Shree was trying hard to get up and stop them but his body didn't support him, he was groaning in pain and looked at the way they were going, his eyes were flickering due to tiredness, pain, the vision was blur still he tried to see Darsh face but could only see his back, Darsh was dragging Roli while the other four were taking Aanya along with them...
Aanya was struggling to come out of their hold but she couldn't, they were four and she was alone over that Shree condition has scared her a lot...she tries to push them and shouted " Bhaiyaaaa ...."
Darsh stopped hearing her shout, he closed his eyes in irritation as he hates when someone shouts like this..he moved to Aanya and stood in front of her " see behave like a good girl otherwise... I will be a bad boy "
" You already are..." Replied Aanya curtly...
Darsh gave a sweet smile to her then moved near her face making her have a jerk then he whispers looking straight into her eyes " I like the attitude ... very....muchhh "
Aanya turned her face away from him with disgust but yeah that look and his whisper had surely shaken her from inside but she tried not to show it to him...
" Ufff....this anger ....huh it's gonna be fun tonight ..." Murmured Darsh giving her a vicious smile making her shiver a little in fear, his eyes, and his husky voice was giving her goosebumps while on the other hand Roli was silently standing trying to collect her courage to face Darsh at home and she is sure it's gonna be terrific tonight but yeah somewhere she was praying he should not lock her inside storeroom whose darkness, creepy voices and the incident of childhood has always haunted her, she got choked as was trying to hold her cry thinking about how horrible this night is going to be...she cursed herself to take such a step but what can she do, his torture was suffocating her that she tried to run away and fails... Roli looks up at Darsh who was dealing with Aanya, gun in his hand, smirk at his face and his eyes ... those eyes have always scared her, she started to shiver .. she holds her dress so tight and started to sob then murmured the only wish she has and wants to be fulfilled if God ever exists " I wanna die...."
Roli prayed to God with the very depth of her heart and begs " kill me God please "... She was ok to die but did not want to face the night which is gonna be a taste of hell ... Roli hoped to be given a little mercy but her fate was not so lucky, not God but Darsh has heard her whisper...
He turned towards Roli then gave a look who was sobbing keeping her head down, he went up to her then wrapped his hand around her scaring her, Roli started to shiver badly, Darsh kept his gun on her temple making her numb then asks " you wanna die....??? "
Roli wanted to say Yes but his presence was making each cell of her body shiver in fear, she wanted to node, Yes but her head was felt like ceased on his one stare ....she couldn't do anything but just let her tears flow in helplessness, she even wanted to blink her eyes in acceptance but her heavy eyelids denied to follow her orders as it was already ruled by her brother ... Roli felt so wretched that her own body is in his control, it felt like her breaths are also in his control...
Darsh smiled seeing no movement from Roli, he traces his gun down to her nose then slightly moved it to her cheeks and wiped those tears with his gun ... then he bends down to her ear and whispered so softly " not so soon my little sis ...we have a game to play tonight ... I wanna see what would you do when every inch of your body pains... " He winks at her pulling her soul out...
Darsh holds her hand then opened the car door pushed her inside and also to Aanya then locked it and went before messaging his friends ...
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Gotta feast tonight...meet at home
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..here Shree was so helpless to do anything... but yeah he saw the car number plate...MH 02 KL 5209
Siddhant reached out to the place where Shree's car was parked, he searched for Shree and after some time of searching, he saw him on the road... He run to him and shakes him who was lying closing his eyes and blood was oozing out ...
" Shree...Shree...get up...Shree get up... I'm here.. Shree " Siddhant tries to wake him by patting on his cheeks...
