Part 20
[On the day of Semis, at the venue.]
Rey: So guys ready?
Gang: Yes! Let's kill it!
(Niki spots Shivam hiding somewhere behind. Shivam is unaware that Rey has agreed to give him a chance)
Niki (Running and hugging Shivam): I'm sooo happy chocopie!
(The gang except TaaRey and SwaRon are confused seeing this)
Shivam: Kishmish, tum sabke saamne mujhe hug kyun kar rahi ho? Look even Rey is watching us. Vo firse naraz ho jayega.
Niki: I'm so dumb! Mein toh tumhe batana bhool hi gayi ki Yansh has agreed to our relationship.
Rey: Haan Shivam, Nik sahi keh rahi hai. I'm giving you a chance. I hope you..
Shivam (cutting him): I won't let you down!
Taani: Guys baate baadmein bhi ho sakti hai. Jao aap sab ke performance ka time ho gaya hai.
[St. Louis was next up on stage. They mesmerized everyone present in the auditorium. Their dance reflected pure friendship. The judges were left speechless after their performance. They gave standing ovation to them.]
*in Green Room*
Sharon: Now just one step away!
Gang: Kya?
Swayam: She means, we are just one step away, and then we'll be the National Dance Champions!
Rey: Yes guys! This last performance has to create a mark!
Taani (entering the room): Guys! Guys! Guys! I have a good news!
Vicky: Kya!
Nil: Itne jaldi?
ReYam: Shut up guys!
Rey: Taani you continue.
Taani: Mujhe abhi pata chala hai ki jo bhi team NDC jeetegi vo team ek talent managing company ke saath ek contract sign karegi..and then there'll be concerts and all arranged for the winning team!
Rey: Wow!
Niki: That's
Swayam: Totally
Sharon: Awesome!
Simmi: Exactly! Our futures would be set if we win it!
Rey: Common guys let's do this together! For dance!
Swayam: For our career!
[They shared a group hug. Soon the results were announced. And as per the expectations St. Louis Team got selected. They all left the venue.]
*In the Bus*
Rey: Taani?
Taani: Haan Rey?
Rey: Tum kuch khoyi khoyi si lag rahi ho?
Taani: Rey vo actually..
Rey: Yes.. (persuades her to speak up)
Taani: Mein soch raahi thi ki mein event management mein apna career banau.
Rey: That's a brilliant idea!
Taani: But kya mein?
Rey: Trust me Taani, you'll be wonderful!
Taani: Thanks Rey! Erm.
Rey: Shivam is also doing the same thing right?
Taani: Aapko kaise pata chala?
Rey: Abh mein tumhe itna toh jaanta hun ki tumhara mind read kar saku.
Taani: Ek aur baat hai.
Rey: Kya?
Taani: Mujhe wahan aaj apply karne jaana hoga.
Rey: So aaj hum mil nahi paayenge?
Taani: Hmn.
Rey: Upset mat ho. Tumhare selection ki jamm ke treat lunga!
(Taani hits him lightly on his arms.)
[Soon they reach college. As soon as they reach, they are called into VP sir's cabin.]
VP: Congratulations on your win!
Vicky: Asli win to abhi baaki hai sir!
VP: Correct Vicky! Aur meine tumhe usi ke baare mein kuch batane ke liye bulaya hai.
Swayam: Kya sir?
VP: NDC ke authorities ne kuch decision liya hai.
Sharon: Kaisa?
VP: Finals kal hi honge!
Gang: What!
Rey: But sir aise atchanak schedule change kyun kiya?
Simmi: Yeh sir. Why all of a sudden?
VP: Voh dekhna chahate hai ki tum sab kam time mein kaise manage karte ho.
Rey: Cool then! Let's show them what all we can do!
(everyone smiled)
Shivam: Guys, get to work!
Taani: Yeah! You just have a few hours!
Swayam: Yeh few hours bhi bohot hai. What say guys?
(Everyone hooted and said yes)
Neha: Tomorrow burning stage we are!
Gang: Kya?
Vicky: She means ki kal hum stage pe aag laga denge!
Bharat: Stage ko phad denge!
Rey: Stage ko phadne aur aag lagane ka kaam baadmein karenge. Pehle dance pe concentrate kare?
[They went in the rehearsal hall]
Niki: Shivam and Taani kahin dikhayi nahi de rahe hai.
Rey: Voh dono bahar gaye hai.
(Everyone started staring at him)
Rey: What? Mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho?
Vicky: Shivam..
Nil: Taani ke saath..
Amar: Aul tumhe..
Bharat: Koich farak nahi pad raha?
Boys (together): Shocking!
(Niki and SwaRon giggled at their statement)
Rey: Tum logo ki bakwas khatam ho gayi ho toh hum rehearse kare?
[All agree. They keep practicing till late night. At sometime in midnight they decide to take rest as it will be a tiring day. They go home and sleep.]
*At TaaYam's Place*
Swayam: Taani tum aaj kaha thi?
Taani: Bhai aap aa gaye? Ho gayi rehearsals?
Swayam: Haan sab ho gaya. Waise tum gayi kahan thi?
Taani: Mein aap sabko kal bataungi. Abhi bohot late ho gaya hai. Aap so jayiye. Kal bohot bada din hai sabke liye.
Swayam: Alright. Tum bhi so jao.
Taani: Ji bhai. (and goes into her room.)
*At NikAnsh's Place*
Niki (on phone): Kahan the tum? You didn't even inform me before leaving.
