Thanks Alisha! 🤗Originally posted by: fitoori_kudi
Amazing writing shruti 🤗
Now hope aisa kuch show mein bhi dekhne ko mile 😆
Thank you so much! 😃Originally posted by: sneha_17
Well written, Prerna guilt, desperation superb.
Respect and being cordial with each other might be a good start
Love is too soon..
Wonderful OS and brilliant writing
Dil maange more... keep writing
Thanks a lot, Ramya! 😃OMG. This is brilliant Shruti. And you wrote this in an hour👏.
The beginning explaining her guilt, restlessness, fear for him, she is as if in some trauma, looking him like this in the ICU. The calmness and solace she gets in his presence even when he is unconscious.
I loved how she was about to say I was scared, but changed to Kuki was scared. And the way she assured him that Kuki is safe and is waiting for him so that he would recover soon.
The ending❤️. She wondered what she meant to him, a wife or a caretaker of his daughter.
Thank you so much! 😃It's really beautiful.its beyond amazingly feels good when prerna normalised her Racing heart by hearing his heart beat.in unconscious state too he is soothing her !last part where she determined to make herself a worthy wife is really very endearing. Thanks
Thank you so much, Blues! 😃Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
Shruti!
REs
Edited!
Finally caught up to this!
Okay, there are so many unsaid things among them and you have captured the essence of it wonderfully. The confusion and the unasked, unanswered questions are heightening the emotions.
I love the question posed in end. This was absolutely wonderful. Keep them coming Shruti.
Love❤️
Thank you so much! 😃Loved it, beautifully written :)
Thanks a lot! 😃Originally posted by: Breezi11197
WHAT BAJAJ TO SAVE PRERNA AND BE IN HOSPITAL WHERE HAVE YOU READ IT ?????p.s truly amazing OS had all my heart
This OS came after we discussed our predictions when the hospital BTS came out.
I love this feedback! ❤️Originally posted by: ZaBeerHolic
Sheer poetry in motion.. ❤️
Thanks!
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