Shree open his eyes a little that too with so much difficulty...he tried to speak " sir...sir...sir... Mam... Mam... Aanya Mam "
" Yes Shree ... speak up... Aanya what... where's she... You can Shree speak up " encourages Siddhant, tears were scrolling down his cheeks continuously without pause, seeing Shree in this state his heart started to pound harder as he was unable to guess in what situation his Aanya could be ...if they can shoot Shree then they can do anything
Shree took heavy breaths to bear the pain, his eyes were getting closed, again and again, he tries to lift his hand and show the way but the pain was not letting him even move still he gathers all of his courage and slightly lift his trembling hand and showed the way... and as Siddhant turned that side Shree's hand fell, he was panting heavily, he then calls Sid " Sir...car..."
Siddhant: ok ok...it was a car... anything else you know... please Shree tell me...
Shree: num...num...number...
Siddhant: you know car number...tell it Shree ... tell it...
Shree was blacking out but was trying hard to be awake, he somehow speaks..." M....."
Siddhant: M ??? Was it Mumbai car ( Shree nodded Yes .. ) it's MH...next, Shree tell next...
Shree: ze....ze...
Siddhant: zero ....( Shree nodded Yes ) ok... MH 0... Next... don't give up Shree you can tell...try it please Shree try it.. was it ...01, 02, 03, 04...
Shree's throat became dry, he was trying so much not to give up but his body failed to give him support and he went unconscious before whispering the next number " twoooo "
" Shreeeee... Shree opens up... Shree Shree... you can shree... MH 02 .. what's next... Shree tell me please Shree... wake up " Sid cries holding Shree who was lying lifeless in his arms... Sid tries but couldn't bring him back to consciousness, for a while he feared what if Shree...he immediately checked for the pulse and gets a little bit of relief that he is alive...he made him lie properly then calls for an ambulance then went in search of Aanya...
He called one of his known people and asked him to see how many cars crossed that way with initial MH 02... and he got to know four cars has crossed that path...he literally tried to go behind each four and find his sister but at a point, the four cars crossed together and then disappeared, they were not seen on the next toll and he was standing helpless in the middle of the road pulling his hairs not able to understand what to do next, how to find her...he fell on his knees getting exhausted and whispers looking into the sky " gudiya....where are you " tears rolled down his cheeks, he hides his face in his palms then cries " Aanyaaaaaaaaaa......" Siddhant leaned onto the road and cries uncontrollably...
TWO DAYS LATER...
Siddhant was like no soul after getting failed to find his sister, he took the cop's help but the confusing thing was even they couldn't find Aanya from enquiring about those four cars ...
Siddhant was like a corpse, dark circles surrounding his red eyes, grown-up beard, shabby hairs, gloomy face, his pain was shown in his burst out when he loses his cool and shouts at his staffs...he came out of the car then ascends the stairs of the hospital where Shree is being treated, two days passed but he was still unconscious, he was the last hope to find Aanya back...
Siddhant went inside the Ward and looked on to Shree who was lying unconscious surrounded by wires machines... he went up to him and sits upon the table beside, he holds Shree hand then rests his head on it then cries and murmurs between his sobs " you are my only hope Shree, you were there at that time... only you know what has happened, only you have seen them... please Shree I want my Aanya.... please get up... please...pleaseeeeeee "
Siddhant cries in his helplessness, after a few minutes his attention was diverted to his mobile which was ringing, he took out his phone and looked at the display to see the name ' kashish '...
Siddhant: kashish ??? Why she...???
Siddhant was confused seeing her number, he thought why would she call and then something strikes his mind " she's a friend of Aanya...what if she knows about her "
Siddhant immediately lifts the call " yess "
Kashish: Siddhant bhaiya...wohh Aanya...
Siddhant: Aanya...what kashish...say...
Kashish: bhaiya please come here...
....
Siddhant reached the place he was called, it was a hospital, his steps slowed down, his heart races and his mind started haunting him about what has happened to Aanya why he is called in hospital ...with slow steps he moves forward then spotted kashish, Saurav and Drishti...they were her best friends...
Siddhant: Aanya...???
Kashish pointed towards OT with tears, Siddhant stumbles, and then handling himself he moved to the OT door and peeped inside through the glass panel only to see Aanya lying on the streture like a lifeless body and a team of doctors were serving her...
