A/N; so I had written this piece only about a week after the first confession aired but I didn't know when to post it. Current track on-air seems appropriate for me to finally share this piece. Not proof-read. Also this is dedicated to Teddyyy who was not pleased to know that I had One-Shots stored on my laptop and not posted. Teddyyy bear, this one is for you! Kunj entered into his house silently, his head lost in thoughts of their own as he slowly took steps towards their room. The pictures that were earlier in his hand were crumpled into a ball inside his fist. He felt the clicking of her heels behind her as she rushed behind him. "Kunj. Kunj!" "Kunj please ruko na!" "Kunj!!" ...
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-WalkThatWay- @-WalkThatWay-
+ 3
7 years ago
Awesome..Awesome..Awesome!!Areeba I don't think I need to dwell on how much I adore your stories, your writing style is so attractive and you wow me time and time again as your story graces this forumKunj's insecurity and Twinkles justification was such a pleasurable read..the show is yet to surface a jealous and insecure Kunj, something I an many have been longing to see, your story just made me pine for it all the more..but somehow I think the upcoming track is possibly going to give us just that and that it going to be one joyful watchKunj's insecurity and anger go hand in hand, when his insecurity creeps up his angers always follows and his thinking stops, he hurts Twinkle the most when he dismisses her when she tries to explain herself, as stated him shifting to the guest room makes him take irrational decisions which may potentially drive Twinkle away further, here come the trust game again..I really hope the next track in the show brings about all these emotions, I'm dying to see angstHonestly what a beautiful read..loved it!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
Awe thank you minnie mouse!!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
Thank you Raina! With Kunj being a witness to how crazily Twinkle loved Yuvi, I always thought there will come a day where he will insecure about her past especially with yup always being around.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
How could you not post this for so longgg Areeba!This was so realistic.His insecurities and how he did not confront his own feelings,did not say anything to her except for a sorry,brilliant!And how Twinkle explained herself to him broke my heart,again so realistic.I have read this twice and i have a feeling that this totally deserves a sequel,Twinkle's words have not exactly helped clear the matter for him,so i would request you to write a sequel to this pleaseeeLoved every bit of this.[/QUOTE]
Thank You Natasha! I think i might post a sequel to this but no sure how to go around it.
MinnieRose @MinnieRose
7 years ago
Areeba, why would hide such an amazing piece in your laptop?! The world deserves to see this! This was brilliant. So simple yet so beautiful. I loved how your Os was so simple yet powerful enough for my heart to be all over the place. The feels are real right now. It was so realistic; twinkle keeping pictures of her past that momentarily shook the foundation of her future with Kunj as his insecurities surfaced. But both of them realizing their mistakes and Kunj's "sorry" hayee I can't.I absolutely loved it!
Raina S.M @rainaM
7 years ago
I know I'm late to the party but I need to let all these feels out so bare with me! DAMNN AREEBA, you can't toy with my heart like that. This was so very beautiful and heartbreaking. These two, their love is still so young and prone to misconceptions but their desire to hold on to each other despite the qualms and uncertainties is so freaking beautiful. The way you captured the raw emotions, the angst, God, I'm dying! I'd write more, I want to write more but I'm getting late for class so I gotta rush. Keep'em coming girl. your OS's are getting me through the finals season!
Natasha @--Natasha--
+ 2
7 years ago
How could you not post this for so longgg Areeba!This was so realistic.His insecurities and how he did not confront his own feelings,did not say anything to her except for a sorry,brilliant!And how Twinkle explained herself to him broke my heart,again so realistic.I have read this twice and i have a feeling that this totally deserves a sequel,Twinkle's words have not exactly helped clear the matter for him,so i would request you to write a sequel to this pleaseeeLoved every bit of this.
Eshita @tikit
7 years ago
Woah areeba nice angsty piece.Why did u not post it before? It was beautiful. I want u to continue this os. Thanks for pm.
Lubana @ASRkiMoonlight
+ 2
7 years ago
I have no WORDS to describe how good that was!You always write beautifully. Loved itt.Want more
Sherni_Jerry @Sherni_Jerry
+ 2
7 years ago
so apt and so nicely written. you are brilliant. love it.