Disclaimer: The following lyrics belong to the song titled "Tangerine" on the album Led Zeppelin III and rightfully belongs to it's owners. Measuring a summer's day, I only finds it slips away to grey, The hours, they bring me pain. He had heard her voice after three months, blaring through his mother's phone which was left on speaker on the kitchen counter. She was blandly speaking of few ingredients of a recipe that his mother was probably trying out. His steps refused to budge at hearing her ask his mother about his well-being to which she was asked the question of weather she had talked to him. He heard her ambiguous reply at concealing the differences that had ...
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dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
IPKKND's particular scene was an inspiration for the moment in terms of seeing a reflection. The song is amazing! I love Zeppelin!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
unreshave i told you how much i love your writings?? i LOVE your writings!! and i loved this!you caught ever small emotion and turned it into such an amazing web of emotions! and kunj's end line made me i love how you showed how he missed twinkle and how she will always be everything to himamazing as always! [/QUOTE]
Thank you Shakti! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love the emotional quotient the Indian soap come up with regardless of illogical tracks and weird stories. Emotions leave a lasting impression!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
[QUOTE=-WalkThatWay-]
Short but quite impactful!This is the kind of Kunj we may get to see after the leap, a regretful..hurt and ashamed man who has possibly caused great damage to the one girl he loved more than his life, he will try numerous times to re-enter her life but will fail miserably and will keep trying until Twinkle is ready to accept him and let him into her life againI pray the story post leap is full of angst and emotion..I'm going to be annoyed if they over dramatise is by the use of comedic scenesI want a mature Twinkle and a demi cold Kunj that will take time to sort out their indifferences and regret deeply when the truth prevailsSuch an emotional piece[/QUOTE]
Thank you Inayah! Ah the excitement for the angst that awaited us is all withered away but that you for the response!
Natasha @--Natasha--
+ 2
7 years ago
I looked up the song,this OS was as beautiful and meaningful as the song.This was painfully mesmerizing and left me with wanting for more with so many thoughts and unanswered questions.He saw the moments between them, of love and laughter flicker across the windshield momentarily until the clouds finally let go of the baggage on them and the skies cried along with his heart. ^This reminded me of a scene from IPKKND when Arnav was returning to Khushi to get married to her despite finding out the truth that her mother had been the other woman in his father's life.Absolutely loved it!
...Shakti... @...Shakti...
7 years ago
unreshave i told you how much i love your writings?? i LOVE your writings!! and i loved this!you caught ever small emotion and turned it into such an amazing web of emotions! and kunj's end line made me i love how you showed how he missed twinkle and how she will always be everything to himamazing as always!
zaara610 @zaara610
+ 5
7 years ago
Awesome os..beautifully written ..Loved it
-WalkThatWay- @-WalkThatWay-
+ 3
7 years ago
Short but quite impactful!This is the kind of Kunj we may get to see after the leap, a regretful..hurt and ashamed man who has possibly caused great damage to the one girl he loved more than his life, he will try numerous times to re-enter her life but will fail miserably and will keep trying until Twinkle is ready to accept him and let him into her life againI pray the story post leap is full of angst and emotion..I'm going to be annoyed if they over dramatise is by the use of comedic scenesI want a mature Twinkle and a demi cold Kunj that will take time to sort out their indifferences and regret deeply when the truth prevailsSuch an emotional piece
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
I really hope not that much painful. The separation during Manohar track lasted a week and half so maybe this time too the separation would take two weeks att most before union.
Duumps @Duumps
7 years ago
Loved this OS Areeba.Amazingly emotional and can see Kunj going through this in the show.Thanks for the pm.
Sherni_Jerry @Sherni_Jerry
+ 2
7 years ago
wpw areeba so short yet so excellent. absolutely amazing ❤️