Siddhant took his steps back then looked at kashish and she understood that look answers " I got a call from her mobile this morning but it was by some stranger he called me as my name was the last one in her call logs ... I got confused about what happened then with Saurav and Drishti reached here then called you...he found her on-road and admitted her here .."
" Ok.." told Sid aimlessly that's when the door got opened and the doctor came out...
Siddhant: how is she doctor
Doctor: you can come inside we'll talk...
Siddhant: what happened anything serious...
The doctor gave a deep look at Sid scaring his soul then he asks calmly " first come inside... please..."
All went inside... Siddhant was frozen to see Aanya wrapped with gauze, he stood numb while the doctor started to explain her condition..." For now, she's so weak...so is unconscious...she has been....( Doctor pauses little as he was trying to find how to convey it to them while all looked at him and asked to continue, the doctor closes his eyes for a while then continues ) she has been Raped ...."
Silence....there was pin-drop silence after hearing that word ...only the beeping of machines could be heard ... Siddhant was standing like a statue who didn't have a life...his eyes went to his sister's face and glued to it... neither he cried nor did he said anything just stood silently, this was the only thing which he was feared of, he had a fear that his sister might have ... as because that's the only reason they would take her with them, as far as Siddhant knows he won't have any enmity so far which would lead anyone to kidnap his sister then this is the only reason left...
Mobile in his hand slips and falls breaking the silence but he didn't react.... while that was time Kashish and Drishti breaks down into sobs while Saurav too couldn't hold his tears, they were friends for more than five years and Aanya was the cutest in all, they used to have lots of fun together, teases each other plays pranks and always pull Aanya legs about her overprotective brother ...
Doctor: for continuous two days she was...they were three...three are confirmed while it can be more too... She has injected drugs which make her lose her immunity to even defend...but still it seems like she fought and to stop her ...they ...they beat her, marks of strokes are present all over her body...
The doctor left a sigh and cleared his throat as he too was unable to describe her situation, while Sid closed his eyes as couldn't hear it...
Doctor: they tried to make her drink alcohol and also something else too which made her throat get burned not only that even her stomach is also got damaged, her left arm is broken and...and also her left ankle, there are several cuttings on her... which...which seems like...
" Enough.... please enough.... please " cries Saurav as he couldn't bear it more, he joined his hands then asks the doctor to stop describing it...
Siddhant turned towards Saurav and looked at him with gratitude as he too wanted to ask to stop it but his voice didn't come out, while the doctor nodded and wiping his tears from the corner of his eyes left the room leaving them alone in that silence...
All looked at Aanya reminiscing their moments ...
On the first day of college, Saurav entered inside and approaches the parking lot on his bike there he saw Aanya also was parking her scooty, his eyes were stuck to her, after parking her scooty Aanya turned to go and she happened to see Saurav gazing at her, she came to him and snapped her fingers in front of his eyes making him come out of his Dreamland...
Aanya: hello Mr...may I know what are you looking at...
Saurav: of course... your beautiful face...
Aanya widened her eyes at his direct answer, she pointed her finger At him then says " Don't you dare to try flirting with me... you don't know who I am...my one call and you will be seen in a hospital bed next moment..."
Saurav: cool girl....cool down... I am not trying to do that just was seeing you as I like your fashion sense unlike her...
Aanya: her ???
Saurav: my girlfriend...
Aanya: ohhh so you aren't single...
Saurav: nope...and the way you threatened me I can guess you are still single.
Aanya: I didn't get anyone yet who catch up my heart...
Saurav: hmmm... don't worry you will get your prince soon BTW I am Saurav... Saurav Sharma
Aanya too forwarded her hand and shakes introducing herself " Aanya Bharadwaj ..."
Saurav: nice name...
" What about mine ??? " Asked a girl coming from behind..both turned to look at her, Aanya looked at her and smiled but Saurav showed horror on his face he stammers " yeah..yeah... you... your name is superb... world's sweetest name ever "
Aanya rolled her eyes then tapped on Saurav's shoulder and asked raising her eyebrows " your girlfriend ??? ( Saurav nodded yes and smiles sheepishly ) that's what I was thinking how come her name become the world's sweetest name... BTW what's her name.."
