Prompt by sj_qh_kabhi - AsYa after Mangalpur Incident. Here you go. The past eight hours seem like the type of nightmare even Asad's conscience doesn't let him dream about. He doesn't ever want to see her wearing green. Ever again. He hates that colour now. Soiled with the texture of death, of tears and unimaginable pain. He can still feel the jungle around him, feels it closing in on him, trapping him and Zoya inside itself forever. But then the nightmare changes, and he is lost inside instead, and she's nowhere to be found. Only her screams resonate. His own screams of her name. Then nothing. Absolute silence. Hell. Just like his life was before ...
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tanvi @tanvi_mitt
2 years ago
It was poetic, emotional , sad. That incident had a major impact on Asad.
Tessaloni @Tessaloni
2 years ago
I have no idea of the context under which this was penned; I can admire it merely based on the poetic expression of the character's emotions. Very raw and deep because the descriptions are so vivid through the use of visual, tactile and kinesthetic imagery👌❤.
Ganga Vasudev @itzAagna
2 years ago
The way Asad's feelings are portrayed is so realistic and beautiful. ❤️
Waqt Zaya @WaqtZaya
+ 7
2 years ago
I loved Mangalpur for it made me love Karan as an actor the most 🥺❤️ best of all he loved it too 😚
Waqt Zaya @WaqtZaya
+ 7
2 years ago
Because I always wanted to read stories having Mangalpur track 🤣🤣🤣🤣
sj_qh_kabhi @sj_qh_kabhi
2 years ago
OMG!!!! You nailed it 🙌❤️ His emotions, his pain, his longing.. described it all so well! I always felt that those feelings were not explored as much as they should have.. but thank you for this❤️ So so perfect✨❤️
Waqt Zaya @WaqtZaya
+ 7
2 years ago
U know I was crowned as Mangalpur Madness Injector Virus ᕙ( • ‿ • )ᕗ
Waqt Zaya @WaqtZaya
+ 7
2 years ago
Hii hello this is my favourite topic ☺️❤️