A/N; Hriddey requested a romantic OS about three weeks ago. Sorry for the delay bhai! Hope this lives up to your expectations. It's short and not much, but thats all the romance I can manage. The credit for the title goes to 'Teddyyy' the genius. Teddy you'll get your own dedication tomorrow after you are done with your exams! Twinkle plopped herself next to Kunj who was distractedly typing away gibberish on his laptop without sparing a glance towards her. She heaved a sigh in, rolled her eyes and rolled over towards him, burying her face by his waist and circling her arms over his torso. " Kya hua Twinkle? " he asked yawning, his eyes still focused on the screen. " Tum ...
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Duumps @Duumps
7 years ago
Adorable OS Areeba.Missing TwiNJ bedroom scenes.Thanks for the pm.
Duumps2016-05-11 09:23:05
-WalkThatWay- @-WalkThatWay-
+ 3
7 years ago
[QUOTE=areeba_blossom][QUOTE=-WalkThatWay-]
So simple yet such a beautiful read..the characteristics of Kunj and Twinkle are so relatable to that of the show, the way you weave your words to create admirable sentences which explodes with so much cuteness is such a treat, I couldn't help but imagine this story whilst reading it..it was captivating from beginning to endDid you have to go ahead and make the void in my heart greater than it already is..I was already missing their bedroom scenes and you just added to that with your story..I guess your punishment is to write more to rebuild the puncture I have [/QUOTE]
Inayah, this is payback for not updating your OS Series. I'll post nice romantic piece when you decide to update! Thank you though for such kind words! I'm glad you liked it and it means a lot that you appreciated my writing style! [/QUOTE]
Hmm is that so I admit, my updates have been long overdue..I've just been so caught up in exams and preparing for my brothers wedding which is this weekend..once that's over and I am stress free I will surely update, the earliest being next week hopefully..so sorry for the long wait Your writing is always a pleasure to read..credit goes to you for attracting and reeling me in with such a beautiful story
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
I would totally work for the TEI team! Bring the insight into what the audience really wants in terms of presentation. We've all been so much romance deprived tbh that anything at this point works!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
[QUOTE=-WalkThatWay-]
So simple yet such a beautiful read..the characteristics of Kunj and Twinkle are so relatable to that of the show, the way you weave your words to create admirable sentences which explodes with so much cuteness is such a treat, I couldn't help but imagine this story whilst reading it..it was captivating from beginning to endDid you have to go ahead and make the void in my heart greater than it already is..I was already missing their bedroom scenes and you just added to that with your story..I guess your punishment is to write more to rebuild the puncture I have [/QUOTE]
Inayah, this is payback for not updating your OS Series. I'll post nice romantic piece when you decide to update! Thank you though for such kind words! I'm glad you liked it and it means a lot that you appreciated my writing style!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
[QUOTE=kardooks]This was so nice and warm, Areeba I love it. Love how Twinkle shows attitude when she's not getiing attention, and even more so loves how he pacifies her. He knows his wife too well and that's what I love about them, the way they both understands each other without having to say much.Wish we could get such scenes.
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Thank you Karen!A fiesty Twinkle is always the best Twinkle.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
I loved there bedroom scenes. definitely ned more of those in episodes now.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
It would be amazing if we get some prolonged scenes between the two but you know, usually soaps cut down on romance after consummation itself.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
Thank you! I'm glad you liked reading it!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
[QUOTE=SweetSau]Hi
This was sooo amazing and cute!!So like a typical couple jo hamare twinj hai!Loved it!Mujhe aur chahiye stories padhne ke liye. Woh kya hai naa I'm greedy for twinj!Haayee I really loved it! Twinkle ke nakhre and then kunj manofying her was ultra cute![/QUOTE]
Awe OMG you know I do have more OS lying around on my laptop. whenever time permits, i'll post more. Thank you so much!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
Awe I' glad you like it! I was so nervous whether it'll be good or not but i'm glad it lived up to your expectations!!I would die to see a scene like this on-screen. It would be so amazing if we could get some romantic scenes like such after this track ends.