Saurav: Drishti Arora...
Aanya turned to Drishti and says with a smirk " you know what Drishti he was trying to flirt with me "
" Heyyyy...no Drishti... I didn't I just was trying to introduce ourselves that's it " says Saurav in hurry and glared at Aanya...
Drishti: really..???
Aanya: yeah introducing but Drishti I had a doubt if telling someone as beautiful is also a part of the introduction or not...
Drishti glared at Saurav while he nodded no, he turned to Aanya then told " what do you want Aanya... just two days ago she accepted my love, and today you are behind our breakup... please Meri Maa leave me, I won't say anything like that again "
Drishti and Aanya laughs seeing Saurav pleading, Drishti says " ohhh Saurav... you look so funny like this ... don't worry baby I won't break up "
Aanya forwards her hand and asks looking at both of them " friends ??? "
" Friends ..." They told and kept their hands on her...
Trio moved inside the campus only to find one boy troubling kashish taking her bag and all were looking at the scene.. while playing that boy's eyes fell on Aanya, he came to her and said " hey beautiful any help "
Aanya smiles and answerers " yeah can you give the bag back to her...my dear ( the boy smiles wide after hearing it but then Aanya says ) .. BROTHER "
All laughs aloud except that boy who was fuming after hearing brother from her ...
Boy: heyyyy... don't be smart ok..and I'm not your brother...
Aanya: why brother what happened ...
Everyone giggled while he fumes more, he advanced near her " seems like I need to teach you how to speak"
Aanya: don't do that mistake... you don't know whom you are messing with...
Boy: what can you do haa...
he tried to hold Aanya but Saurav pushed him and warned " stay back... don't create any scene, just give the bag and leave "
Boy: I'm your senior and you will behave like this... just wait and watch how I'll throw you four out of this college...
Aanya: and I will make you thrown out of this world itself ...do you know who I am... Aanya Bharadwaj... sister of Siddhant Bharadwaj ... I think you know about my brother so better be in limits and don't push me to call him...
Everyone gets shocked hearing she's Sid's sister even Saurav too and now he understood why she told him he'll be seen in the hospital the next moment...
Boy trembles hearing Siddhant's name as everyone is aware of Siddhant Bharadwaj and his anger he speaks " sorry...sorry Mam...sorry ..here take the bag... I'm sorry I won't come your way again but please don't tell your brother "
All laughs seeing the way boy changed his attitude, Aanya took the bag and gave it to kashish then turned to the boy and said " I won't say to him..so no need to fear ..brother..."
This time he didn't say anything but left the place making everyone laugh and after that day none ever tried to come in her way knowing who she is..and these four, Aanya, kashish, Saurav, and Drishti became the Best friends and was tagged as ' Naughty four ' in the college who is always in their masti mood...
Kashish, Saurav, and Drishti looked at each other and then at Aanya who was lying lifeless and they break into tears as they're unable to bear this state of hers where they have always seen her smiling, playing, Happy...
Siddhant slowly stepped forward near her bed, he wanted to cry aloud but his eyes were not letting any drop of tear fall as his mind was numb to react in any way...
Siddhant kept his trembling hands on her plastered leg..and closed his eyes...
" Aaahhhhh.... bhaiyaa... bhaiya.. " cries Aanya as she fell while taking a book from the shelf standing upon a table...
Siddhant who was in his room runs to her " Anu... Anu what happened..."
Sid reached up to her and took her in his arms then put her on the bed and asks " how did this happen, what were you doing..."
" I wanted that book," says Aanya pouting her lips showing that book...
Siddhant looked at it, it was on the upper shelf he turned to her and slapped on her head and said " by looking I can say you won't reach then why did you even try can't you call me ...see now got hurt naa .... Lilliput "
Aanya fumes and shouted " ayyy... I'm not Lilliput ok "
Siddhant: then what you are ... Lilliput
Aanya: bhaiya...here I'm hurt and you are teasing me...go I won't talk to you...cutty...
