Punishment 6 months later Shashi whistled to himself as he took his seat at the breakfast table. He had set the table in the balcony of his three-story bungalow so that they could have the exquisite view of the Mumbai-Worli sea link as they ate. He looked at his watch and continued staring at it till the empty mansion almost echoed with her shriek. "Mr. Babbar!" "Aah, Mrs. Sood," He smiled at her as she looked at her angrily. He nodded at the two guards who held her by her arms, and even though she struggled, her strength was practically nonexistent compared to the beefy men. They nodded back, left her, and walked out of the balcony. He tilted his head to have a good ...
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Berrygoat @Berrygoat 1 years ago Wow, absolutely in awe of ur story!!!!
Zanutix @Zanutix
+ 6
2 years ago
Ohhh i did NOT expect that.I also did not want Ram to be her saviour. I'm glad you didn't make him one!Shashi killing himself in defeat was very in-character.Thanks for sharing 💜
maaneetsangel @maaneetsangel
+ 2
2 years ago
Brilliant .. Unexpected.. Waiting for more
javeria @Javeria3991
+ 5
2 years ago
Woah! This was surprisingly unpredictable. Can’t wait to read next chapter.
Jai Shri Ram @SoniRita
+ 32
2 years ago
So descriptive, so amazing as always. This was very thrilling Shibani, and i loved the Shashi character u wrote. The depth u gave to a villian character, just superb. Wish you could write another part to it but anyways kuddos.
Bee222 @Bee222
+ 17
2 years ago
Also, can we have a Priya or Ram POV to this, pretty please? 😍
Bee222 @Bee222
+ 17
2 years ago
Oh my god. Oh my goddd.
This is too good Shibu. Shashi's characterisation... *chef's kiss* I am in love with you rn, but I'm also so angry with you bcz the show's stupid villains are now gonna be even more frustrating to watch 😩😩😩
chinnu_kaku @chinnu_kaku
+ 2
2 years ago
is the story over? i couldnt understand.someone please telle is this last part?
Himanshi @Blink_Cat
2 years ago
Oh god! Seriously that was my only reaction when I completed reading both the parts. I was silent reader here but yes, your TS was enough to bring me out of the cave. Ha!This was amazing!
Preeti Kawatra @mysterious-soul
+ 3
2 years ago
Beautifully written, loved reading it.