Originally posted by: notaquitter
Loved it, loved the twist in the end β€οΈ
I really crossed fingers so that no one gets the twist till the very end. π³ Thanks π
Originally posted by: notaquitter
Loved it, loved the twist in the end β€οΈ
I really crossed fingers so that no one gets the twist till the very end. π³ Thanks π
Originally posted by: linakusharberry
Awesome OS
Loved it dear
So sai was pregnant , I really felt bad for them what they have to go through
Thanks π
Maybe if they knew they were going to be parents, things would be different. π€ π
Superb ππΌ
Sai is pregnant but she is not ready to accept Virat in her life again π₯Ί
Originally posted by: ssoujanya
Soo...heart-touching.....β₯.... loved it....
He broke Sai to extreme and now both are suffering.....both are in pain...
Virat's question is valid regarding their child...he deserves to know....
Please write next part to it.... how virat will win Sai back and how she will continue her studies etc.,
If you are OK the also write about chavan's reform and regret their behaviour......
Keep writing more....
Thanks a lot π³
Yes he did and now she will keep him away.
I will try to write about the next three months of pregnancy if I get time.
And then if I get time I will think about the Chavan redemption and reform.
Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion
Thanks a lot π³
Yes he did and now she will keep him away.
I will try to write about the next three months of pregnancy if I get time.
And then if I get time I will think about the Chavan redemption and reform.
@bold Thanks for thinking....
But please write about their reunion if possible...
Originally posted by: ssoujanya
@bold Thanks for thinking....
But please write about their reunion if possible...
Maybe in the next one it will be Sai's anger and his repentace. And the next one with reunion and family reform. Just an idea. π³
loved it muguet. sai standing on her own feet and being strong for herself and her baby was the highlight of the os to me. i felt bad that virat came to know about his child like this. i want to see him work towards her forgiveness. please continue soonβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Thank you. β€οΈ
I really wanted her to succeed in her life without anyone's help.
Would love to write that part too.
Originally posted by: sairat07
Wow writer!! It is just amazing..πππ
U know what I guessed that she must be pregnant when Usha maushi told her to wait for 3 months to start her journey towards her dream... And yeah it was right!! So beautifully u have penned it...Mast ha mast!!!
It was one of the most awesome OS I have gone through!!!
And as we know u make them more interesting with ur twists!!! Looking forward to get more from u...And ha please update ur FF also!!
Thank you β€οΈ
I gave a lot of hints like Usha saying to wait three months and when during the phone convo she was having pain. She called the baby as cute monster but Virat thought it was the cat. π
Oh that means a lot. π€
True I like to give a twist.
Will try to write more. π
Originally posted by: fatssrilanka
A very heart touching OS. Loved it. But, the ending was sad.
Thanks !
Sad but with hopes that things will get better. π³
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