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Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
Thanks Kamilla dear. Your comments made my day but i think your over exaggerating it a little bit when you say i can publish it Love you too.
foresight @foresight
+ 3
8 years ago
res. unresfinally managed to read all chapters now. so so sorry it has taken be ages. i loved how you have been insightful in bringing out some areas which if they had been done/understood in the show would have been amazing.first one is that laksh reprimand. sanskar realising that by protecting him, laksh wasnt learning. isn't that what has happened to a large extent in the show. everyone always gave into him, until they stopped one day and he was so used to it by then that he couldnt handle it. the other thing that you picked up and showed really well here is ragini's insecurities and desire to get out of the rigid atmosphere at home. AP is exactly like dadi in the show and you have brought that normal and logical need from most people who go through such life very beautifully. finally, shomi and her forcing swara emotionally into things. swara got into fake marriage and continued it for long because she wanted that family for the first time but also because shomi wanted it so bad. but here, i like how you have shown their confrontation. swara may forgive shomi, but it was good to see swara speak up and admit the reality here even if not in the show.i also like how you are slowly developing the relationship between swasan. also that this swara is lot more perception and accepting all in all really good updates all of them. waiting for the next one. foresight2016-03-09 10:43:06
kamila. @Seriously.
+ 2
8 years ago
Res for part 4Unres... It taken three days for me to unres it... Really soorryyy yaar...Nita... .. For this wonderful update... Loved it re... You all most covered the whole page still complaining about small update.. Aww soo sweet of you dear...Over imaginary swara resembles me re... It's nice to imagine Swara punching Laksh... Zombie Laksh... I loved growing bond between swasan... And Sanskaar between junior Adarsh... Jealousy Adarsh... Soo Ragini could be a hurdle for Swara in her sasural... ..Off to read next chapter within next three days...Love you...Vaiyambar......2016-03-11 06:45:36
kamila. @Seriously.
+ 2
8 years ago
Part... 3Nita.. no words re.. just perfect.. To publish.. As a novel ..I loved it to the core.. No flaws. Very emotional for me...I had tears wen Sanskaar talking about his parents how he missing his uncle... Cherishing his days with his parents... Swaras concern for him.. I was like... smiling... One cute romantic moment... Was good...Pari teasing that they would have child... Simply loved it...Love you...
Sree @Sree8410
8 years ago
Happy Women day Sree. . Well i started but still i have lot to cover. So you need to wait for awhile. I let you know if i am near the end. [/QUOTE]
Sure dear.
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
Happy Women day Sree. . Well i started but still i have lot to cover. So you need to wait for awhile. I let you know if i am near the end.
Sree @Sree8410
8 years ago
Nita Happy Woman's Day dear. I'm reminding myself that I have promised to wait for the next update and not push your creative brain. So I'm not asking, but let me know when you startLove Sree.
sarra0 @sarra0
+ 4
8 years ago
Thanks Sara for your awesome Comment, you know i enjoy reading your take as much as i enjoy reading a new OS. . LoveNita[/QUOTE]
and i love reading it so perfect...When he becomes a dad will swara b jealous of him ..or tease him and say u look after them im going shopping...mr perfect sanskaar maheshwari is making a bed for himself...Hmm sanskaar the mature...wil look forward to reading her back story and prob do some cursing...Anything swasan is near enough guaranteed to b liked laksh went to so much trouble to get his HAQ...v cant have him troubled like ragani was in the show...as long as ragani makes some sense u will b one over on the show...Ur the author the decision is urs..its our job to give u all the facts to make a decision Lets c how that bodes for swara once ragani turns evil..Nope not working...i can multi task and want them all to b hit ...who knows how many people i will want to slap ragani or the others i put on the hit list Aw thank u for liking to read my useless comments
Lana @-Lana
+ 3
8 years ago
[QUOTE=NitaReid][QUOTE=-Lana][QUOTE=NitaReid]@lana- Fine i take back the thank you... Also first let me finish this one then we will talk about the fantasy genre. I still have to start the next chapter.
[/QUOTE]hurry up [/QUOTE]
Trying First i have to watch today SwaSan scenes then i start writing . So wont be online much, will check from time to time[/QUOTE]Ok. I will read it in the weekend. I will be off to watch swasan too, and then sleep
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
8 years ago
[QUOTE=-Lana][QUOTE=NitaReid]@lana- Fine i take back the thank you... Also first let me finish this one then we will talk about the fantasy genre. I still have to start the next chapter.
[/QUOTE]hurry up [/QUOTE]
Trying First i have to watch today SwaSan scenes then i start writing . So wont be online much, will check from time to time