PreRish One-Shot: The Smell of Dread and Guilt

Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Reserved. 

Unressing 

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Shrutiiiii what did you write ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👏

This was wonderful ❤️❤️❤️❤️💜💜💜💜💜💜😘😘😘😘 

First things first, I loved how she got a panic attack and how you handled that  so effortlessly yet effectively. One is bound to face such traumatizing attacks Especially when thrown into such life & death situation and then the guilt of having someone else, Especially when it is your husband even if Naam ke wastey, to be the victim instead. 

Second how she assured him that his daughter was safe with her mom. 💜❤️ Ofc how she took as much care gave him as much comfort as possible in the situation / position he was in, allowed her to. ❤️💜  

& The last. How she wondered and pondered upon who she meant to him and how she would prove him her worth for he had saved her from a near death situation. ❤️💜🧡💚💛♥️

This was BEYOND BEAUTIFUL. I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU COULD CHURN SOMETHING AS BEAUTIFUL AS THIS OUT IN SUCH A SHORT SPAN OF TIME. 

COMMENDABLE

 👏👏👏👏 

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Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Shruti, it was very quick and awesome👏

Prerna placed her head upon his chest and gently clutched both his shoulders, and felt her racing heartbeat normalize upon uniting with his tranquil heart. - ❤️

Edited by shin-chan - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Absolutely amazing 😉 👏👏thank u so so much dear ❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏

Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ....❤️ I cud so visualise the whole OS ❤️

Posted: 4 years ago

 Shruti you just laid out Prerna's heart   .. it's beautiful ❤️

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Wistfulness


Yeh unres hoga bhi ya nahin? 😆

apne manga aur hum na de?  🤗 Check kar li jiye Image

Also 

 OS and and and 

^  took me last 15 minx to locate this 😂😂😂

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

shru🤗

this was awesome.. plss continue..

wann read more

Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful♥♥ , you put her feeling in your words in a,efficient manner♥

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