SaiRat OS : Lost Six Months Of Happiness - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Awesome OS 

Loved it dear 

So sai was pregnant , I really felt bad for them what they have to go through 

Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Very good. do continue 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Omg such a a heartwarming story. Sai could totally Do this! 

I liked the dialogues and the story placement. Great work πŸ‘


didn’t expect this heavy story from the person who posts funny gifs. You are an all rounder πŸ‘


I loved writing the bhagodi Sai. πŸ˜†

Glad you liked the dialogues because I love writing what hurts. πŸ€£

Haha thank you. πŸ˜³ Yes I have a serious, sadist, evil side too. πŸ˜ˆ And romantic too. β˜ΊοΈ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Soo...heart-touching.....β™₯.... loved it....

He broke Sai to extreme and now both are suffering.....both are in pain...

Virat's question is valid regarding their child...he deserves to know....

Please write next part to it.... how virat will win Sai back and how she will continue her studies etc.,

If you are OK the  also write about chavan's reform and regret their behaviour......

Keep writing more....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

loved it muguet. sai standing on her own feet and being strong for herself and her baby was the highlight of the os to me. i felt bad that virat came to know about his child like this. i want to see him work towards her forgiveness. please continue soon❀️❀️❀️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Wow writer!! It is just amazing..😍😍😍

U know what I guessed that she must be pregnant when Usha maushi told her to wait for 3 months to start her journey towards her dream... And yeah it was right!! So beautifully u have penned it...Mast ha mast!!!

It was one of the most awesome OS I have gone through!!!

And as we know u make them more interesting with ur twists!!! Looking forward to get more from u...And ha please update ur FF also!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Wildreaper

Beautiful ❀️ Loved it ❣️

 

Thank you. β€οΈ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

So beautiful.... Sai is pregnant, their desperation for each other is very well written... I really hope Isa koi track ho. Thaki Hume bhi chavan niwas , Kaku gang mainly Didi see chutti mele


When I got the idea I didn't think about the pregnancy but thought it would be nice to give a twist at the very last of the OS. πŸ˜†

I would love to see a track where both are away from CV for some days. πŸ˜† Even if it's for 2 days. πŸ˜†

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

A very heart touching OS. Loved it. But, the ending was sad. 

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion


When I got the idea I didn't think about the pregnancy but thought it would be nice to give a twist at the very last of the OS. πŸ˜†

I would love to see a track where both are away from CV for some days. πŸ˜† Even if it's for 2 days. πŸ˜†

Yes, I hope so too. I think both deserve a couple of days without the presence of the Chakrams.