 3
8 years ago
[QUOTE=NitaReid][QUOTE=CogitoErgoSum]Res Will Un Res as soon as I can, dear. Not feeling well so catching up with pending Un-res's a little gradually. Please bear with me.
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Dear Viji ,What happened? Most of the my friends in IF are sick nowadays and i dont like it . Take care of yourself and Please get plenty of Rest and you can Unres next year too. I can wait .For now your health is important . Get well soon dearLoveNita[/QUOTE]Hey Nita my dear Un Res'd on Page 115 finally. Thanks for your patience and your Get well soon wishes, my dear friend. Am doing better now, should be back to normal in a few days. Lots of Love,---Viji
Sakshi jain @SakshiJain1234
8 years ago
lovely ss dr.Awesome dr waiting 4 nxt partContinue soon and plzz pm me also
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
Loved reading your comment Talia dear. Will reply to it asap.
Sree @Sree8410
8 years ago
Sree84102016-03-26 19:08:17
Sree @Sree8410
8 years ago
Seriously you think you needed to post this? I'm sad now... You read it that is enough dear. Take your time Nita. [/QUOTE]
Dont be Sad Sree. Fine i take my time and will reply to it once i am bit free . Happy . .[/QUOTE]
Very happy to see your response