Shivam: Sorry sweetheart, thodi jaldi me hi chala gaya.
Niki: But gaye kaha the?
Shivam: Mein event management mein apna career banana chahata hoon. So aaj usi ke liye apply karne gaya tha.
Niki: Wow that's cool! Taani bhi wahi karne wali hai?
Shivam: Haan, but tumhe kaise pata chala?
Niki: Yansh bol raha tha ki tum dono saath gaye the.
(Rey was hearing the conversation from outside her room.)
Rey: Aur mein abh yeh keh raha hoon ki tumhe sona chahiye.
Niki: Kyun? Tum toh aise bol rahe ho as if tum Taani 'bhabhi' se raat ko baat nahi karte.
Rey: Itni late toh nahi karta.
(Rey cell beeps and shows a message)
Niki: Baat nahi but chat karte ho right?
Rey: Nik.
Niki: Atcha buhba, bye chocopie. Kal milte hai.
Shivam: Good night kishmish!
Rey: Lights off in 5 mins!
Niki: Yes sir!
[Rey comes out of her room and checks his cell. It shows a message from Taani wishing him 'Good Night'. He replies the same to her and then drifts off to sleep.]
*On the day of NDC Finals*
(Everyone is confidant on their dance, but are too nervous. Taani comes to wish them luck.)
Rey: Kahan thi tum Taani?
Taani: Sorry vo mujhe late ho gaya.
Niki: Abh raat bhar chatting chalu hogi toh yeh sab hoga hina!
Taani: Mein kuch samjhi nahi.
Rey: Nik shut up!
Niki: What shut up? Kal Taani ka hi message aaya tha na?
Rey: Haan but hum raat bhar chat nahi kar rahe the like you..
Niki: Like me?
Rey: Abh jhut mat bolna ki mere nikalne ke baad you were not talking.
Niki: Haan I was chatting. Kya kar loge tum?
Sharon: GUYS! Yeh sab baad mein bhi ho sakta hai.
Niki: What did I do? Sab Yansh ki galati hai.
Rey: Meri?
Niki: Whatever!
Taani: Guys chill!
Swayam: Before they start again, I guess we should go. Humara dance next hai.
Shivam (to Taani): Inn dono ko dekh kar kaun bolega ki they are siblings!
Taani: Iss jhagde mein bhi pyaar chupa tha. Both love each other a lot.
Shivam: Niki hai hi aisi ki har kisi ko usse pyaar ho jata hai.
Taani: Ohho someone is blushing.
Shivam: Lets go warna hum inka dance miss kar denge.
[The team's dance makes everyone get up and dance on their seats. The audience is swaying and dancing. The dance ends but the applauds don't stop! The team takes a bow and leaves the stage. The team waits in the green room for the results. After sometime they are called on stage.]
Host: Here I have the name of the winning team. Any guesses audience who is it?
Audience: St. Louis!
Host: Yes! St. Louis team is the National Dance Champion!!
Gang: Whooohooo! (Everyone hugs each other.)
Host: toh guys app sabko pata hi hoga ki en talent managing company aapke saath ek contract sign karne wali hai. Toh uske liye aapki team ko ek naam dena hoga. So you guys decide and let us know.
Rey: Humari team ka already ek naam hai!
Vicky: Yes!
Host: Aur vo kya hai?
Gang: D3!
Host: Cool name! lets have a huge round of applauds for Team D3!
Phew.
Itna bada update shayad hi kabhi diya hoga meine.
Posted: August 28, 2013
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Shweta @2111_shweta
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10 years ago
The following 42 member(s) liked the above post:, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Thanx a lot guys for liking the update and also for commenting
Shweta @2111_shweta
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10 years ago
[QUOTE=ziya_taarey]hey ek leap mat lo...so soon???? nope...show deep frndshi blw shivam n gang...taarey beech ups n downs...swaron ke bare main kuch...u no...then u take a leap... agar idea accha laga toh srsly lo warna ignore... :P :P
waise dhamakedaar update..!!!![/QUOTE]
Idea toh mera aisa hi kuch karneka haiBas sabke POV janana chahati thiand don't worry I'm not taking a leap
Shweta @2111_shweta
+ 5
10 years ago
No prob..and I have already decided as to what to do...
Shweta @2111_shweta
+ 5
10 years ago
Thanx for reading and liking this too
Ziya Khan @ZiyaGautamholic
+ 2
10 years ago
hey ek leap mat lo...so soon???? nope...show deep frndshi blw shivam n gang...taarey beech ups n downs...swaron ke bare main kuch...u no...then u take a leap... agar idea accha laga toh srsly lo warna ignore... :P :P
waise dhamakedaar update..!!!!
Alefiya Magar @alef_mgr
+ 2
10 years ago
M sowie di me bhul gayi I think I will go wid 2nd option Rest is yua wish...!!
Gourav @Shubh007
+ 3
10 years ago
Awsome story and updates... Read in one go and really like it... ..Now waiting nxt part so update soon... ..And pm me when u update...
parudTRsandhir @parudTRsandhir
+ 3
10 years ago
awesome update...loved niki n shivams flashback...n i loved the 1st option...plzzz update soon...
Shweta @2111_shweta
+ 5
10 years ago
Thanx..Answer toh bata deti..
Shweta @2111_shweta
+ 5
10 years ago
[QUOTE=dh19]nice and cute updateits your story what ever you choose will be the best so pls. do cont.
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ThanxI've kinda got it how to continue..so will do it soon...