PART 1 Yog drove like a maniac after a while few Kms away from her house he found that her cab had met with an accident and Amrita was laying unconscious in pool of her own blood making a chill ran down his spine. He finally collected himself and acted fast taking her to the hospital as fast as he could so that her condition remains stable, on the way he calls his senior a neurosurgeon as she was badly hit on her head informs at the hospital to be ready. Yog in haste with a numb mind made his way inside the hospital at the emergency and found out about the serious head injury and to recover from it she has to be ...
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Evil_Flower_08 @Evil_Flower_08
3 years ago
You know what di you write like pro author β₯οΈ each scene seem real πand dilouge touch the core of heart π beautiful update and lovely concept just now go time to read this one thank you for all your PM π€
ariyabestfan @ariyabestfan
+ 4
3 years ago
Awsome updateLove itOh my god amruta ka accident ho gaya n she is brain dead..Kya amruta ki maut me koi mystery he?I mean woh kuch hi minutes pehle Anika se takrayi n then accident hua..n Anika shayad mission par thi..Yog is still hoping she will come back from this.Sabhi usse samzane ki koshish karte he..But of course yog galat nahi he..kisi apne ki ye halat ho toh unke liye jo pyar hota he woh hame umeed chodne nahi deta.. last moment tak hame hope rehta he ke doctor ya bhagwan usse bacha lenge..yog ke sath bhi yahi hua..Anika ke heart par goli lagi while saving aayesha..Sorry but muze samaz nahi aaya usake aakho ko kya hua..?Yog finally realised ke he can give new birth to aamruta n aayesha both by donating amrita's organs..Let's see if amrita's heart will recognise her yog or not..Thanks for pmSorry for late comments
maaneetsangel @maaneetsangel
+ 2
3 years ago
Interesting. Too emotional n painful. Arpita is dead. But yog is not able to get over it. He is gone half insane. In his stubborness he is holding her lifeless body. But anika is injured n needs organ transplant. Yog after lots of convincing agreed to let arpita's organs to be donated.
NainaSM @NainaSM
+ 3
3 years ago
Wowwww very nice yog loves amrita so much she is like this anika saved aisha but injured amrita donating her heart to anika ....battle between love and life ..... love win save a life .... continue soon
virmanfan013 @virmanfan013
+ 5
3 years ago
Oh my God!!!!!!!!Am just speechless.. the way you described each n every scene just awesome.. you know what right now am lacking of words.. I mean I am confuse where to start..Right from the beginning to the end of this chapter i was completely hooked to it...Aww poor yog feeling bad for him.. his love for Amrita and his emotions his pain of losing his love but his faith on his love and determination to get his love back was wonderfully described...Aisha and anika's conversations was nice..Ahhhhhh the way sameer made realized yog and greed him for transplant, his each and every dialogue directly hit to my heart.."Main bhi dekhna chahta hoon k dil dil ko pehachanta hai ya chehra chehre ko" this dialogue was bang on..Am already in for the next happy.. can't wait for long.. please hurry upThanx for the pmTake careTRegards shivali
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
3 years ago
Anika got Amrita's heart. What a twist of fate!
rinku95 @rinku95
3 years ago
amazing continue soon thanks for pm
midnight_library @Disnhining_star
+ 2
3 years ago
Awesome π part .. just loved it π...Now Anika will cured..Hope Yogi or Anika ke beech baad mein sab thik ho jay..dil dil ko Pehchan le... continue soon π
Jai shree krishna @NeeruNature
+ 3
3 years ago
Awesome part again hope he not misunderstood her continue soon thanx for pm
Ekta @plmzaq
+ 2
3 years ago
Awesome update. Love it. Cont soon. Thanks for pm.