Dhoop Chauon

Dhoop Chauon Completed G

Chapter 5 Members Only

Published On Saturday,Jan 09, 2021 12:02 PM GMT-07:00

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frnd.of.frndz
Rucha @frnd.of.frndz 3 years ago Hehhee.. wow.. i just read all the updates together.. maan's desperation for gina is evident in anything and everything that he does.. so he really fought with his grandmother for gina even considering her as his wife.. great.. but even i am confused.. yeh geet aur gina ek hain ya yeh koi personality disorder hai where gina is geet's alter ego maybe.. cant wait for the mystery to unfold.. lovely updates.. i really love how you are.so good with describing emotions and relationships.. thabks alot for the PMs and i am really sorry for late reply here..

Luv Rucha
maaneetsangel
maaneetsangel @maaneetsangel 3 years ago Maan is desperate to get geet as his secretary as he thinks that she is Gina.

Dadi is definitely upto something.

Who is the one who was following maan?
custodian75
custodian75 @custodian75 3 years ago Maan thinks Gina is Geet and wants her as his secretary but daadi is not going to agree so easily.
janu2006
janu2006 @janu2006 3 years ago Great part
Dadima not agreeing to maans words
Cont soon
sanum23
sanum23 @sanum23 3 years ago Maan want Geet as his secretary but Dadi refused bz of his anger
taahir004
Taahir @taahir004 3 years ago Interesting Chapter . I had thought that it was Maan watching Geet but it was Dadima , so now Maan wants Geet as his secretary . Geet has a soft voice and she gets frighten easily while it seems Gina can stand ground
ferdouz
ferdouz @ferdouz 3 years ago Maan wants Gina and she somehow manages to run away from him. Seeing Geet and assuming she is Gina now Maan wants her to be his secretary. Love the way SD put her foot down. Waiting for next
Alamelu
Alamelu @Alamelu 3 years ago Ah so maan wants geet as his secretary thinking she is Gina.

Glad dadi put her foot down.

Let’s see what happens
prerna1
Prerna @prerna1 3 years ago Great part dear
Dadi is playing with maan
Loved it
Continue soon...
khwaishfan
khwaishfan @khwaishfan 3 years ago thanks for the update
tremendous update.... nicely written
of cos dadima saw Geet's reaction
oh Maan is intrigued by Geet....
liked how dadima responded to Sasha
Maan wants Geet as his secretary
well dadima refused
what will Maan do?
update soon
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