Dil Sambhal Ja Zara

Dil Sambhal Ja Zara Completed G

CHAPTER 1 Members Only

Published On Thursday,Oct 22, 2020 11:12 AM GMT-06:00

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Evil_Flower_08
Evil_Flower_08 @Evil_Flower_08 3 years ago You know what di you write like pro author β™₯️ each scene seem real 😍and dilouge touch the core of heart 🌟 beautiful update and lovely concept just now go time to read this one thank you for all your PM πŸ€—
ariyabestfan
ariyabestfan @ariyabestfan 3 years ago Awsome update

Love it


Oh my god amruta ka accident ho gaya n she is brain dead..

Kya amruta ki maut me koi mystery he?I mean woh kuch hi minutes pehle Anika se takrayi n then accident hua..n Anika shayad mission par thi..


Yog is still hoping she will come back from this.

Sabhi usse samzane ki koshish karte he..

But of course yog galat nahi he..kisi apne ki ye halat ho toh unke liye jo pyar hota he woh hame umeed chodne nahi deta.. last moment tak hame hope rehta he ke doctor ya bhagwan usse bacha lenge..yog ke sath bhi yahi hua..

Anika ke heart par goli lagi while saving aayesha..

Sorry but muze samaz nahi aaya usake aakho ko kya hua..?

Yog finally realised ke he can give new birth to aamruta n aayesha both by donating amrita's organs..

Let's see if amrita's heart will recognise her yog or not..

Thanks for pm

Sorry for late comments
maaneetsangel
maaneetsangel @maaneetsangel 3 years ago Interesting.

Too emotional n painful.

Arpita is dead. But yog is not able to get over it.

He is gone half insane. In his stubborness he is holding her lifeless body.

But anika is injured n needs organ transplant.

Yog after lots of convincing agreed to let arpita's organs to be donated.
NainaSM
NainaSM @NainaSM 3 years ago Wowwww very nice yog loves amrita so much she is like this anika saved aisha but injured amrita donating her heart to anika ....battle between love and life ..... love win save a life .... continue soon
virmanfan013
virmanfan013 @virmanfan013 3 years ago Oh my God!!!!!!!!
Am just speechless.. the way you described each n every scene just awesome.. you know what right now am lacking of words.. I mean I am confuse where to start..
Right from the beginning to the end of this chapter i was completely hooked to it...
Aww poor yog feeling bad for him.. his love for Amrita and his emotions his pain of losing his love but his faith on his love and determination to get his love back was wonderfully described...
Aisha and anika's conversations was nice..
Ahhhhhh the way sameer made realized yog and greed him for transplant, his each and every dialogue directly hit to my heart..

"Main bhi dekhna chahta hoon k dil dil ko pehachanta hai ya chehra chehre ko" this dialogue was bang on..

Am already in for the next happy.. can't wait for long.. please hurry up
Thanx for the pm
Take care
T
Regards shivali
Disnhining_star
midnight_library @Disnhining_star 3 years ago Awesome πŸ‘ part .. just loved it 😍...Now Anika will cured..Hope Yogi or Anika ke beech baad mein sab thik ho jay..dil dil ko Pehchan le... continue soon πŸ˜€
NeeruNature
Jai shree krishna @NeeruNature 3 years ago Awesome part again hope he not misunderstood her continue soon thanx for pm
plmzaq
Ekta @plmzaq 3 years ago Awesome update. Love it. Cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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