Siddhant smiles at her childishness, he says " ok ok sorry.. now show me your leg "
Aanya: no I won't..go... I won't talk to you...
Siddhant chuckles then started to pacify her " gudiya... sorry baby... I won't say you Lilliput again.. pakka promise ... I'll call you cell tower ok.."
Aanya opens her mouth then glared at Siddhant who giggled at her reaction " I'll kill you bhaiya... you are too bad "
Siddhant: go ahead...
Aanya took a pillow and started to beat him, he laughs but didn't defend and took all the hits from her, when she was busy beating him he treated her sprain and even massaged her legs and she didn't notice any pain...
" Done," said Siddhant after treating her...
Aanya with confusion asked, "what done.."
Siddhant: your legs...is it still paining gudiya...
That's when Aanya noticed her leg then at Siddhant, her eyes became moist seeing his love..she won't feel any pain that's why he teased her and let her beat him, she jumps into Sid's arms and hugging him she mumbles "love you bhaiya.. love you so much"
Siddhant hugs her back " love you too my gudiya... love you so much... I just can't see you in any pain even if it's small.. don't worry I will call a person and will rearrange your shelf a little down so that you won't get hurt again "
Tears were about to come out but it didn't, it stopped on the edge of his eyes wetting his eyelids making him feel so heavy to Even open his eyes and see her, his hand roams onto her body caressing her every wound, at last, it reached to her head, he opened his eyes a little drop of tear tried to escape... He took heavy breaths after seeing slap imprints on her cheeks which were turned to blue, his thumb slightly caresses her cheeks ...
..." because I'm still baby for him "...
..." he's an angry man for the outer world but in front of me he is sugar "...
..." I love to be in my brother's cage "...
Kashish, Saurav, and Drishti remembered her words where she expressed what she is to her brother, and today they can see him breaking into innumerable pieces, The brother who was called as a rock without any mercy was breaking down and falling into the depth of eternity trying to find his sister who's in front of him but still lost somewhere...
The door of the room was knocked making everyone come out of their thoughts, one man entered the room and said " I was the one who admitted her here, I was going to my office then happened to see her, she was..she was barely clothed ... when I went to her she awake that time...( On this everyone looked at him with a query and seeing their faces he told ) yeah, she was awake... I tried to ask her who she is...what has happened but she didn't tell anything but was murmuring only one thing ( all looked at him asking what, he gasps then continues ) ' I wanna die....kill me, God, please ' ... I found a phone nearby her and then contacted you all.. "
Saying so he left leaving everyone in grief, no one uttered a single word, Sid sat on the side of the bed with a thud ...
..." I wanna die "...
..." Kill me, God " ...
These words were echoing in his ears he felt like Aanya is saying those words in his ears, he closed his eyes tightly and remembered a day...
Siddhant and Aanya were watching a movie in which a scene came where the villain was trying to molest a girl... Aanya hugs Sid as she was unable to see it... Siddhant closed the TV and hugged her, caressing her back he says " gudiya... Calm down dear...relax... I'm here..ok "
Aanya nudges her face on his shoulder then said " if something like that happens to me then I would ask God to kill me rather than leave me alive to bear that pain lifelong..."
" Heyyyy ..." Shouted Siddhant, he broke the hug and cupped her face then looked into her eyes which were filled with tears, he wiped those tears before it falls out, he said " don't say like that... Anu I am here naa... I won't let anything happen to you like this... "
Siddhant was panting heavily remembering that day and then realizing it has happened and as she said she has wished to die ..he took his shivering hands and slightly kept it on her chest to feel her heartbeat, to feel if she is alive, to feel he still have a reason to live upon, to Know that he has a reason to fight with this whole world, to know he has an excuse to burn each person who dared to hurt her, to know he could be able to see her back again, to confirm that he still can dare to change everything and make his sister happy again...
