[NOCOPY] [MEMBERSONLY] Ladies, here we go again, Chapter 5 for you. This one is very much Aryan centric. Someone had said they wanted to read Aryan's POV and so here it is. Waise, there was a question that I sort of asked myself and want to clarify in case anyone else is wondering. Does Imlie speak such flawless English? (I am NOT patting my back, but you get the drift). No she still speaks her hindi dialect, the fault remains with me, that I am terrrible at thinking or writing in Hindi, forget any kind of dialect of hindi. I only speak bambaiyya hindi and that will not do here, right bhidu? So please forgive this little creative liberty. Later in the story, Imlie will get an opportunity ...
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Sundari @Param-Sundari
+ 13
2 years ago
Now this is total addiction .. and i blame you! You better pick up your typing speed now woman!Forgot to add about that massage in last part... Totally endearing and sensual 💕Coming to part 2He's keeping a count of her meals... Don't even ask what that reminds me of 🤣🤣 Arre... Uski spoon lene ki kya zarurat thi... Apni spoon se khila deta na!!Yes. It's them always open and Frank, a relation of equality no one is superior/inferior they are equals!Hospital scene - ye kis type ka katha suna Rahi hai?? Deathbed me repeat telecast of lifestory!! Khair humey kya.... High on emotions though! One could almost... Almost feel bad for malini and I did too at one point... And my 2nd fav couple in this serial was KC-MC!! Sigh but now that I think back, if they happened, i wouldn't have gotten our golden #arylie!Looking fwd to part 3
Sundari @Param-Sundari
+ 13
2 years ago
Finally caught up with ch1....So bullying does help, installments baandh lo It should be made a criminal offense to use Aryan's original lines .... I read them all with his voice in my head 🤣You have captured the essence of all characters very well here... It's exactly the way they are in my mind.Seems like karma serving adi-malini... While all's well in paradise the other side of the quartet. Let's see what this new cancer twist brings into the equation.Heart goes out to Neel... Poor kid deserves better but sins of the fathers cannot be escaped!Hoping that I catch up sooner SundariP2022-01-03 13:44:56
Piya @PiyaBawri
+ 2
2 years ago
Take all the leeway you need if it produces such masterpieces. I’m glad you didn’t venture too far away from the onscreen personalities of each character. It seemed reasonable and believable. Please continue writing and entertaining.
DJ @DJ_3
+ 4
2 years ago
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for writing Aryan's point of view.It helped fill some of the missing parts from the past chapters. As a reader, I could reflect on Imlie's realization on Aryan.
Casper13 @Casper13
2 years ago
This was beautiful 😍!! This feels so natural just the way you present a story. That essence is shinning through this story. I totally loved every conversation which took place between each character.
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aatiii @aatiii
2 years ago
It’s all so easy and natural with them.the proposal, reasoning, conditioning — everything. They are just so raw and beautiful.. sigh I adore them to bits
sheet_leher @sheet_leher
+ 3
2 years ago
I don't know how you do this. The story is fantastic. You're weaving magic with your words. Every moment, every emotion comes across to us. I don't watch the show at all, but I wait for your update everyday ❤️
lovereading14 @lovereading14
+ 8
2 years ago
lovely update! update soon!
Priti gupta @Priti1610
+ 4
2 years ago
O wow this was so wonderful of all of it.. I loved it so much the decrimination of every scene was so amazing loved it and aryan cobdition i loved it... Finally imlie said yes to him want to see how imlie build relation with aryan as husband n wife..this was so so amazing cant say more bcoz i am feeling speechless right now