Together We Are Timeless

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Chapter 4

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sagarvandana
sagarvandana @sagarvandana 5 years ago one of the best stories I've ever read on Radha and Krishna. Radha's waiting for Krishna you described very well. The Dance drama was excellently written . The discussion about Draupadi and her life is conceptualized well. Waiting to read the next part.
Viswasruti
Madhuri @Viswasruti 5 years ago Riya , how lucky I am, without asketh, many blessings in my gift box !! . Thank you, Riya for your love and kind words for me and for my story .My friends are my strength because they are always there for me , and my weakness too , because I prefer to be a slave to all my good friends.
Viswasruti
Madhuri @Viswasruti 5 years ago Vibha, how lucky I am , for getting a pat on my back by one of the best editing experts in the country today, a person of a high caliber. Loved your critical appraisal regarding my storytelling style and the good words for my obsession regarding woman empowerment. In our Epics, Sita , Draupadi, and Radha were emerged as strong characters, shown their mettle while facing difficult situations on many occasions. How can I express my happiness for your presence here in mere words except hugging you with gratitude ?!!
Avyakta
Avyakta @Avyakta 5 years ago Madhuri, what to say about your writing style, it is purely a lyrical verse, while reading, the flow is smooth and the emotions are countless, your narrative has the power to carry your readers with you to show them those exotic natural scenes in person! You are interweaving many incidents of Radha and Krishna's life in the forms of dance drama and through narrating Uddhava's recollections. That added special beauty to the story. Great work Madhu didi , waiting for the next chapter.
Viswasruti
Madhuri @Viswasruti 5 years ago I always love your friendly nature, coming here to boost my writing spirit. Thanks once again.
Viswasruti2019-02-18 07:45:28
Viswasruti
Madhuri @Viswasruti 5 years ago Thank you Aarti for these encouraging words I was apprehensive while posting it , it is lengthy but was unable to stop myself because the demand is such and the eagerness to share my every thought with my readers is enormous. Thanks once again for liking my narrative.
riya_ss9
riya_ss9 @riya_ss9 5 years ago Madi, first Congrats. Very beautiful, emotionally gripping. You are a fantastic writer, the description of each scene is so dreamy. Keep up the good job . Will wait for the next.
vibraj
vibha @vibraj 5 years ago Omg Madi, this is like an epic, such an erudite treatise! Read it in rapt interest, loved everything about it, the flow of the narrative, the lateral movement of the plot, the sub plots exquisitely inserted so flawlessly to read like a simple whole, the emotions and imagery evoked, all make a siege on the senses!Adored the dance drama sequence and the way Draupadi's angst was subtly woven in, it was so natural as it is a Krishna story and yet you did not stray from the underlying theme of Radha's pining for Krishna. Her conversation with nature and their response is really spellbinding! And most of all encore to you on persistently highlighting the theme of women's plight and emancipation in all your chapters, nothing fictional, these stories were true in our epics and also so relevant today!Wonderful, way to go, girl, waiting for more, simply love the holistic touch you lend to your stories!
vibraj2019-02-16 21:16:39
TheSilverDoe
Aarti @TheSilverDoe 5 years ago Madhuri di . Again very very beautiful chapters.Radha's painful longing made my eyes wet. I loved the festival part. Especially the play. It was so beautiful . Radha asking flowers,trees and river about Krishna and all of them are lost in the love for Krishna was so beautifully. Description of Draupadi is perfect. I always love the friendship between her and Krishna. Keep it up Di
Viswasruti
Madhuri @Viswasruti 5 years ago With a swirl of emotions, Radha stared at the maidens for a probing moment! After a brief pause, the luminosity of a smile dawned on her lips. Continued on Page 8 for round 4 --
Viswasruti2019-03-15 07:49:24
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