Siddhant felt her heart thumping against his hand very slowly, he gasps, he turned towards Saurav and asks " can you help me out to shift her to another hospital "
He nodded then went out to get the papers, kashish and Drishti accompanied him knowing that Sid wanted to be alone...after they exits the room a drop of tear fell from his eyes and then finally he cries...he cried hugging her close to his chest until his tears dried...
....
Siddhant took Aanya into his arms then took her to a new room which was allotted just beside Shree's... Siddhant has shifted her to the same hospital where Shree was so that he can be there too...
A nurse came to Sid and told " we were searching for you only Sir ...that patient wakes up...he was asking about you ...we tried to search for you but couldn't so we gave him sedatives he may sleep anytime you can meet him before that..."
Siddhant hearing it didn't wait for anything else and went to Shree's room...other three also followed him...
" Shree.... you woke up ' asks him seeing him lying opening his eyes...
Shree looks at Siddhant and said " sir Aanya Mam..."
Siddhant: we got her
Shree: thank God... you saved her sir...
Siddhant: I didn't...
Shree looks at him confused but Siddhant tried not to meet his eyes as he doesn't know what to say if Shree asks him what happened ... Shree looks clueless ... knowing about Sid Saurav slightly whispered " she's... she's .. Raped "
Shree sighs and looked at Siddhant his swollen eyes cleared his all doubts, his eyes started to shed tears making him sink into guilt...in a pang of guilt that he couldn't save her...he was there but he couldn't save her....he cries on knowing that he couldn't save Aanya and her life is ruined now ...
Siddhant looking at the wall asks Shree " what has happened that day ...."
Shree controls his cry then started to narrate...
" Sir after leaving the party that day, Mam told me that we'll go to a restaurant and then from there will call you also to join, I agreed when we were going Mam felt thirsty and she said she won't go more until she drinks water so I went to buy a water bottle for her and when I came she was missing... I tried to search for some time and then called you...after calling you I went in search of her again and found her with a girl and they both were surrounded by four people... I guessed that the other girl was in trouble because of those four and Mam was trying to save her ... I took a rod and went to fight with them and asked Mam to leave that place with the girl, she started to go but one car came and blocked there way, a man came out and he shot me... Up to what I can guess was that girl was in trouble but no I was wrong... I was totally wrong...that girl she played with our Mam's innocence..."
" Whattt...." Shouted everyone while Siddhant asked " what do you mean Shree...she played ... what is that "
Shree: Yes Sir... And then Shree told them about how Darsh and Roli talked about playing and Aanya misunderstood them thinking Roli was in trouble, then he told how they took Aanya also with them...
Kashish: bhaiya...my Papa is a lawyer he has recently dealt with a case in which girls like this first shows themselves as a victim then trap innocent girls... and this time they targetted our Anu...
Sid's anger was at its peak, he can't able to digest that someone played with her sister live and also which angered him more was she was a girl...he asks gritting his teeth " who were they Shree "
Shree: I couldn't see that man's face but yeah I know that girl her name was Roli... and their car number was MH 02 KL 5209...
Siddhant: you take rest Shree I'll see this Roli...she has to pay...she definitely has to pay for her deeds...
A FEW DAYS LATER....
Siddhant was sitting in front of Darsh having a smile on his face while Darsh was signing up on the contract papers which Sid has offered him...
Siddhant looks around and found a girl was coming down the stairs, Sid assumed her to be Roli and asks to Darsh " mmm .. can I ask you something if you don't mind "
Darsh: yeah...
Siddhant: who is she to you...
Darsh: oh she she's my little sister, Roli .. Roli Diwedi
" My prey " murmured Sid giving a glare at her...
" Did you say something? " asked Darsh as he couldn't hear clearly...
