A/N: Hey guys! I am becoming so enamored with this couple Decided to pen down a one shot around the hook wala scene. Hope you enjoy it. Would love to read your views _____________________________________________________________ Pallavi Deshmukh twirled off the dance floor, laughing unabashedly after a long time. She found little occasion to do so; the societal shackles of a widow too heavy for most things light hearted. Wiping the perspiration from her face, she passed by him. Him. Raghav Rao. The bane of her existence. He ignored her just like she skirted coolly past him. It was another kind of dance between them tonight. They had declared ceasefire for this ...
Rihana, yearning to break free from the predetermined fate of being a tawaif's ...
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Amekha @Amekha
+ 11
2 years ago
I regret not finding this sooner. As always, I'm in awe of the way you write Prats ๐
Bee222 @Bee222
+ 17
2 years ago
Ahhh I love this one so much, it was one of the first stories I read on Raghvi and it's still one of my favourites ๐๐I probably missed commenting then coz I can't see anything from myself here ๐ญ But I just wanted to tell you that this right here, this is what I fell in love with Raghvi for. You captured their OG vibe so perfectly ๐
Shirisha @ExoticDisaster
+ 13
2 years ago
This was so gentle yet intense ๐ I love your choice of words Prats, it was an amazing read โค
BrhannadaArmour @BrhannadaArmour
+ 12
2 years ago
You did a good job of conveying both characters through Pallavi's senses, although the use of clichรฉ expressions doesn't help. ("Virile male" is redundant, by the way.) I like that Raghav in your story expresses his certainty that Pallavi is capable of sneak attacks. On the show, he apparently forgot that she supposedly drugged his food, and coached her as if she didn't know how to get the best of anybody. This is an uneventful story, without much plot, but I liked that Raghav first tried to communicate the hooks with hand gestures - maybe kaแนญakฤmukha hasta from his Bharatanatyam? The last dialogues were pleasantly imaginative.
ayushi @Ayushi_78
+ 6
3 years ago
Pratikshaa!! Such a beautiful RaghVi OS! I happened to check the story index and landed here. The tashan, the feelings and the gestures perfectly penned down as always.Eyelashes like a BW diva cracked me up
Innocentlove96 @Innocentlove96
3 years ago
Beautifully penned down one shot ๐๐Their bickering carries a level of comfort n confidant in each other.
MsCeylon @MsCeylon
3 years ago
WhooohoooooToo hot to handleLoved it
Mysterie__girl @Mysterie_girl
+ 4
3 years ago
Wicked...the way you have written it...the exact amount of humor, the chemistry and exactly the way RaghVi would have done in the show if the scene was there...superbly written and I am very happy because from some days I was looking for their FF and now this is the very first one which I have read...and I am totally totally loving it...I am on wattpad as well, @mysterie__girl
Aheli @iam_aheli_98
3 years ago
Read this yesterday on watty n now here too. ๐ In watty I'm by the name @_little_birdie_ ๐
latecomer @latecomer
3 years ago
I am love your writing style...looking for more of your OSes