Part. 54.
M. Enough of your childish behaviour Neha Geet is my wife and that’s the truth which you need to accept it (saying this he pick up Geet in his arms and Neha can see how much caringly he hold her then she took him to her room. Maan notice it was clean but small store type room he was going to make Geet lay on the bed but before he could do she said him.
N. Sir make her lay down on floor bed (listening to this Maan give her look but she give him sad smile and said him) sir I want to her to sleep there on bed but she ask me never ask her to sleep there as she can’t afford as I am working of three of them so she said if I never agree with her then she will go away also I become selfish as first time someone call me dii and make relationships with me so how could I let her go as she is only my family so I agree with her so I request you to make her lay over there down please I can’t let her go please sir make her lay there (not having any option also listening to her Maan turn and make Geet lay on floor bed then he turn towards Neha was looking at Geet he said her.
M. Neha how much I thank you for saving my wife but it’s truth she is Geet my wife and now I am taking her with me (listening to this Neha felt pain in her heart as her only family is going then she look at Maan and ask him.
N. Sir if she is your wife then where were you when she need you also where were you when those men try to force himself on her that time she face trauma and when those all people point finger on her character also put point finger on her baby where were you in night she woke up felling scare and crying over her fate (Maan then said her.
M. I would have never leave her alone she is only mine (Neha then said him.
N. If she is yours then why did you leave her alone with those people who are worst then animals as animal stop their act when see you in pain but those person didn’t leave you until they fulfill their lust and in this they don’t care if other person die (listening to this Maan closed his eyes in pain but then she ask him) tell sir why you left her facing this (Maan open his eyes then said her.
M. I didn’t left her but she was kidnapped we all tried hard for 2 days later we were following the car in which she was kidnapped but that time car blast and it had her few things and she was declared dead (Neha was shock and said her.
N. When I found after coming back from work she was bruised, bleeding from nose, face also she was beaten with belt her situation scare me and when she woke up she was scare as any men scare her also she get scare from loud voices, for one month she was fully mute that time I know she can speak when she lose her conscious I took her to doctors there said she is pregnant that time it was first time I saw her smile and she said this is my and Maan Jii baby so from that time she is living for her baby also become cut from outer world as in this orphanage only I know that she can speak but for others she is mute girl (Maan was controlling himself listening what she had faced then he said her.
M. Neha I am taking my wife me and with her you are also coming (Neha said him.
N. No sir (Maan said in his soft voice.
M. You are my wife sister and I can’t leave you alone with these people also Geet will not like if you will be here alone so you will be transferred to Delhi branch where you will get apartment from company and working over there (Neha was shock she try to again say.
N. But sir (Maan cut her and said.
M. No if and but so get fresh and ready with me and Geet you are also coming till then I will handle outside (saying this he went out.
Neha tears fall from eyes feeling happy that she will leave this hell and now she will have her own her house she went near Geet where she kiss on her forehead then said her.
N. I didn’t know helping you I will get what I longed for long as you are my family and now your family saving you also saved me from this hell, I didn’t know I should be happy that I met you or curse that you had to faced this hard time (but then remembering Maan words she went to get fresh then went out.
Maan who went out saw few girls were scare but few girls were happy who is saving them from this hell then he call the authorities of orphanage and he brought this orphanage from them and it happened within few minutes as nothing is impossible for MSK. Warden was scare she try to talk with Maan sweetly but he make her arrested till then Karan come there he was shock to see this but when he ask from Prithvi who told him everything he was shock to know what happened here with girls also now he understood why Neha reacted when he held her but mostly he was happy that Geet is alive. Geet who woke up slowly but she was confused how she come here then she remembered she was had to faced that humiliations but then her Maan Jii saving her so she look here and there for him but when reality stuck her a sad smile come on her face and she thought.
G. Again same dream that Maan Jii is here to save me but why will be he here as I am dead for them (Geet clear her tears which fall from her face. Maan who had finish his work of orphanage then seeing Neha who nodded his head then he went inside and saw Geet had woke up also she was having sad smile on her face and cleaning her tears so he call her.
M. Geet (listening to her name Geet slowly turn back and she was shock to see Maan standing over there. She try to stand and somehow she stand then slowly move near him also he move near her and when he was near her Geet touch him and ask him.
G. You are in real (Maan cupped her face and said her.
M. Yes jaan I am real (then he hug her also she held him tightly they stay like this for few minutes when when reality stuck her she push him and said him.
G. You go away away I am Ria not Geet you go away (Maan was shock when she push him and said she is Ria not Geet, it angered him but he controlled himself as he need the answers from her why she lived this life but this Geet was also scare seeing his look.
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umaa @uluvmg
+ 2
3 years ago
wonderful update...maan came to know geet's was going through terrific situations as narrated by neha... wow maan told neha to accompany with geet to Delhi... very nice to see maan arrested the culprit warden ...geet was thinking like dream to see maan near to her... but when realised about reality she refused to accept it and told maan about her identity as Ria... very well written..!!
Taahir @taahir004
+ 10
3 years ago
Fantastic Chapter . Neha explains Maan how she found Geet and she also ask him why he left her alone to which he says Geet was kidnapped then there was a blast and they all thought she is dead because the person in the car had all Geet's belongings . Geet at first was overwhelmed with feelings knowing Maan is real but then she pushes him away saying Geet is dead and she is Ria
drishti.k @drishti.k
3 years ago
Oh! It was nice... Maan & neha convo. Maan is taking neha along with them... She's happy that because of geet she's getting this much of respect... Geet woke up.. & saw maan... She's happy but thought that a hallucination...
Sneha @neasya
+ 4
3 years ago
Amazing parts dear loved reading them.....Geet got kidnapped and she had such a worst phase..... Maan and others think geet is dead.... Geet is pregnant wow.... Neha is such a sweetheart..... Maan found geet now geet will be fine now and Maan will also be happy.... Will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon and thank you for the pm....
chauhan1796 @chauhan1796
3 years ago
thanks for pm dear superb update Maan not only saved Geet but he also save Neha along with other Girls .Geet gain her consciousness but she thought that she is again dreaming but soon realize the reality waiting for next
jeyanthi123 @jeyanthi123
+ 5
3 years ago
Superb update Loved it Neha relieved how she met geet and how she suffered alot ...Maan s offering to take neha with him to delhi ...Maan bought the orphanage in his name and maan s still waiting for geet answer y she did not return back to them...Continue soonWaiting
MA1970 @MA1970
+ 4
3 years ago
Lovely update. Maan takes over the orphanage gets the warden arrested. Takes a decision of taking Neha long with Geet to Delhi to give a respectable job and a home. Neha is happy that because of Geet she will get a better life. Maan wants to know why Geet didn't comeback. Waiting for the next update.
hahajaja @hahajaja
3 years ago
Thanks for PM.Nice update.Maan took the right decision for Neha too. She will also get a new life with Geet.Looking forward to the next.Update soon.
janu2006 @janu2006
+ 3
3 years ago
Lovely part Maan finally met GeetWaiting for his reaction now as Geet said this to him Cont soon
Jasmine @jasminerahul
+ 8
3 years ago
good that maan thanked neha n assured her security by getting the warden arrested n releasing all the girls.geet seeing maan was emotional. but why is she still lying that she is rhea? mindblowing pics n gif