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Chapter 3: " Family Happiness over His Happiness"

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taniks
taniks @taniks 8 years ago Chapter 1:Wow the first chapter really lived up to all the prologue hinted at.they are married but they are still strangers, most interested to know y , can't wait to get that answer. I love how u spinning this story. The nervous tension and deliberate avoidance of a confrontation by sanskaar really heightened the gap in their relationship and that they very much still strangers to each other.nicely depicted Nita. The phone was a nice little turn it had me convinced that swara had a boy friend . that scene were she wants to leave and sanskaar forgetting everything as his concern and care for just took over was so well narrated and u done a wonderful job showing him to be such a great and genuine person, I loved DAT part.the hospital entrance was priceless , sanskaar introducing his wife to her brother in law brings another bout of curiosity from me but I am sure u will satisfy this in da next few chapters. Sanskaar comforting and reassuring His friend while a bit uncertain his to do the same for his wife was really endearing and u bought it a sense of reality.liking the little bond he us firming with the baby while swara is also doing the same ,that scene to me is a baby step towards close the gap that's between them, its still early days but to me its seems like a common ground. I really enjoyed chapter 1 at last I am catching up, will read each chapter and comment. I love the style in which u are telling this story it k3eps the reader eager for more. Thanks for the pm
Sree8410
Sree @Sree8410 8 years ago
Going to start posting in ten minutes[/QUOTE]
Sree8410
Sree @Sree8410 8 years ago
Thanks you for the assurance. But Swara backstory has to wait till chapter 5. When i started writing it , it went longer than i expected.. So will try to post Chapter 4 before sleeping . And for that i still have 3 hours left[/QUOTE]
I can stay awake for 3 hours. Just have to kill time reading something else.
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Juanita @BlurredLines 8 years ago
Thanks you for the assurance. But Swara backstory has to wait till chapter 5. When i started writing it , it went longer than i expected.. So will try to post Chapter 4 before sleeping . And for that i still have 3 hours left
Sree8410
Sree @Sree8410 8 years ago [QUOTE=NitaReid][QUOTE=Sree8410]Res Nita dear, Sorry I know its late. Its way late but was a bit busy. Let me Unres quickly then.We had enough discussion about it so moving on. Unres So you have found the answer yourself for what should Sanskar do to Laksh for gifting him with the world's most wonderful wife. Yes its true they hardly know anything about each other but it seems like they have kick-started an amazing story. Love your treatment. Thanks . Let hope i can keep writing scenes that make you happy rather than angry This is really an arranged marriage, you know I did remind me of some of my own experience. I too did fall asleep on my husband's shoulder on our way back to his house after the wedding. It was a long drive and I was dead tired but there is not even a single day that goes by without me being reminded of it. But we were close as we were engaged for 10 months. Enough of me. Wow nice to know about that , so it can happen .Good i thought i went for sleeping on the shoulder way too soon. Yours was an arranged marriage. How long have you been married now, if i may ask?You, my dear, again changed the family tree on Sanskar's side. RP and Sujatha are not his parents but his uncle and aunty who came to support them. Good. Uttara is the only one whom you have kept in tack and I guess I know why. would like to see some more of pure bonding in your SS.I replied to your comment on previous chapter and i think i told you there is going to few more mix up in the family tree. . Well i love Uttara next to Swasan so she will remain Sanskar sister if i can help it I feel really bad that Sanskar blames himself for the death of RP. He just met his wife, that doesn't matter, she is the one with whom he will be spending the rest of his life with, so he needs to open up. And he just did. He told her even the things he hasn't shared with anyone else. Its a good way to start the relation. He has opened his heart to her, now its going to be her turn. Swara backstory com
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Juanita @BlurredLines 8 years ago
Then 1000 likes for your comment tooThanks , i am happy to know you liked it that much, will try to update soon
anu91
Anu @anu91 8 years ago 1000 likes for ur story dr...just awesome...U wrote it so lively...Liking it so much. ...want it know how they fall for each other...Waiting for next update. ...
BlurredLines
Juanita @BlurredLines 8 years ago [QUOTE=Sree8410]Res Nita dear, Sorry I know its late. Its way late but was a bit busy. Let me Unres quickly then.We had enough discussion about it so moving on. Unres So you have found the answer yourself for what should Sanskar do to Laksh for gifting him with the world's most wonderful wife. Yes its true they hardly know anything about each other but it seems like they have kick-started an amazing story. Love your treatment. Thanks . Let hope i can keep writing scenes that make you happy rather than angry This is really an arranged marriage, you know I did remind me of some of my own experience. I too did fall asleep on my husband's shoulder on our way back to his house after the wedding. It was a long drive and I was dead tired but there is not even a single day that goes by without me being reminded of it. But we were close as we were engaged for 10 months. Enough of me. Wow nice to know about that , so it can happen .Good i thought i went for sleeping on the shoulder way too soon. Yours was an arranged marriage. How long have you been married now, if i may ask?You, my dear, again changed the family tree on Sanskar's side. RP and Sujatha are not his parents but his uncle and aunty who came to support them. Good. Uttara is the only one whom you have kept in tack and I guess I know why. would like to see some more of pure bonding in your SS.I replied to your comment on previous chapter and i think i told you there is going to few more mix up in the family tree. . Well i love Uttara next to Swasan so she will remain Sanskar sister if i can help it I feel really bad that Sanskar blames himself for the death of RP. He just met his wife, that doesn't matter, she is the one with whom he will be spending the rest of his life with, so he needs to open up. And he just did. He told her even the things he hasn't shared with anyone else. Its a good way to start the relation. He has opened his heart to her, now its going to be her turn. Swara backstory coming up in the ne
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