Dhoop Chauon

Dhoop Chauon Completed G

Chapter 18 Members Only

Published On Tuesday,Feb 09, 2021 09:13 AM GMT-07:00

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custodian75
custodian75 @custodian75 3 years ago Geet singing and dancing with Maan was nice. Hope he falls for her
sanum23
sanum23 @sanum23 3 years ago Maan get confuse hearing geet singing and lost in gina listening geet song maan also good singer
maaneetsangel
maaneetsangel @maaneetsangel 3 years ago I loved the songs. They are beautiful.

Geet handled dadimaa n her tantrums so well.

Maan was mesmerized with geet's voice again imagining her to be Gina.
taahir004
Taahir @taahir004 3 years ago A Pleasant and Warm Chapter . I sometimes do feel bad for Maan but then he feels that both Gina and Geet have the same essence but how can that be possible because Geet fears and faints while Gina seems much more confident and strong in her persona . wow Dadima she really wanted to be around family and just have some fun and I think its good for her too . so Maan feels protective over Geet only because she looks like Gina her voice too is almost same or same while Maan gets the same feeling when he is with both woman
now I wonder if it could be possible for Geet to be Gina . Maan also feels he can truly turn his engagement to Geet as real but for some reason I think Maan is just wishing that both women are same . if he ever finds out that they are two different woman he would surely try his best to get rid off Geet
MA1970
MA1970 @MA1970 3 years ago Nice update . Geet singing Maan confused when ever he dances with Geet he feels he is with Gina and the feeling of protectiveness towards Geet. So Maan can also sing.
ferdouz
ferdouz @ferdouz 3 years ago Loved the update. All are shocked to hear The great MSK singing 😅
SD acting like stubborn child Geet fulfilling all her wishes.
Maan is getting protective about Geet.
mkd.70
Mkd @mkd.70 3 years ago Lovely 🌹 songs 💞😍 selection 💘
Maan also sing with them .love it
khwaishfan
khwaishfan @khwaishfan 3 years ago thanks for the pm

Chapter 18
terrific update! well written!
Dadi is so stubborn! Geet has to appease her! wow Maaneet dance...... at least Maan is protective towards Geet. his thoughts are eloquently poytrayed. She is stunned when Maan sings
update soon
Alamelu
Alamelu @Alamelu 3 years ago Aww never seen dadi so adamant before. She made both maan and geet sing
Geet don’t fall more for maan. You will be hurt by him

Maan stay away from geet if you are not committed fully
Gold.Abrol
GOLDIE ABROL @Gold.Abrol 3 years ago Loved it LM ... Awesome part🙂 I loved how Savitri devi turned into a kid stubborn for songs & sweet 😀 good that Geet pacified her even Maan sang too... Ab ye to Maan ko pata lagana padega that it's Gina or Geet ... Waiting for more ... Thanks for the PM ... Continue soon 🙂
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