Siddhant gave a sweet smile then said gazing at Roli " my prayer will be fulfilled if you don't mind giving your sister hand to me "
Darsh gave a confused look and asks " what do you mean "
Siddhant: I mean what I say... I wanna marry her... I came here for a business deal but after seeing her I think I can't leave her here... I wanna take her with me...by marrying her... I don't know if you believe it or not but I fell in love with your sister at the time I saw her a few minutes back... and when I saw her I decided she's the only one and suitable to be the queen of my whole empire...
Sid's last line definitely affected Darsh which triggered his greediness and he thought to proceed...but before that he said " but she's yet to turn 18, next month only her 18th birthday "
Siddhant: if you are worried about our age then... I don't think age Even matters when we love someone and about her turning 18 ...then let's make this birthday of her a special one ... giving her to me...
Darsh agreed and Rosid married was decided on her birthday...all were gathered for this grand celebration, Aanya was still lying in hospital..her friends used to come there and spend some time with her and Sid he always stays there itself ... about Shree he was discharged but Sid gave him leave to take proper rest so none of them were included in this marriage as they might try to stop Sid after knowing his intentions to marry her...
Pandit Ji declared Roli and Siddhant as husband and wife...
Roli thinks looking at Siddhant " married means I need to go with my husband this means I won't live with bhaiya anymore... finally I am free.. thanks Siddhant Ji "
Siddhant smiles evilly looking at Roli and thinks " welcome to the hell Roli now you have to pay for all of your deeds "
Roli thinks " finally I am free today, after living 18 years of my caged life...all thanks to you Siddhant Ji... you came as an Angel to me...and taking me out from the hell "
Siddhant thinks " you played with my sister's life right... you are so fond of playing right...now I will play with you...this is my game with my rules and you have no option other than following it ... you will get to know what the hell is and the game starts from now Mrs. Roli Siddhant Bharadwaj ...get ready to face the hell "
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arisharosid20 @arisharosid20
+ 3
3 years ago
God update was something super emotional.When Roli and Anaya fear what's going to happen with them was something else.Sid and Anaya get to know about anaya conditions and they remember her moments was so emotional.Sid misunderstood Roli and know he marry her for Revenge.I can't update to wait.Kill me god title was perfectly suit update soon
Andetheres @Andetheres
3 years ago
One more thing ..you are really doing justice to each chapter name yaar ... “ kill me god “ .. hearing this from both the girls was too emotional 💔..
Andetheres @Andetheres
3 years ago
This was seriously so emotional yaar .... all the emotions - fear,anger ,pain .. very well expressed in words ♥️.. big kudos for that .. amazing update .. while reading that para in which doctor says about Aanya’s condition.. it was damn painful to hear .. can’t imagine Siddhant and Aanya’s friends state .. thankfully shree is safe .. Siddhant’s revenge mode is perfectly correct.. but he could have investigated about Roli and her brother before taking such drastic step . I agree Roli is also a part behind Aanya’s condition.. but little did others know about her helplessness and darsh’s true face. Hopefully Darsh gets what he deserves soon ... The last two paragraphs were damn too awesome .. yaar loved each and every part of this update .. really want to know what sid is going to do next .....very much eagerly waiting for the next update..
Soujanya @Soujanya_ROSID
+ 3
3 years ago
eagerly waiting for next update...
MistyDevil @MistyDevil
+ 3
3 years ago
Oh god shivi.. emotional one! You described each and everything was beautiful!!! Sid and aanya's bond was, oh lord sid's heart gonna break after aanya's________. Now sid misunderstood roli is behind everything, what sid gonna do now? Update next soonnnnn
sreeja @SREEJAROSID
3 years ago
Sooo emotional update yaar eagerly waiting for the next update
Manasa @MessyMind
+ 2
3 years ago
Dude! What an amazing chapter!! Sid's pain upon seeing his sister's condition, their bonding in flashback scenes and friends bonding all were written really well. Aanya had to suffer a lot. Felt heartbroken for her. But, Sid has misunderstood Roli as the reason for all. She is the reason in some sense but she's helpless and caught up with her own fears. Super excited to know what will happen next.