A/N; Inspired by Shewtha's thread of possible ways to make Yuvi's life hell in response to day's episode. Something I came up with in a jiffy so pardon the abruptness and the writing being rough around the edges. It had been two days since Yuvraj had pulled the stunt of swapping places with Kunj in the mandap. Yuvraj had tried every trick in the book to take Twinkle away from Sarna mansion to his own house but she had refused to budge and for a strange reason no one in the family has spoken up for him. He scratched his head in frustration as he circled around the Sarna house once again to look for her. He finally found her sitting with Bebe, Usha and that loser Kunj with his ...
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Anya @Three.Broomstic
7 years ago
Areeba I loved, liked and laughed itSo well written...muahI could visualise this happening almost like the characters were surrounding me.Haye so cute, awesome lovely, amazing...air koi adjective hoga toh who bhi Defo one of the best os I've ever readXoxo.
Natasha @--Natasha--
+ 2
7 years ago
Took me forever to unresThis was a laughter ride Areeba!It reminded me of the song Khullam khulla pyaar karengay hum donoYuvraj seething in jealousy a and anger while Twinj romance *woot* *woot*A pleasurable read Areeba
Inkheart @ChrissyA
7 years ago
Forgive me for the late replyThat was amazing as usualYour deserve to be praise for such an awesome jobThanks though... I neede something like this to lighten up my moodP.S. so glad yuvi got imprisoned
Samia Akter @SidNi_TwiNj
7 years ago
Awesome one dear...nice OS..
zaara610 @zaara610
+ 5
7 years ago
Loved it a lot..well done twinkle..I hope something like this happens in the show alsoAwesome os
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
They might, they might not. Lets see what happens. I'm excited for the current track but i am a bit romance deprived so i wouldn't mind to see something as such play out.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
unresthis was even better than i imagined omg you really had me cracking up at everything!!"she's my gf" and then kunj's response to yuvi saying she's his wifeand omgg the khullam khulla romance in front of yuvi's face i loved it areeba!!! (i read it twice already!)[/QUOTE]
LOL I had to add the girlfriend part. Twinkle was Kuj's finance and he didn't ask that right but Yuvi was always flying high on being her boyfriend. I hope they have a scene as such on the show really. My mind is blank right now but lets see.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
Thank you for enjoying it!
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
You know all credit goes to Shakti and Shwetha to have me write this out.
dramebaaz.af @dramebaaz.af
+ 6
7 years ago
[QUOTE=neverlandspirit]Looolll...I beg of you to be in the CVs team. This was hilarious and brilliant.I was laughing and smirking through it all.
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You know, if ic an get hooked up to write for desi shows, i definitely would but i'm miles away on a different continent altogether!