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Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
And i am glad to know that Pikachu..Here you go my writing indexThe FF i mentioned is Behind the Masks and it still ongoing.. While i do have one another FF that completed.. You can read it whenever you want ... And no pressure to comment at all..So dont worry about it ..Sad to hear you are not feeling well..Hope you recover back soon ... Wishing you a speedy recovery ..Take care of yourself
357159pikachu @357159pikachu
7 years ago
[QUOTE=NitaReid][QUOTE=357159pikachu]Awesome one Nita! Really didn't expect it to go this way. I wish CVs were this intelligent too. But koi nahi! Swasan takkar track is also good. Thanks Pikachu ..Really happy to know you liked the OS..Yeah i had to choose this way to resolve the MU between them as i cant think how to change the present track into an happy ending..Cvs are too intelligent to torture us though... Well i like SwaSan centric track but my expectations with the track wont be satisified by our cvs and i am fully aware of that as wellAnd really Sanskar looked so Sanskar. He is perfect for Swara but that doesnt mean he has to perfect for all. Kudos to you! . I mean I cant really express it nicely.I really feel like i have lost the real sanskar i used to love in the show recently.So i am attempting to bring him back in my OS..Yes he is perfect for Swara but he is still him and he cant just change everything about who he is ..And Swara was back to being Swara Maheshwari again, sorry Swara Sanskar Maheshwari. The one whom we saw during the Kavita track. She fought for him against him. That was the Swara i have always wished for and you portrayed the same Swara over here. Really loved it.Yeah that is the Swara i loved..As during that time i know how much Sanskar meant to her ..Now sadly i cant connect with her ..So i had to bring back the old Swara i dearly loved..And i am really happy to know you loved it too PikachuAnd Swaragini serial obvisously has to roam around after the sister's bonding because it shows the love of sister's but I really wanted something on Sanskar's POV. And this is exactly what i wanted to read. Loved it. Do write some more as well if possible. Yeah Sister bond is over the top in all episodes recently..For two minutes of SwaSan we have to see the enitre episode .Poor us ... I too want sanskar pov so i wrote this one.And i am happy you felt it depicts Sanskar POV.. Well i still have to update my recent ongoing FF..So will try to somethi
ErangaMadhushani @Eranga 7 years ago Hey Nita, Don't say sorry.. I also have few stories of yours, yet to read.. (sorry, don't get that 'res', 'unres' thing in IF till now) And I'm bit worried as almost all SwaSan FF writers losing interest on Swara.. A girl I knew, who write beautiful SwaSan FFs, now writing Rag_San stories.. So please darling, whatever your frustration on Swara, put that on CVs and don't stop writing on SwaSan.. But my POV is different.. I know Sanskar's love for Swara is enough to forget what he did in past.. But I can't forget how easiely Swara forgave him, brought him to light from darkness.. Simply, the way she love the man who used her to exact revenge from his family.. In this whole journey, she never let him feel guilty for that, not even for a second. So I'm still on Swara's side. (sorry girl, not arguing. nor trying to change your view. jst my view) And Still I believe that CVs will give strong reason for Swara's actions, not any lame excuse like.. 'for Ragini'.. If not, I'll also start to hate Swara. Mmm.. let's see.. But again really thanks for this OSs.. It has some power to make me happy, when my mood goes off, bcoz of real Swaragini track..
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
And i think i have finally gotten around to reply back to all the lovely comments..Thanks guys for all the lovely comments and likes this was the first OS in this track and i wrote four more..So all my reply back were kind of delayed..So sorry about that.. And if i missed anyone lovely comment by mistake..Do let me know i will try to rectify that asap..LoveNita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
@Eranga dear- Will get back to your lovely comment asap..So sorry for the delayLoveNita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
@Razia, and Eranga- Sorry for the delay in replying back to your lovely comment guys..Will try to get back to them asapLoveNita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Thanks dear for the lovely comment..Really happy to know you liked the OS..Yeah I tried to balance out their flaws and reach an logical conclusion to the hurdle.. And i am happy that you liked it .. RP is shouting at Sanskar in the show..So nope no chances of that i guess.. I hope to write more ..Let see about that .. LoveNita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
[QUOTE=aamias]hi Nita u r such a sweet heart so well spoken I am quite jealous of u. I am not like u dearie I am really frustated with the track specially that MM hypocrites and Sanskar's behaviour with them. U potray the chars so well / Swasan conversation was so good it really touched my heart . I u showd both are imperfect and the way they settle things is so awww . i liked this story infact i loved this story will u send to honeymoon and
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Hi Asmita dear So Sorry for such a delay in replying back.. I am simply flattered by your comments.. And seriously how can you praise me a bit too much..Well i am frustrated with the track,way too much.. But somehow the OS turns out okay i suppose..And i am really happy about that ..Thanks dearest..I am really happy you liked the conversation.Conversation seems to be the only thing i write on all my works.To know you all like them does make me happy I love this pic.. You watch K drama too .. We all want SwaSan to be happy but current track makes me a sadist ..Hence my another OS... With LoveNita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
Guys i still got some lovely comments to reply..I will get to that tomorrow..So sorry for the delayLoveNita
Juanita @BlurredLines
+ 19
7 years ago
[QUOTE=357159pikachu]Awesome one Nita! Really didn't expect it to go this way. I wish CVs were this intelligent too. But koi nahi! Swasan takkar track is also good. Thanks Pikachu ..Really happy to know you liked the OS..Yeah i had to choose this way to resolve the MU between them as i cant think how to change the present track into an happy ending..Cvs are too intelligent to torture us though... Well i like SwaSan centric track but my expectations with the track wont be satisified by our cvs and i am fully aware of that as wellAnd really Sanskar looked so Sanskar. He is perfect for Swara but that doesnt mean he has to perfect for all. Kudos to you! . I mean I cant really express it nicely.I really feel like i have lost the real sanskar i used to love in the show recently.So i am attempting to bring him back in my OS..Yes he is perfect for Swara but he is still him and he cant just change everything about who he is ..And Swara was back to being Swara Maheshwari again, sorry Swara Sanskar Maheshwari. The one whom we saw during the Kavita track. She fought for him against him. That was the Swara i have always wished for and you portrayed the same Swara over here. Really loved it.Yeah that is the Swara i loved..As during that time i know how much Sanskar meant to her ..Now sadly i cant connect with her ..So i had to bring back the old Swara i dearly loved..And i am really happy to know you loved it too PikachuAnd Swaragini serial obvisously has to roam around after the sister's bonding because it shows the love of sister's but I really wanted something on Sanskar's POV. And this is exactly what i wanted to read. Loved it. Do write some more as well if possible. Yeah Sister bond is over the top in all episodes recently..For two minutes of SwaSan we have to see the enitre episode .Poor us ... I too want sanskar pov so i wrote this one.And i am happy you felt it depicts Sanskar POV.. Well i still have to update my recent ongoing FF..So will try to something new once i fi